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hello friends...
here i am again with my another OS
hope you all will like it...
HAPPY REPUBLIC DAY..
A SALUTE TO THEM WHO DIED FOR OUR MOTHERLAND
WE ARE SAFE IN OUR HOUSES JUST BECAUSE OF THEM...
..VANDE MATRAM..
JAI HIND

A Salute...!!!

Maan singh khurana,,one and only son of khurana family..his family have their own construction company but maan wants to serve his motherland'.

Geet handa,one and only daughter of their family..she wants to do something different in her future..in her life..wants to serve her motherland'.they took admission in commander school in masoori..both went their from their respective place'ther commando training held in the forest in massori'.maan and geet met in the forest in masoori while their training at 5:30 am in morning'.that was a formal introduction'..major yash malhotra introduced himself and started their training with different tasks'.there was 3 separate quarters'1 for boys,,1 for girls and 1 for senior authorities'.maan & geet daily met during their traning'.maan started falling on her simplicity and sweetness but sometimes she gave him her tough looks as a trainee in army police'. '.after 8 months of training.. they fell in love with each other..both don't have the fear of loosing their lives'.they got the holidays of 3 days'.both went their home and tell their family about their love'.their family became happy and agreed for their engagement'both are from the same city delhi'their family met with each other and finalized the date of their engagement'.it will be after 10 days but they have to postponed for their duty'as usual their duty comes first'.they went Kashmir for their first mission'.the mission went till 6 months'there is no break between the mission'.it went continuously'..they went to LOC for their mission'.there are 8 terrorists near the border of Kashmir and Pakistan'.a team of 25 soldiers went there'.maan & geet are in that team'.there is huge amount of ammunition from the both sides'..but 4 soldiers lost their life while serving their motherland'..but they have succeed in saving the villagers'.major yash malhotra and rest team of soldiers of army give them tribute of them with full respect'..gave fire in the sky'after 6 months of duty'.they take leave for 1 month holiday for their marriage'.maan and geet hugged to each other and went together delhi for their marriage'.they are very happy..and finally they got engaged'after 5 days'their marriage will be held'.all the ceremonies..haldi,mehndi,sangeet went well with according to reeti rivaaz,,,,finally the day come'.maan filled her maang with sinddor,,tied maglasutra around her neck and took 7 phere around the fire'and got married'.15 days left of their holdidays'.on their first night they went on their honeymoon to goa'.they stay in hotel marriot in goa'.their honeymoon suite decorated with flowers and candles'.geet was sitting in the middle of the bed not in her lehnga'in her black satin nighty'.maan came with full of desires,,full of love,,full of passion'.geet was looking more desirable'more tempting'.they start their love making'.her cry was in every corner of the suite'.her crying,,moaning in pleasure was making him more gentle'.more desirable'.more wanting'.they became one from two'.daily they found different ways to exploring each other in day and night'.it was the best time of their life'.now they understand more each other'they came to know some known and unknown facts about each other'.after 10 days of honeymoon..they came back to delhi'.and fulfilled all the rest ceremonies and spent some time with their families'.after 5 days..they take leave from their families and went to Kashmir''.they got a separate room for the married couple'.after 2 more months'they became lt. maan singh khurana and lt. geet khurana'.at one night..geet saw a dream that they went on a mission and died together but the tiny life inside her also died'.she drenched in sweat and woke up'.and looked here and there for maan..but maan was not there'that was a nightmare'.she got up and went outside the room'she saw maan was talking with major 'they were talking about some mission'.she don't want to disturb him..so went inside..after some time maan came and geet narrated him the whole nightmare of her'.maan didn't give attention on the death dream..he became very happy that she is expecting'.

Maan=jaan'ohh I am so so happy'.mai papa banne wala hu'.he touched her stomach and hugged her by her waist'and clearly said that don't stress yourself'.and tum kisi mission par nahi jaogi'.mai major yash se baat karunga..extra safety for you'.

Geet=maan'I love you..but maan ye possible nahi hai'I am lt.then no mission,,extra safety..ye possible nahi hai'.

Maan=I understand jaan'.but mujhe tumhari fikr hai'.

Geet=jaan'training me sab sikhaya hai na'mai apna khyaal rakhungi'and kissed him on his lips'

After two days maan took leave from geet and tell her that take care of youself'i will come soon'maan ent to barmuda for a mission'.geet ddn't have the fear of loose him'she knew that this is thir work'if maan lost his life for our motherland then she will feel more proud on him'.yet she knew that it will be impossible for her to live without him'but she is all prepared for all this'..barmuda was surrounded with terrorists'.that is a mission'.after 3 days'geet was sleeping at night and again saw the dream that maan got bullet on his chest'.on the other hand maan and all the soldiers are fighting in barmuda'.geet woke up and worried for maan'.yet she is ready for this but there is some knid of fear'she got ready in her uniform'and straightly went to major yash and took his permission'he gave her permission and then whe went to colonel dev for the permission'.he also give her permission'he understand her condition and having full trust in her and tell her that went to major meera..who is doctor in army'..major meera checked her fully and she also give her permission'.geet took her belongings and sat in herjeap'it took 4 hours of Kashmir to barmuda'.meanwhile in barmuda'maan is fighting and got a bullet on his left shoulder'.geet was connected by walky- talky with a soldier in barmuda'.taking all the news about barmuda'.bullet on maan's shoulder but still he was fighting'maan shot 3 terrorists in one go from his right hand'.after 2 hours..geet reached there'and straightly went to barmuda cargil'..geet was running towards maan'.then suddenly a bullet shot on maan's chest'..she heard his loud scream with her name'..she also screamed maan'..maan kew she is here'.she ran and fired on the terrorists'.and shot 4 terrorists'.maan is still fighting having bullet on his shoulder and in chest'.a bullet again shot in maan's leg and a bullet shot in geet's stomach'..maan screamed geet and ran towards her forgetting his pain'.and held her in his arms'.she is holdng her stomach'.and a bullet again shot in geet's heart'.she fell down on land and maan also land on her'saluting to each other'.maan hold her hand at the marriage time and now on the death time..maan is still holding her hand'one dream of geet is fulfilled..agar dono shaheed ho jaayein to dono ek sath shaheed ho'.aur yahi hua'.both died holding their hand while serving thir motherland'.last words came out from their mouth and that is vande matram'.having tears of happiness in their eyes and the tiny life inside her also died with his/her parents'.

Their families came there'having tears in their eyes and more than it they are feeling proud on them'.dono ne apni chhati par goli khaayi aur apni matra bhoomi ki sewa karte-2 shahhed huye'(both got bullet on their chest and died while serving for their maotherland..)

Major yash malhotra,, colonel dev and the whole army tribute to lt.maan singh khurana and lt. geet khurana'.with full respect'covered them tri color flag and later give them the salaami of 21 topes'.and maan's last wish fulfilled..maan wanted that on his death this song will be played''

kar chale ham fidaa jaan-o-tan saathiyon
ab tumhaare hawaale watan saathiyon
kar chale ham fidaa jaan-o-tan saathiyon
ab tumhaare hawaale watan saathiyon
kar chale ham fidaa jaan-o-tan saathiyon
ab tumhaare hawaale watan saathiyon

saans thamti gayi nabz jamti gayi
phir bhi badhte kadam ko na rukne diyaa
kat gaye sar hamaare to kuchh gham nahin
sar himaalay kaa hamne na jhukne diyaa
marte marte rahaa baankaapan saathiyon,
ab tumhaare hawaale watan saathiyon
kar chale ham fidaa jaan-o-tan saathiyon
ab tumhaare hawaale watan saathiyon

zindaa rahne ke mausam bahut hain magar
jaan dene ki rut roz aati nahin
husn aur ishq donon ko ruswaa kare
wo jawaani jo khoon mein nahaati nahin
aaj dharti bani hai dulhan saathiyon
ab tumhaare hawaale watan saathiyon
kar chale ham fidaa jaan-o-tan saathiyon
ab tumhaare hawaale watan saathiyon

raah qurbaaniyon ki na veeraan ho
tum sajaate hi rahnaa naye qaafile
fatah kaa jashn is jashn ke baad hai
zindagi maut se mil rahi hai gale
bandh lo apne sar se kafan saathiyon,
ab tumhaare hawaale watan saathiyon
kar chale ham fidaa jaan-o-tan saathiyon
ab tumhaare hawaale watan saathiyon

khench do apne khoon se zameen par lakeer
is taraf aane paaye na Raavan koyi
tod do haath agar haath uthne lage
chhoone paaye na Seetaa kaa daaman koyi
Raam bhi tum tumhi Lakshman saathiyon,
ab tumhaare hawaale watan saathiyon
kar chale ham fidaa jaan-o-tan saathiyon
ab tumhaare hawaale watan saathiyon
ab tumhaare hawaale watan saathiyon
ab tumhaare hawaale watan saathiyon


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Really gr8...perfect...nevr expected dat both wil die though...
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Fantastic
loved it
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awesome os...
their are no words to say...
its simply great...
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Wow just awesme os dear..
Really we r safe today becoz of only and only soldiers who are fightng to save our country and protect it 24/7 without caring abt their comforts..a GRAND SALUTE TO THEM..
Happy republic day frnds...
Proud to be an indian..
I love india..
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awesome amazing mind blowing update

happy republic day
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hey neha... awesome os dear... 👏👍🏼
wonderful...loved it...
proud that they sacrified their lives for motherland... even their child too...
hats off...
u made me cry dear...
both fell in love n their familes r happy with their relationship... but postponed their sagai due to motherland... 👏
marriage, their honeymoon, n geet's dream... oh god... awesome...
JAI HIND... HAPPY REPUBLIC DAY...

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a perfect one on a perfect day...
superb dear..
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wow!!! awesome os...
happy republic day...
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a salute to the ones who give their lives to their nation...

beautifully written...

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