Tum Mere Ho (RTMC FF) Part69 on Pg153 - Page 53

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neha_dubey1709

awesome awesome awesome... its just mind-boggling man... Huh loved it thoroughly
Update soon :-)

Thanks dear...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mddmayuri

😊hey dhanvi,

gr8 update,each & every convo between prini are awesome..
specially tat one..

Nandini "how many times did we...had...i mean we made love?"

Prithvi "i never counted...sometimes it was ten times a day" with a little grin😳😳

loved it...
waiting for the next one😊

Thank you so much for your lovely comments...i will update soon...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

Nandini "how many times did we...had...i mean we made love?"

Prithvi "i never counted...sometimes it was ten times a day" with a little grin😳😳

loved it..


itni baar tho Brand russel bhi katy perry ke sath nahi karta hoga...

AUR AGAR KARTA BHI HOGA THO
hum sab readers ke sath dokha hoa hai ki humne tho sirf 1 sence per day padha tha ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,(just kidding)


awesome update ,,,,plz update soon

😆😆 thanks dear...yes i will update soon...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

😊 awesome update dear...

PriNi scenes r awesome 😳...just loved them...

angad & richa r really very good & true friends 😊...always helping PriNi...

i liked the way prithvi gave answers to esha 😆...she is jealous...but what is esha's plan?...😲 why suddenly this party?...oh plz no more problems for PriNi...they have suffered a lot...now atleast i want them to face every situation together...

& renuka 😡...looks like she sent esha for spying on PriNi...why she trusts esha more than her own son?...what does she mean by 'ill wife'?...oh no...i don't like this...

plz plz update soon...dieing to know what happens in party...

thanks sweetie...will update soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 36


Esha "you know what you have to do?"

Manish "yes...don't you worry...leave everything to me" smirkingly

Esha "ok good...lets get to work"


It was evening and the hall was fully decorated with flowers everywhere.

Esha welcomed Prithvi and Nandini... Esha stared at Nandini while talking to Manish...

Manish "you seem envious of Nandini"

Esha "no...why will I??"

Manish "no wonder she's much more beautiful than anyone in the party...honestly I have never seen such mesmerizing beauty before..."

Esha "shut up...and concentrate on your work"

Esha went towards Prithvi "so how's married life now??"

Prithvi didn't reply but stared at her angrily...

Esha was drinking and offered Nandini

Nandini "sorry I don't take alcohol"

Esha "oh really??? well are you scared of Prithvi??"

Prithvi heard Esha and pulled her towards a corner "one more rubbish word from your mouth Esha, and I will leave this bloody party of yours"

Esha "i...i am sorry Prithvi" suddenly she looked at Nandini who was looking at them...Esha immediately hold Prithvi's hand "please excuse me this time...you know when I drink I loose control" she came closer to Prithvi...Nandini stared at them...

Richa "hi Nandini...how are you?? and I must say you are looking gorgeous in golden saree..."

Nandini "Thanks Richa, i am good...how are you?

Richa "where's Prithvi??"

Nandini "i don't know, and I don't care, lets have some soft drink"

Angad "she seems angry at Prithvi" he murmured

Richa "hmmm but where is Prithvi"

Angad saw him coming towards them... "hey Prithvi"

Prithvi "hi Angad...what's up...hi Richa"

Richa "hi Prithvi...what happened to Nandini?"

Prithvi "nothing...why?"

Richa "she seems angry"


Prithvi glanced around to see his golden beauty standing isolated from the crowd drinking orange juice

Prithvi "what happened?? why did you come here??"

Nandini "because I don't like this party, and I want to be alone...now leave me"

Prithvi "I don't understand what the hell has happened now??"

Nandini angrily turned towards him "go and flirt with that Esha...i don't mind"

Prithvi "you create your own things...listen.." while pulling her arm towards him and bringing her closer "i don't care what ever you think"

Nandini "didn't you heard what I said...leave me …. go and enjoy with your Esha"

Prithvi looked at her beautiful face full of anger...her beautiful red lips were killing him...he wanted to kiss her... then glanced around "you are jealous of Esha?"

Nandini "why will i be jealous of her??"

Prithvi "cause i think she's more sexy than you"

Nandini "what??? fine i don't care. that's what you think, but i know i am more sexy than her"

Prithvi "prove it"

Nandini "how should i prove???"

Prithvi "Well lets go in that corner and i will kiss you and see if you are more sexy than her."

Nandini angrily "so you kissed her in that corner?? you are such a..."

Prithvi "i would never kiss her"

Nandini "really then what were you doing with her in that corner??"

Prithvi "why are you so much concerned sweetheart??"

Nandini "i...i...listen...i am your wife and i have full right to know...now tell me"

Prithvi "hmmm...if you have full right on me, then i too have full right on you. i will tell you but you have to come in the corner"

Nandini "no...i can't"

Prithvi "i knew you will never come, you are alway scared"

Nandini "scared!!!! my foot. ok come" she said angrily

Prithvi smiled as he saw her walking...

Nandini "now tell me, no one is watching us"

Prithvi came closer and gazed at her beautiful features...she glanced around...she knew he will not say a single word now... "speak up something"

Prithvi "i can't...i mean i am your husband and i have full right to kiss you first, then you can have your full right to question me" he came more closer...

Nandini "wait" and kept her right hand on his shoulder...

Prithvi "wait, for what?" he was about to kiss her

when Nandini said "Richa"

Prithvi pulled back and turned around to see but he couldn't see anyone... "where is Richa??"

Nandini moved a little... "well, its not that easy to kiss me" adjusted her saree and walked towards the crowd...she turned back and smiled at Prithvi who was gazing at her "may be next time"

Prithvi smiled back "i will surely get you next time"

Nandini joined Richa...

Esha "hello everyone, so we all are enjoying the party …..can i please ask Nandini and Prithvi to please come and cut the cake"

Prithvi and Nandini walked together and cut the huge cake, everyone congratulated the couple...

Prithvi "lets dance"

Nandini "ball dance!!! no I don't know"

Prithvi "you learnt it way back just for me." he said with a low tone in his voice.

Nandini felt something inside her while Prithvi was walking on the other side of the hall, she quickly grasped his wrist "lets dance" Prithvi smiled at her...

Nandini kept one hand on his shoulder and other hand in Prithvi's hand...he hold her waist..

Nandini "well it doesn't seem difficult"

Prithvi "because you know this dance well"

Richa and Angad looked at both of them

Richa "you know Angad, I am so happy for Nandini, but I will be more happy that day when she remember's everything"

Angad "yes I know, Prithvi is missing her badly, it seems he has buried some of his emotions deep inside him and only Nandini can see them, but until she remembers everything she won't understand him"


After some time


Nandini "i am tired, can I go and sit"

Prithvi "yes sure, should I get something to eat for you"

Nandini "no you carry on, I will have some juice"

Sameer "hi Prithvi, how are you...good to see you after such a long time"

Prithvi "hi Sameer"

Nandini went towards the table and picked up one glass...


Esha "go...this is the right opportunity"

Manish "what if she says no"

Esha "well she won't, I made her jealous and I am sure she will make Prithvi jealous"

Manish "alright"


Nandini was sipping her juice when Manish sat with her

Nandini "can't you sit on that chair??"

Manish "sorry, I just came to say hi, I am Esha's friend"

Nandini "hi..." she seemed disinterested

Manish "you are so beautiful, can I dance with you"

Nandini "sorry, I can't"

Manish "why, do I look so bad...please dance with me...just for sometime"

Nandini "i said no...can't you hear" annoyingly looked at him

Manish "you will dance, cause no girl says no to me..."

Nandini "get lost." she didn't bothered

Manish came forward to hold her hand when he saw angry eyes staring at him... he was standing behind Nandini...

Nandini turned to look back... "Prithvi"

Prithvi "how dare you come near her?" he said angrily and punched him hard on his face

Nandini got up from her seat "leave it Prithvi"

Manish fell on the floor... Prithvi pulled his collar and gave another blowing punch...he picked up a bottle and smashed on the back of Manish's head...he fainted.

Esha came running "what did you do Prithvi?? he was my friend"

Prithvi "to hell with your friend...next time if I see him I will not spare him"



After some time


Nandini "why did you beat him so badly...he didn't do anything"

Prithvi "i will kill anyone who comes near you" he said violently

Nandini "you scared me Prithvi...how could you ???" and went upstairs...

Prithvi was full of anger and he didn't listen to her. He sat on the couch...and closed his eyes for sometime...then saw Nandini's face...and said to himself "when will you come back Nandini"



After some time



He opened his room and switched on the lights...he saw Nandini sleeping on his bed...he was surprised to see her in his room, after what he did she should be sleeping far away from him...

He thought of sleeping on the couch...when he heard "you should sleep on the bed"

Prithvi "are you awake...i thought you are sleeping"

Nandini got up, she took of the sheet...Prithvi hold his breath...she looked awesome and beautiful...he gazed at her beautiful body under her silk sleeveless nightdress

Nandini "i was sleeping...i woke up when you opened the door"

Prithvi "what are you wearing!!!"

Nandini "don't look so surprised, its just a night dress...i know its a little short just to show you how sexy i am."

Prithvi still gazing at her "you are..."

Nandini "well I think you can sleep on the bed...but without touching me"

Prithvi thought it will be difficult for him to stay in the same room...as he saw her sexy enough to arouse him from his sleep. The fragrance of her hair, her body was attracting him...but he had to control himself.


He lay next to her...she had kept a huge pillow in between them.


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Posted: 13 years ago
aww so cute loved prithvi punched that idiot thanks 4 update dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey sweety
awesome part dear
totally loved it
prithvi n nadani were adorable
loved a jealous nandu
esha is really irritating now
cant she just leave our love birds alone
I hope Nandini gets her memory back soon
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maria_awan

aww so cute loved prithvi punched that idiot thanks 4 update dear

Thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Simran_14

hey sweety

awesome part dear
totally loved it
prithvi n nadani were adorable
loved a jealous nandu
esha is really irritating now
cant she just leave our love birds alone
I hope Nandini gets her memory back soon
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm

thanks Sim for your lovely comments...keep reading and commenting...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

awww awesome UD yar

loved the party scenes n jealous nadini 😆

Nandini moved a little... "well, its not that easy to kiss me" adjusted her saree and walked towards the crowd...she turned back and smiled at Prithvi who was gazing at her "may be next time"

Prithvi smiled back "i will surely get you next time" ☺️☺️

the bedroom scenes r also awesome yar


Prithvi "what are you wearing!!!"

Nandini "don't look so surprised, its just a night dress...i know its a little short just to show you how sexy i am."

Prithvi still gazing at her "you are..."

Nandini "well I think you can sleep on the bed...but without touching me"

Prithvi thought it will be difficult for him to stay in the same room...as he saw her sexy enough to arouse him from his sleep. The fragrance of her hair, her body was attracting him...but he had to control himself.


He lay next to her...she had kept a huge pillow in between them.



poor prithvi not able to control himself😆😆

thnx foR the lovely UD dhanvi

waiting for the next UD😍


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