Tum Mere Ho (RTMC FF) Part69 on Pg153

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Dhanvi

@Freethinker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: nitali
hey dhanvi ... i m your new fan fic fan..."TUM MERE HO!!!!!!!" haiii ...i jst love it...its a perfect title...
i read till page 6 of your fan fic and den reading this part...
and its like a shock ...where nandini is abt to get married to sum Abhishek named guy and d family as a hole have given nandini 1 year for her studies...
here wen i read this part where PRITHVI IS MARRIED TO NANDINI...and both r now husband and wife...and prithvi is so frank...i AM ALREADY falling for him...
bt i here i have a request... though i havent read the hole fan fic.. bt jst ... isme tumne prithvi ko start mai jaisey dikhaya hai na waisey he dikhaooo aagey... maast hai... bhauttt maza aata haiii yaarrr...
but i felt as if der is some distance btw them...and i don't like it...and your fan fic reminds me of prithvi fanfic of shruja...

Thanks sweetie...please read the whole FF...i am sure you will enjoy the story... thanks for appreciating... 😃

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Simran_14

@Simran_14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#502

Hey dear

I m sooo sorry Dhanvi 😔

I was not able to comment on ur updates as i was busy with my work

N didnt come in IF 😭

Anyways, lets come to the updates now

Read from part 23 - 35 just now

Cant believe how much twist n turns have happened

N i missed it 🥺 😛

Really happy that finally tumne hamare love birds ko mila hi diya 😃

Oh Nadani lost her memory 😲

n prithvi lied to nandini that he is her husband ❤️ haye 😳

loved it

And thanks for Angad n Richa... was hoping they would be one

Really love them

They r great friends to Prithvi n Nadani

The updates are fantastic dear👏 ⭐️ 👍🏼

Pls update the next part soon

Cant wait now 2 no wat will happen next

Thnx for the pm 😊

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#503

awesome update...👏

''...Nandini "your phone's ringing" she whispered

Prithvi gazing at Nandini "let it ring"...''

good boy...prithvi...let it ring...😆

o...nandu want's to see her marriage album...n prithvi again lied to her...😕

''...Esha "Aunty I think Prithvi is lying, he has not married her"

Renuka "how do you know??"

Esha "ok I will find out about this very soon...''

this esha...the so called detective of renuka aunty...😡...stupid girl...

n renuka aunty nandu is not ill...this esha doesn't know anything...as i earlier said stupid girl...😉

"i never counted...sometimes it was ten times a day"...😕.ten times in a day...prithvi...poor nandu...😆🤣

angad n richa going to chicago...hmmm good...😛

but where is my sneha n piyush...i luv when sneha beats piyush...i really miss them...n ofcourse the great beaten piyush...n the great pain of sneha's life...🤣

update next part soon...

luv u...😊

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ananyashera

@ananyashera

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Posted: 13 years ago

#504

😊 awesome update dear...

PriNi parts r superb 👏...i am enjoying this new loverboy prithvi 😉 & sweet nandini...love their bonding...in spite of memory loss & long separation their love is getting stronger day by day 😳...

angad & richa r truly the best friends of PriNi 😊...so understanding & supporting ...

but they both r going to chicago & esha is here 😡...oh no...she is so irritating...i am sure prithvi will handle esha but nandini is just too innocent & she also doesn't remember anything...i am worried about her...

& renuka...she is just biased...ill wife...what does she mean by that?😡...nandini just met with an accident...nothing is wrong with her...whatever problems esha & renuka will create, i hope PriNi will face them together...plz no misunderstandings between them now...

looking forward to see more romantic PriNi scenes in party 😳...plz update soon...