My first story about virman part 13 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice updt dear pm me wen u do nxt...
Egerly waitng...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Sassi1

Part 1

Maavi was going back to chandighar and everyone was bidding her farewel.


Going back to Rishikesh you mean?

Btw.. Nice start... Pls update 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Sorry
But I don't know how to pm
Please don't laugh
Just help me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Great start
loved it
cont soon and plz do pm me!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15

its lovely start

do cntinue soon and deffoo pm me 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Sassi1

Sorry
But I don't know how to pm
Please don't laugh
Just help me

aww dear there is nthng to laugh
i was also like you dnt wrry
go to compose message
then to whom u wanna send put name in username then write somethng in subject {its must}
then type ur msg or link and send
or
simply like you wanna pm me below my comment there will be option for pm click on that u will get it
all d best 😃
Edited by snehamaanvirman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Tremendous start do continue and update sooner and longer... God knows what must be troubling my dear virat...
Please pm me when u update
Keep up wiv the awesome work
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Sassi1

Sorry
But I don't know how to pm
Please don't laugh
Just help me


It's all good hun... everyone has to learn sometime! The easiest way to PM for updates is probably to hit the PM button on the bottom of everyone's post and post in the link to the new update.
Another way you could do it is by adding all the people who want PMs as a 'Buddy' (also a button on the bottom of their post). And then once they have approved the request, you can send everyone a PM at the same time. for this method, you would go to the Inbox (a letter symbol on the top of all IF pages) and then "compose message". There should be a list of all your buddies, which you can select and type a message body and hit send!
Hope that helped!

Anyways, your fic has a great start... And a killer cliffhanger on the last part! Do continue soon. And if you do send up sending PMs for updates, I would like one too 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maanvi's heart was beating fast it was like she wanted to hear something that she has been longing for ages ago.Maanvi was now losing her patients...
Maavi:Hurry up and speak i have loads of other work to do...
Virat:Maanvi i..i...i...i got a job...
Maavi:What!?...
Virat:What do you mean by what...? I got a job is that hard for you to understand...
Sorry this is a short update but i have guest over i hope you understand... but dot worry i'll try to write some more soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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There was a log silence. Virat was thinking about his job and how he can live all by himself without anyone telling him what to do and Maanvi was thinking about what she expected to hear but still she never knew what she wanted to hear. The silence was now irratating Maanvi...
Maanvi:Oye chep...
Virat:Ji...
Maanvi:The person who gave you the job must be an idoit...*Maanvi laughs*
Virat:Vey funny...actually the person who gave me the job was Mr Vivek Chopra...
Maanvi froze hearing that name...
Virat:Maanvi...?
Maanvi:Virat ill talk to you later...
She quickly shuts the phone. Maanvi goes back into a flashback
*****Flashback*****
Vivek:Maanvi your here...
Maanvi:Who else did you expect...
Vivek walks towards Maanvi and presents here a...
She is brought back into the reality by a knock...
Biji:Maanvi beta go and see who is at the door...
Maanvi:Ji biji...
She opens the door and find a bouquet of flowers. They weren't any natural flowers but they were Maanvi's favourite flowers.Only a few people knew what flowers Maanvi like her family, her di and Vivek...
Biji:Maanvi beta who is it...Where did these flowers come from...?
Maanvi: I don't know...
Biji:Oh okay... someone must have delievered them at the wrong house...doesnt matter.
Maanvi knew who they were from...
Maanvi:(In her thoughts) He is back...But why...? She is stood there looking down at the floor until her phone rings...
Maanvi:What does this chep what now...
Virat:Oh Bandari... Why did you shut the phone on me...?
Maavi felt the sting in her heart again...
Virat:You know i hate it when you put the phone down on me...
Maanvi:Why..?Why do you hate it...?
Virat:Because your my best friend and when my best friend is upset i can feel her pain...
Maanvi:(In her thoughts)How can he know how i feel...?
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