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Joseph

@Joseph_A

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Posted: 13 years ago

#471

Nivi !! you didn't PM me ,this time...😭 😭 OMG !! Are you showing Attitude 😡 😡 😆 Ok...chalo...phir '*Katti*🤔 🤣

Ok...I am not talking to you...😒 only wants to say...Awesome Update...😊😳Perfect scene placement...👏 WoW !! Mayank's B'Day...n thereafter suddenly Engagement with Nupur... Plus Christmas also...means,3 reasons for celebration...😛 😊 😛.n yaa...Precap is looking very interesting... Bas ab aur nahin... remember na... Hamari *Katti* ho gayi hai🤔 😳

Joseph.❤️

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 13 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: Joseph_A
Nivi !! you didn't PM me ,this time...😭 😭 OMG !! Are you showing Attitude 😡 😡 😆 Ok...chalo...phir '*Katti*🤔 🤣

Ok...I am not talking to you...😒 only wants to say...Awesome Update...😊😳Perfect scene placement...👏 WoW !! Mayank's B'Day...n thereafter suddenly Engagement with Nupur... Plus Christmas also...means,3 reasons for celebration...😛 😊 😛.n yaa...Precap is looking very interesting... Bas ab aur nahin... remember na... Hamari *Katti* ho gayi hai🤔 😳

Joseph.❤️

No wonder you hadn't commented yet!😕

I am so sorry.. 😭

I had PMed using my new user and I guess you were not on the Buddy List! 😳

I am so so so so so sorry! Dil Se Sorry! Kan Pakadkar Sorry ..😒

I am not showing ATTITUDE!

Anyways, I am So So Glad you liked my Update😃 ! Seriously .. But itna chotu comment !

But thanks for taking out time and commenting!🤗

Happy New Year! 🥳

Oh, how is your back doing now? Is it alright? 😉

Well.. Next update I am not very sure ! 😕

But no one wants to continue with me ..

If I find a partner it would be much more easier ..😳

Would you join me in ? Please !🤔

Anyways, Thanks a ton for commenting even though I did not PM you😛.. AND believe me it was A MISTAKE!😳

Nivriti ..😃

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arzzo

@arzzo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#473

hey nivi

wao after a long tym a fantastic update short bt we understand that u are busy in ur studies the post was great poor nats is so much in pain and its gud that nups findout about mayank and nats that their are not only frnds but like bro and sister so sweet and the mayur engagement was indeed a great surprise sam,raj and gunjan scene was also gud bt lil short but it was gud and plz try to update cavernous preception

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Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: SajanRox

No wonder you hadn't commented yet!😕
I am so sorry.. 😭
I had PMed using my new user and I guess you were not on the Buddy List! 😳 - Then,what can I say...😭 I am speechless.
I am so so so so so sorry! Dil Se Sorry! Kan Pakadkar Sorry ..😒
I am not showing ATTITUDE! - Chalo phir...*Katti* cancel...😊 [Ab toh kaan chhodo😆]

Anyways, I am So So Glad you liked my Update😃 ! Seriously .. But itna chotu comment ! - Chhotu comment...??😉 Aapne toh woh bhi nahin diya Nivi Mam 😳Ok...Now,I submit my full reply...
But thanks for taking out time and commenting!🤗
Happy New Year! 🥳HAPPY NEW YEAR too.🤗
Oh, how is your back doing now? Is it alright? 😉 - Oh ! Thanks for your concern...Yes,Now its fine.😳

Well.. Next update I am not very sure ! 😕
But no one wants to continue with me .. - No Yaar ! Aisa nahin hai...I think all are busy now... even Readers are busy more...😉 tabhi toh woh Comment tak nahin de pa rahe. 😆and ,I always told you...don't under estimate to yourself...You are really Awesome writer.
If I find a partner it would be much more easier ..😳
Would you join me in ? Please !🤔- 🤣 Joke of the day...Approach bhi kiya toh kise...?? 😆 🤣 Do you know that...? APHG current part came...after almost 50 days...😳Thanks to me... 🤣 MBYPH is running only because of S3...warna abhi toh 2nd Thread hi chal raha hota...🤣

Anyways, Thanks a ton for commenting even though I did not PM you😛.. AND believe me it was A MISTAKE!😳- Ok...I believe you... [Benefit of doubts🤣]

Nivriti ..😃

Comment :

Mayank-Natasha part was really Awesome.You described this scene so beautifully.NATASHA pain...MAYANK's concern for her is visible so perfectly...[specially in mayank's thoughts line].Now,Nupur's doubts clear also.

SaJan-Rajveer part was short but sweet.😳 Their Plan of surprise to Mayank also very cute. very well written scene👏 Church scene...n thereafter,MaYur engagement scene placement was really good...but,I am little disappointed with Engagement part...Its came in very normal n simple way...🥱. Sorry ! but,its only my POV..I was expecting something in large scale.😳

Precap is really looking interesting.😊so,I am eagerly waiting for next part... Please,try to update soon.😳[Yaar,per day 1 part bhi try karogi toh 4-5 days mein ho jaayega😉].

- Joseph.

Edited by Joseph_A - 13 years ago

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