Tum Mere Ho (RTMC FF) Part69 on Pg153 - Page 52

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi guys,
Do u enjoy reading fan fiction stories about romance, love, passion, and alot of masti and dhamaal..
If the answer is "yes" then look no further...
I have wrote a lovely romantic love story for u guys!! Hope u enjoy it as much as i enjoyed writing it for u guys!!
Please do comment and share feedback with me also do let me know what is ur fav part?? so i continue with the script if u like it..
Do mention if u which character in the sory is ur fav!!! waiting for ur reply x x x X
Below is the direct link to the story.. do read it thanks x x x add me to ur buddy list if u want alot more updates x x x x
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nandini "how many times did we...had...i mean we made love?"

Prithvi "i never counted...sometimes it was ten times a day" with a little grin😳😳

loved it..


itni baar tho Brand russel bhi katy perry ke sath nahi karta hoga...

AUR AGAR KARTA BHI HOGA THO
hum sab readers ke sath dokha hoa hai ki humne tho sirf 1 sence per day padha tha ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,(just kidding)


awesome update ,,,,plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
😊 awesome update dear...

PriNi scenes r awesome 😳...just loved them...

angad & richa r really very good & true friends 😊...always helping PriNi...

i liked the way prithvi gave answers to esha 😆...she is jealous...but what is esha's plan?...😲 why suddenly this party?...oh plz no more problems for PriNi...they have suffered a lot...now atleast i want them to face every situation together...

& renuka 😡...looks like she sent esha for spying on PriNi...why she trusts esha more than her own son?...what does she mean by 'ill wife'?...oh no...i don't like this...

plz plz update soon...dieing to know what happens in party...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Simran_14

Hey dear

I m sooo sorry Dhanvi 😔
I was not able to comment on ur updates as i was busy with my work
N didnt come in IF 😭

Anyways, lets come to the updates now
Read from part 23 - 35 just now
Cant believe how much twist n turns have happened
N i missed it 🥺 😛
Really happy that finally tumne hamare love birds ko mila hi diya 😃
Oh Nadani lost her memory 😲
n prithvi lied to nandini that he is her husband ❤️ haye 😳
loved it
And thanks for Angad n Richa... was hoping they would be one
Really love them
They r great friends to Prithvi n Nadani
The updates are fantastic dear👏 ⭐️ 👍🏼
Pls update the next part soon
Cant wait now 2 no wat will happen next
Thnx for the pm 😊

Hi Simran, i was missing your lovely comments...thanks a lot...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ridzzi

awesome update...👏

''...Nandini "your phone's ringing" she whispered

Prithvi gazing at Nandini "let it ring"...''

good boy...prithvi...let it ring...😆

o...nandu want's to see her marriage album...n prithvi again lied to her...😕

''...Esha "Aunty I think Prithvi is lying, he has not married her"

Renuka "how do you know??"

Esha "ok I will find out about this very soon...''

this esha...the so called detective of renuka aunty...😡...stupid girl...

n renuka aunty nandu is not ill...this esha doesn't know anything...as i earlier said stupid girl...😉

"i never counted...sometimes it was ten times a day"...😕.ten times in a day...prithvi...poor nandu...😆🤣

angad n richa going to chicago...hmmm good...😛

but where is my sneha n piyush...i luv when sneha beats piyush...i really miss them...n ofcourse the great beaten piyush...n the great pain of sneha's life...🤣

update next part soon...

luv u...😊


Thanks Sweetie...i will update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ananyashera

😊 awesome update dear...

PriNi parts r superb 👏...i am enjoying this new loverboy prithvi 😉 & sweet nandini...love their bonding...in spite of memory loss & long separation their love is getting stronger day by day 😳...

angad & richa r truly the best friends of PriNi 😊...so understanding & supporting ...

but they both r going to chicago & esha is here 😡...oh no...she is so irritating...i am sure prithvi will handle esha but nandini is just too innocent & she also doesn't remember anything...i am worried about her...

& renuka...she is just biased...ill wife...what does she mean by that?😡...nandini just met with an accident...nothing is wrong with her...whatever problems esha & renuka will create, i hope PriNi will face them together...plz no misunderstandings between them now...

looking forward to see more romantic PriNi scenes in party 😳...plz update soon...

Thanks for your lovely comments sweetie... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshera

Awesome update

so now even Nandini's falling for him all over again.
Nooo! Not this Esha again! y the hell has she come n y is she so annoyingly interfering.
I think she has planned something fr the party.
i so luvd it when Prithvi said that its never a pleasure to meet her.
Awe! luvd that night scene. Prithvi is so naughty.
Here we r seeing a complete different shade of Prithvi's character that probably comes into view only when he's with Nandini.
We 2 miss the old Nandini. Plz bring her back soon.
update soon.

thanks for your sweet comments...well you wll see why he is so romantic with her as the story moves further...keep reading and commenting...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: samikshachauhan

lovely as ever!!!!👏 👏 👏

i knew prithvi won't divert his attention bcz of dat phone😛
ha ha i m still laughing at the way prithvi irritates her at the end😆
having fun at the expense of my poor nandu😳
dude she'll kill u once she remembers everything😆
plzzz plzzz plzzz update soon ... waiting...😊

Hi Sami...love your comments sweetie...😊lets see further how he teases her...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

lovely update..!!!

but u make me greedy u know...
everytime i feel the update is very small...😉

Thanks Dear...will update soon...i am glad you like it so much 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: priyakinnikar12

lovely UD yar👏👏

isha is jealous of nandini😛😛
loved the way prithvi teases nandini at the end😆😆😆
update soon dear cant wait now😍😍
love uu🤗🤗

Thanks a lot sweetie...i will update soon... 🤗

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