My first story about virman part 13

Part 1: page 1
Part 2: page 2
Part 3: page 3
Part 4: page 4
Part 5: page 4
Part 6: page 5
Part 7: page 6
Part 8: page 6
Part 9: Page 7
Part 10: page 9
Part 11: part 10.
Part 12: page 11
Part 13 page 12



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Part 1

Maavi was going back to chandighar and everyone was bidding her farewel.
Maavi: Di, call me everyday and Jiju please reming Di to call me because you know how forgetful Di is.
Jeevika:Maanu...how can you say that me forgetful i will never forget to call you...
They hug each other so tightly like they have met after 100hundres years.
Whie hugging each other Maanvi realised that she had not said goodbye to virat as...
Maanvi:(in her thought) Where has this chep gone... and yet im his best friend and he hasn't come to sy bye to me... :L usually he pulls my leg when im going back home but tody he can't be seen anywhere...
Jeevika:Maanvi take everyones care and give badi biji and daabu a big hug from me.
Maanvi:Ji Di...Di i have forgetton something in the room i'll just go and get it...
Jeevika nods her head.
*****Manvi in her room*****
In her thoughts: Whats wrong with virat..? where is he...? Why am i bothered if he doesn't come and meet me its not like im going to miss him... when she thught of this she felt a sharp pain in her heart...Virat walks into her room...
Maanvi: VIRAAT!!!! im not talkig to you go away from here...
Virat still quite
Maanvi: Virat yaar...whats wrong...?
Virat: nothing Maanvi and aren't you meant to be gone by now..?
Maanvi: Oh yes i forget something so i came to get that...
Maanvi and virt stare into each others eyes...
Until Jeevika came and interupted their moment..
Jeevika: Maanvi hurry up or you are going to iss your train the driver is outside waiting for you...Virat how come your here...?
At the same time Maanvi also thought about why he was there too...
Virat: Actually bhabi i was really really tried after going to office with Bhai and Chachu that i wanted to sleep but i think because of the triedness i walked into the wrong room...
Jeevika: Oh okay...
Maanvi knew tht he was lying he wasn't there because of his triedness bt something else was troubling him...
I hope you liked it please tell me wht you think and leave comment and if you like it i shall write some more otherwise i wont so please tell me what you think...thank you

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Virat walks out of the room. Jeevika and Maanvi go out the room together.
Maanvi:Okay bye di...
Everyone waves goodbye to her. On her journey to home Maanvi has flashbacks about her and Virats every moment that they spent together...Suddenely she realised that sharp pain in her heart again. She had felt the same sharp pain when Virat said to her that he will not miss her...
Maanvi:(talking to herself)... Oh god what is happening to me whenever virat is in pain why is it that i feel his pain too...why is it that even if virat never said bye to me it was like my whole world was about to shatter...why? Whats wrong with me...?
While thinking about virat she got home in no time.. she was greeted at the train station by her Chachu and Daabu..
Daabu:MAANVI DI!!!!
Maanvi:Chachu...who told you to bring this Daabi along with you if you were to bring someone along with you, you should have brought Badi Biji as Daabi doens't love me anymore but instead he loves the neighboroughs daughter...(sorry i dont know what she is called...)
Daabu:Maanvi Di...this is not fair i came because i love you and if you loved someone else i bet you that you would love them more than me...huh
Maanvi: (thinks of virat)
Daabu:Maanvi Di...look at you, you are still not here in Hrishikesh but instead you are still in chandgighar...Look papa Maanvi doesn't love me...
Chachu:Daabu beta...Maanvi does love you but she is tried after all she has come all this was from Chandighar...
Maanvi:(Agreeing with Chachu) Yes Daabi i love you so much that i even brought you 10Daaba of sweets...
Daabu:Really Maanvi Di...
Maanvi:Yes Dabbu...
Chachu:Come on lets go home now or do you want to stay here in the station...
Maanvi:no no no no lets go home i'm starving and i miss biji's paratha...
****Back in Chandighar****
Jeevika:Virat come on time to eat dinner or otherwise you will not get it...
Virat:You go bhabi i will get Maanvi and come with her otherwise she will have to stay hungry too...
Jeevika:Virat...
Virat:Ji bhabi...
Jeevika:I think you are forgetting that Maanvi has gone home today...
Virat: Oh yeah sorry i forget, its just that she has stayed here for a long time and it seems like she is still here...
Jeevika:Your right earlier when i was about to make tea i nearly called her to get tea too but then i remembered that she is not here...
There are now tears in Jeevika's eyes...
Virat:Bhabi come on you have me and i'm better than that monkey...
Jeevika: Virat dont call me sister a monkey...
Virat:Ooohh dont forget that you are now my Bhabi...
Jeevika:Ooops i had forgot that i was actually your Bhabi thank you for reminding me...*laughs*
Virat: Bhabi you are so funny...let me just go and tell bhai...
Jeevika:Virat no you wont...come its time to eat otherwise i will have to stay hungery and so will you and if i stay hungry then i will become like Maanvi and eat you whole...
They leave to eat dinner...
****Back in Hrishekish*****
Everyone has finished their dinner and Maanvi is in her home and going through all the picture that she toke while she was in chandighar...but when she came across Virat and her photo she feels like her half is missing...
Maanvi:(Talking to the picture) What are you doing to me that everytime im near you my hearbeat goes faster and faster and when i'm away from you my heart ahes...why? What have you done to me...
She keeps staring at the picture until she is disturbed by her phone...
Maanvi: Virat!?
Maanvi answers the phone...
Virat:Hello..Maanvi i...i...i...have to tell you something...
There's a long pause...
Maanvi:What is it chep...
Virat:Maa...Maanvi...i...i...
Sorry i couldn't finish it i'll try to write some more later please leave a comment on what you think...

awww cliffhanger. waiting fior next part please pm me when u update.

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