OS:Distance - Page 2

Super sweet OS!! As they say distance makes a heart grow fonder...maybe that is what they need in the serial!

Originally posted by: rushshri

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Padh to loon


Edited - sandhyu,.can I tell u honestly, last one was better. I am not a vry gud reader, blieve me I hardly read my own os so this paragraph form doesn't Keep me glued but still I read d full os. If it's in a dialogue form, it will b better for readers like me. Also I miss d romance.

Gud pt is distance makes love deeper. Dat is core idea of ur os n I love dat. Loved d way u tried to b intact wid charactrrs. I cannot xpect arnav expressing love bcoz of his charsctrr, n u hvn't losen ur grip on dat. Kudos. Hv read lot of os doing dat n dey fail to attract matured attention like mine. All in all gud attempt but better ho sakta tha bcoz u urself has raised ur standards in lost os.

Waise tune iske baad kya piya. 🤣. U know me sandhyu, itna seriousness doesn't doesn't suit my character.🤣

Can't believe ask spoke his mind out

beautifully written..I always wanted to see the conscious effort from kushi's side to gain arnav's attention just like getting dressed..loved what u wrote!

i love it soo much especially this " She was squashed like a bug every time. made me laugh so much idont know why , it was amazing hun :)

It was a cute 1...I luved it

You understand the two of them well. I really enjoyed it :)

hey nice storyplz put da nxt chapter soon

Awesome ❤️

Beautiful OS and written so well.