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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry i can't finish my story i'm on my way to the airport to go on holiday so i'm sorry shall update when get the time or if i cant get any time ten i shall finish the story off when i got back from my holidays...Hope everyone understand thank you so much shall miss writing to be honest im so sorry for not updating anyways thank you for all encouragements that i have had for writing this story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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just started reading, this is really good :) please pm when you write the next part
Edited by vanilla.ice - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 12


Part 12

Sorry for not pm you guys :(

Virat came back.
Manvi: What did you do please tell me.
Virat: I have done my work and now its your turn.
Manvi: what my turn?
Virat: Simple say yes for this marriage.
Manvi: Marriage?
Virat: Yes we are going to get married soon.
Manvi: You must be joking right?
Virat: I have already said you and now I am leaving.
Virat leaves (winking at Manvi)
Manvi: (to herself) How can he love me? we are getting married... but I think everything is going really fast ... Or is he making a fool of me ... Manvi if he really loves you then ... oh god what should I do now?
Jeevika enters
Jeevika: Mannu congrats!
Manvi: huh?
Jeevika: Still in your dreamland?
Manvi: No Di I am thinking everything going on in my life is pretty fast.
Jeevika: Nothing is fast. You and Virat accepted for each other afetr so long and you are saying pretty fast.
Manvi: But I did not accept my love.
Jeevika: Dont worry you will accept it. As far as I know Virat he will make you confess your love.
Manvi: But Di I am not sure about my feelings.
Jeevika: Manvi you are my sister I understand you and your feelings. And I know you love Virat but it will take sometime for you to accept it. May be you will accept it after marriage or may be before marriage.
Manvi: Di you really think I have feelings for him?
Jeevika: Yes I do. Now you go and sleep. Tomorrow is your Roka.
Manvi: My Roka?
Jeevika: Yes and now no more talks go and take some rest tomorrow will be a hectic day.
Manvi: Di?
Jeevika: Come with me. come on lie down. Now close your eyes. Thats like a good girl.
Both Jeevika and Manvi lie on the bed.
Manvi: Di are you missing Jiju?
Jeevika: Yes but he is coming tomorrow.
Manvi: Di when did you started loving Jiju Before or after marriage?
Jeevika: May be after marriage. Now sleep Mannu I am feeling sleepy.
Jeevika slept but Manvi could not sleep the whole night.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
nice update and have fun
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Lovely update please PM me when you update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
aww that was nice pm me wen u update cant wait to know what happens next!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Amazing!!! Continue soon &
Pm me when u update next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Fabulous yay virman are guna get martied
Continue soon and please pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its nyce story

but i m not gettng onething
manvi was supposed to have operate that night and this rokka???marriage

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