My first story about virman part 13 - Page 3

Amazing hun i think maanvi loves virat but she doesnt recognise her feelings as love...omg who is this vivek?? I hope its nt a love triangle between virman am the vivek dude...
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wow this is so awesome yaar. keep up the good work dear

Maanvi knew it wasn't like tht because when she had a best friend in college she couldnt tell if they were in pain or hurt or happy so how can he say if they were in pain...
Maanvi: (In her thoughts) how can he say if me, maanvi chaudry is in pain...? Am i in pain...?
Virat:Oye, Monkey tell your partner whats wrong..?
Maavi:Nothing Virat...
Virat:Don't lie Maanvi tell me whats bothering you...?
Maanvi: Nothing Virat how do i tell you that...?
Virat: Maavi there is a reason im you partner now tell me...
Maanvi:Actuall virat there is something...
Virat:Mmm...
Maavi:Actaully the thing is...(gets cut off)
Biji:Maanvi beta...
Maanvi:Virat Biji is calling me i have to go...
Virat: Maa...
Maanvi shuts the phone on him again...
****In chandighar****
Virat is talking to himself...
Virat: Maanvi why do you always leaving me hanging...and whats wrong with you...why do i feel like you are hiding something from me...Is it something to do with Vivek...
****Flashback****
Virat:Mr Vivek Chopra...
Maanvi:What!?...No virat..i..i mean how do you know him...?
***back in reality***
Virat:What did you mean by when you said "no Virat"...what did you mean...
His phone rings...
Virat:Hello...
Maya: Hello virat...
Virat:How many times have i told you not to call me...
Maya:Virat atleast listen to me...
Virat:Quick i don't have time...
Maya: I have got a job at the music industries...
Virat:And whas that got to do with me...
Maya:I spoke to Mr vivek chopra and he give me your number so that you write the lyrics and i sing them...
Virat:What!?
I shall try to write some more soon...

Next part:

Maya:Trust me Virat i told the boss that you wouldn't like workig with me...
Virat:I don't care if you like it or not but i seriously ain't going to work with you...
Virat shuts the phone on Maya...
Virat:(Talking to himself)...Why does this happen to me everytime i'm about to succed in life something always come in between...

****Back in Hrishkesh*****
Biji:Maanvi beta hurry up...
Maanvi:Ji Biji..(Talking to herself)...this Biji will never let me finish anything off and on the other hand that Mr Chopra is back...
Biji:Hurry up beta we have a party to go to...
After a few minutes they are all ready to go to the party...
Dabbu:Biji...?
Biji:Speak dabbu beta...
Dabbu:Who's party are we going to...?
Biji:We are going to your nephews birthday party...
Dabbu:Oh okay...Biji?
Biji:now what...(getting irratated)
Maanvi:Oye, Daabi can't you stay quiet for 5mins...
Dabbu:sorry Maanvi di...
Maanvi:Ssshhh...
They have now reached the parties location...
Maanvi:Wow! How lovely is this mansion...Adoring the mansion unware of whats wating ahead...
Vivek:Namsate Biji...
Maanvi turns around straight away...
Biji:Namsate bets, How are you...?
Vivek:I'm fine, how are you biji...?
Biji:i'm fine too...come let me introduce you to your choti Aunty...Maanvi beta...
Maanvi:J...Ji...Ji Biji...
Biji:Maanvi beta this is your nephew who i was telling you about...
Maanvi:(Avoiding eye contact)Namaste...
Vivek:Namaste...Come lets go inside...(Mainly starring at Maanvi)

****Back in Chandighar****
Virat's phone starts ringing again...
Virat:Hello...
Maanvi:Hello Virat...
Virat:Yes whats the matter...?
Maanvi:I'm stuck at this stupid party and im only 2miles away from Chandighar so please coe and join me...
Virat:I'm sorry Maanvi...
Maanvi:What do you mean by sorry Maanvi...?
Virat:Maanvi i have to attend this other party...(Maanvi cuts him off)
Virat:What wrong with Maanvi...she sounded like she has had the shock of her life...

****Back at the party****
Vivek:I think we should go somewhere else and talk...
Maanvi:No if we are to talk then we talk here...
Vivek:Maanvi try to understand...
Maanvi:What should i understand hey...?
Vivek drags maanvi into a corner...
Vivek:Maavi don't me so stubborn because of your subborness we couldn't be together...
Maanvi:At least your my nephew now isn't that enough for you...?
Vivek:Maanvi you should now that if you hadn't left me i wouldn't have become you nephew...
Maanvi:It's a good thing that i left you then...you were anyways after my career not me...
Vivek:Maanvi that was a mistake...
Maanvi:A mistake!?...
Vivek:Come on Maanvi stop acting so childish...
Maanvi:Im not the one acting childish its you! Your the one who kept our reltionship low just so that you can be rich and fullfill your dreams...But..But what about my dreams...?Who's going to fullfill those...?
By this time Virat arrives at the party...
Virat:Sir...
Vivek:Virat my man i'm so glad you could make it...Meet my Choti Aunty...
Virat:Maanvi...?
Vivek:Wow you know each other...
Virat:Yes she is my Bhabi's sister...
Vivek:Oh really Maanvi...?
Maanvi:Ye...Yes...
Virat realises that something isn't right...
Virat:Excuse me Maanvi could i talk to you for second...
Vivek leaves them and starts talking to other people the party...
Virat:Maanvi...whats the matter why are you so pale...
Maanvi:Nothinng Virat i just needs soe fresh air...
Virat:Oh okay...
Before she leaves to go out she turns around and sees confusion in Virat' eyes...
Maanvi:(Apoligising through her eyes)...Sorry Virat but i will tell you everything when the time is right...
Virat:(Talking to Maanvi's eyes)...Maanvi tell me quick whats wrong with you...
They stare at each other for a good few minutues...

Sorry for not finishing again but i think that you should comment first, then after that I will continue.
I will write next part tomorrow.
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its so good. plz continue soon dear and dont forget to pm me

its so good dear. do continue soon, and pm me when you update,

So amazing dear loved it urgh hate thi vivek and maya uff i hope maanvi tel virat soon about this vivek...
Do continue soon and please pm me...
Hun if u dont mind but can u please have a index at the first post of urs as it will be easier to find the parts...

Index:
Part 1 - Page 1
Part 2 - page 2
Part 3 - page 3
Part 4 - page 3
Part 5 - page 4
Part 6 - page 4

Originally posted by: Sassi1

Part 1

Maavi was going back to chandighar and everyone was bidding her farewel.
Maavi: Di, call me everyday and Jiju please reming Di to call me because you know how forgetful Di is.
Jeevika:Maanu...how can you say that me forgetful i will never forget to call you...
They hug each other so tightly like they have met after 100hundres years.
Whie hugging each other Maanvi realised that she had not said goodbye to virat as...
Maanvi:(in her thought) Where has this chep gone... and yet im his best friend and he hasn't come to sy bye to me... :L usually he pulls my leg when im going back home but tody he can't be seen anywhere...
Jeevika:Maanvi take everyones care and give badi biji and daabu a big hug from me.
Maanvi:Ji Di...Di i have forgetton something in the room i'll just go and get it...
Jeevika nods her head.
*****Manvi in her room*****
In her thoughts: Whats wrong with virat..? where is he...? Why am i bothered if he doesn't come and meet me its not like im going to miss him... when she thught of this she felt a sharp pain in her heart...Virat walks into her room...
Maanvi: VIRAAT!!!! im not talkig to you go away from here...
Virat still quite
Maanvi: Virat yaar...whats wrong...?
Virat: nothing Maanvi and aren't you meant to be gone by now..?
Maanvi: Oh yes i forget something so i came to get that...
Maanvi and virt stare into each others eyes...
Until Jeevika came and interupted their moment..
Jeevika: Maanvi hurry up or you are going to iss your train the driver is outside waiting for you...Virat how come your here...?
At the same time Maanvi also thought about why he was there too...
Virat: Actually bhabi i was really really tried after going to office with Bhai and Chachu that i wanted to sleep but i think because of the triedness i walked into the wrong room...
Jeevika: Oh okay...
Maanvi knew tht he was lying he wasn't there because of his triedness bt something else was troubling him...
I hope you liked it please tell me wht you think and leave comment and if you like it i shall write some more otherwise i wont so please tell me what you think...thank you