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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Summer3

Yes you are great but I think you should get your priorities right. Important matters myst be gandled well. God Bless and Good Luck.


Thanks Summer! 🤗 I know! And I know my priority : "STUDIES!"
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing FF !!
Please add me to your pm list :)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha_LuvSaJan

Amazing FF !!
Please add me to your pm list :)


Thanks Ayesha! It would be a great favor if you see the PM List note on the first page and add the user in!
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Posted: 13 years ago

I am trying my BEST but time never PERMITS me..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Guys!

Well I was in a mood for surprise for you all! I have got a "Special" Christmas Surprise for you even though it has nothing to do with Christmas..

But being Santa for the day and updating my long-awaited SS feels special..

Anyways, I am so sorry that I could not update this SS for such a long time. I guess it has been months I last updated! 😔

So few days back I found myself comparatively free and pulled up my socks to write an update! 😃

What luck I tell you.

So Ms. Santa urf Nivriti / me has got a special update for you guys after finding AMPLE time and smuggling some time out too.. :D LOLs!

The following 21 member(s) liked the above post:

salma009, mukitzz, sanju_love_mjht, ..Mehak.., princess_sara, mohit_rockstar, MoNaYaRoX,
karantakiar, fri42911, GhunchaluvsSuKk, --Aditi--, MoNayaHolicPrag, preety88, -krazyriya-, Shafoo, ar_sajan4evr,

Thanks for liking my work guys! 😳

Hope you like it but I am going to update it in any other condition! :D So you ought to like it.. Santa surprises only GOOD people and you are one of them.

But on a serious note, I will still like someone to please continue this SS with me and promise out good updates! Vacancies are still open!

PM/ Scrap me if you are interested as I am in HELL need for a partner who would be much-more regular than me..

Anyhow! Here goes my update in the next post but before that just have a look at the Recap of the story as most of you must have forgotten what all had taken place..


And I really hope you all like this part! It is a compensation for the delay which took place and which WILL take place!


Anyways, Just go to the next post for the Recap!

Edited by SajanRox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally Here

GUNJAN in college announces that the next day is MAYANK's Birthday. NATASHA asks NUPUR not to wish him and keep a surprise which irritates NUPUR.

The next day NUPUR and NATASHA try to find a suitable excuse to keep MAYANK busy and out of the house.

MAYANK is extremely upset as no one has wished him yet. NUPUR and NATASHA take MAYANK for shopping where NUPUR fights with MAYANK and suspects that there is something more than friendship between NATASHA and MAYANK but does not tell him. NATASHA overhears her and is upset. But she remembers the times when she was exactly like NUPUR before her parents had died and keeps walking on the road. MAYANK learns that NATASHA is nowhere to be found and goes in search for her.


Go to the next page for the update! 😃

Edited by SajanRox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

NATASHA sat on the bench drenched in the rain. On the other hand MAYANK was busy searching her in the mall.

M- Uff. Ye NATASHA kaha chali gayi? Kahi use kuch ho to nahi gaya? God, rain ko bhi abhi hona tha?

Just then he saw a park outside the mall entrance. ((Kahi NUTS Park mein to nahi bethi hai? I know she loves Parks , Gardens and Kids. Mujhe bhi arsa hogaya park mein play kare hue. But I am sure she will be sitting on one of the swings. Abhi jaakar uski class leta hoon.))

MAYANK scurried towards the park and saw NATASHA lost in her own world. He studied the expressions on her face and instantly understood she was sad. Remembering the day's events he also understood the reason for her sadness. (( Mujhe pata hai NATASHA apne parents aur apne rangeen bachpan ko remember kar rahi hai. Un dino mein bhi kya jadu [MAGIC] hota tha. Na koi problems na koi plannings, just fun and frolic.. and mujhe yeh bhi maloom hai ku NATASHA apne-aap ko MISS kar rahi hai jab woh choti thi. Who bilkul NUPUR ki replica thi. Even I miss that NATASHA.. who bubbly ladki jo New York ki busy streets mein bhi apne liye attention gain karne ke liyo 100 methods dhoond [SEARCH] leti thi. Sirf wo hi ek ladki thi jo mujhe apne Book-World se nikal kar mujhe fun karwati thi.. but kise pata tha ki jab wo 7 saal ki hogi tabhi use life ke complications se roo-ba-roo hona padega? Par mein bhi uska sabse acha Friend hu.. mein use is life ke trap se nikaloonga.. but I think mujhe us se ek baar talk karna chahiye.. talk karne se uska man halka hoga.! It is time to pay back her friendship! ))

MAYANK then gently kept a hand on NATASHA's shoulder to gain her conscious. As she looked at him, her eyes were filled with tones of tears which were threatening to come out of her eyes. He nodded in a NO but tears being tears rolled on her cheeks as she hugged him tightly and sniffed in his arms as he hugged her back.

For a few moments, these two friends just hugged each other without saying a word to each other.. NATASHA was just simply crying and crying silently and her tears refused to stop.

MAYANK did not try to stop her from crying even though he wished she would. But he knew, crying 'lightens your heart.' Gently swaying his hands on her back he initiated a TALK.

M- What happened? Tu suddenly mall se vanish kyun hogayi? Pata mein kitna tensed tha. Aur jab tu milli to tu cry kar rahi hai?

NATASHA did not say anything but started to cry further.

M- Okay now NUTS I am getting tensed. What happened?

**Other Side

SAMRAT and GUNJAN were happily discussing few for their favorite things when SAMRAT's famous Kabab-mein-Haddi came!

R- GUNJAN come on it is getting late to go to the airport. The flight must have landed!

GUNJAN was busy putting streamers when she suddenly remembered her annoying little no actually just 60 seconds old twin brother and her lovely parents had to come and she dropped the streamers!

G- Shit! I totally forgot. Pata nahi mera kya hoga! I am turning so forgetful these days.. thanks RAJ for reminding me.. mein abhi teyaar hokar aati hu, I just need to change my slippers! Wait on a second..

R- Take your time.. waise bhi tu kaha normally ladkiyo ki tarah full fledged 3 hours lagati hai teyaar hone mein! Mein car nikalta hu tu ready hokar mujhe neeche driveway par miliyo.. fine!

G- Yup! And by the way, SAMRAT also wanted to come along to the airport.. toh tum dono neeche jayo mein 5 minute mein aati hu!

R- Cool! Chal SAMRAT.

--Jogger's Park opposite Pheonix Mall'

Na- MAYU I feel so miserable.. mein RAJ ko hamare parents ka death ke real reason bhi nahi bataya hai aur mein apna dukh uske saath share bhi nahi kar sakti.. agar use pata chalega ki uske favorite Rajendra Uncle ne mom dad ko sirf paiso ke liyo maara hai woh to jaise break ho jayage pieces mein.. mein aaj tak yeh nahi samajh payi log rishte banate hi kyun hai jab unhe nibha nahi sakte? Kya bigada tha dad ne unka? Mein bahut lonely feel karti hu even though mere paas inta sweet aur caring bhai hain jo meri respect karta hain, mere baat kabhi-kabhi sun leta hai (laughed at this) aur sabse badi baat mujhse behad pyaar karta hai! Par mom and dad to ek hi hote haina..

M- I know that NATASHA, but you know what? Tum bahut lucky ho.. kyonki tumhare paas ek nahi do do parents hai jo tumhe apne bacho se bhi zyada pyaar karte hai! Ek mere PARENTS aur ek SWAYAM ke.. agar tumhare paas SHIPRA AUNTY aur RAJNEESH UNCLE nahi hai to kya hua? Mere mom and dad hai aur upar se KARTIK UNCLE aur SIMRIN AUNTY bhi to hai! You know life job hi hume deti hai uska hamesha ek reason zarur hota hai.. par hume us reason ko pehchane mein bahut time lag jata hai! Kyun hum jo life ne humse cheena hai uske liye rote hai? Hume un cheezo ke liye khush hona chahiye jo life ne hume uske badleme diya hai? NATASHA life doesn't end here.. open the box and explore it's contents.. is band dabbe mein apne-aap ko aur apne bhai ko mat ghoto!

Na- Thanks MAYU! I love you.. you are the best BROTHER! I love you! Thanks for always being there with me.. mein in baton ko zarur yaad rakhungi!

M- (Hugs her) I love you too NUTS! Bas hasti rehna!

NATASHA and MAYANK hug each other for a long time.. Unknown to them NUPUR had seen all of the scene..

N- Mein kitni pagal thi na! NATASHA aur MAYANK ek dusre ke ache dost hai.. aur use badi baat ek doosre ko apna Bhai/Behn samjhte hai! Mein itni paagal kese ho sakti hu?

--Sharma House'

Gunjan came running down in the casuals she had changed it.. Excitement evident on her face!

G- Chalo.. Let's go (While entering the car)

RAJVEER zoomed the car to the airport. GUNJAN and RAJVEER kept on blabbering what all they did for so many years on MAYANK's birthday. Finally they reached their destination. The flight had come on the scheduled time. GUNJAN saw her parents and her brother arriving.. as they neared her she ran and hugged her parents and declaring how much she had missed them. Apparently her brother was expecting a hug too as he started to sulk. Ultimately they both hugged each other laughingly.

----Few Hours Later---

Mayank Reached home quite Frustrated !! A Perfect Day was ruined... He had expected so much for this Day was Alas! All was Ruined!! He came back home after a Fight between Nupur & Natasha... They all looked Irritated & Barged into the House as soon as they reached there... But Suprise was Still Yet to Come !!

As Soon as Mayank Entered the House, He was Utterly Suprised... SHOCK written all Over his Face... He just cudn't blive wat He saw... Was IT Actually TRUE?! He was Literally Rubbing his Eyes !!

As he reaches home he is surprised to see his PARENTS , his little brother ADITYA who is elder to GUNJAN by just a minute, his MASSI , MOSAJI, RAJVEER, GUNJAN, SAM, DIYA, BENJI, UDAY waiting with a cake and gifts for his birthday.. Even his childhood friends SWAYAM and SAKSHI were there! And to NUPUR's surprise; her BAUJI and BUI were also there!

He was STILL in a SHOCK wich was UNBELIEVABLE... He thought evryone to have forgotten his B'day but Here they were !! Slowly Tears Of Happiness Brimmed in his Eyes as soon as they shouted, "A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY" to him !!

M- OMG Guys! You here? Tum sab ko mera birthday yaad tha? Aw. You guys made my day! Mujhe laga tum sab bhool gaye.. I don't have words to express my feelings! Thank you so much guys!

G- Bhai.. apko sach mein lagta hai hum apka birthday bhool jayenge? Never? I mean ADI ka to pata nahi but mein kabhi nahi bhoolongi!

And then both of them hugged. Soon ADITYA and MAYANK's parents joined in for a family hug!

Next Day -25th of December 2011

Today is Christmas Day! GUNJAN, MAYANK, their FAMILY and ALL FRIENDS are off to the church to hear the choir. Amazing carols were being sung and GUNJAN & RAJVEER sung most of them along.

SAMRAT was completely lost in her voice.. he loved the way she smiled whenever a familiar carol was being sung in the church.. he was immensely happy!

On the other hand ADITYA found something fishy between SAMRAT & GUNJAN. He often caught SAM staring at her.. but then he had no voice as he already had a GIRLFRIEND ' SAKSHI!

Later

Everyone was back home and were sitting on the dinner table to have lunch. BUI, MAYANK's MOM and his MASSI were busy setting the table with GUNJAN when they suddenly were called by MAYANK in the hall.

M- Guys.. mujhe aap sab ko ek baat batani hai.. Um! Koi hai meri zindagi mein jisse mein behad pyaar karta hu, jo mere liye meri life se bhi zyada important hai. Aaj mein aap sabko uske bare mein batana chahta hu.. mein NUPUR se behad pyaar karta hu.. I love her a lot! And "shayad" who bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai thoda bahut! [NUPUR looks angrily at him] okay sorry who bhi mujhse bahut bahut pyaar karti hai!

Sh- MAYANK I am really happy for you beta..! I feel she is the correct choice for you!

Av- Ha! Mujhe bhi NUPUR bahut pasand he.. toh batao shadi kab karni hai? [jokingly]

M- DAD? Abhi toh bilkul bhi nahi! Abhi mere padai ke crucial years chal rahe hai.. my and NUPUR's future is at stake right now aur aap ko shaadi ki padi hai?

Bauji- Hai Avtaar Jee. MAYANK bilkul sahi keh raha hai. Aur NUPUR I am proud of you and your choice! Meine DIYA se iske bare mein bahut suna hai! Aaj dekh liye kitna sharif aur nek dil ka hai!

Av- Aakhir "mera" beta hai..

All laugh at this statement made by Avtaar [MAYANK's DAD]

Av- Lekin MAYANK, engagement to kar hi sakte hai na! What say? Abhi engagement ke liye to ready ho?

G- BHAI to ever-ready! LOLs..

M- Um.. GUNJAN? Zaruri to nahi hai na!
N- To kya tum mujhse kabhi shaadi nahi karna chahoge?

M- Meine aise kab kaha?

N- Aisa hi kaha hai tumne! Tumhara matlab wahi tha mujhe achi tareeke se maloom hai!

M- Lekin!

Av- Bas bacho.. ladna band karo! Chalo jab miya biwi raazi to engagement kar de abhi?

M- Ha!

Sh- Tujhe badi jaldi ho rahi hai?

M- Um [blushes!]

Soon MAYANK and NUPUR exchange rings. Everyone in the room was extremely happy for the couple!

*End*

Glimpses for the next update which may take long! :(

GUNJAN and NATASHA bonding..

NATASHA decides to tell RAJVEER the truth

Edited by SajanRox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

..Finally the update is over! I hope you guys liked it.. 😳

Just a small token of love for being my best readers always! 😃

I would like to acknowledge Ekta and Akriti for helping me out for this update.. 🤗

This update would have not been possible without their love and support! 😕

I would also like to thank AMBIKA for always being the silent support for me.. 😉

Now I really hope you all have a lovely Christmas and a happening New Year! 🥳

Special thanks to JOSEPH bhai as his SS/FF have always been my motivation and inspiration. 😊

Thanks to all of you for taking out time and reading my SS throughout!

Love you all.. ❤️

Have a great year ahead! 😃

Catch you guys soon! 😳

Edited by SajanRox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
so when are u planning to update?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arzzo

so when are u planning to update?


Very Soon! :D

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