MG: Shetan Ka Ghar-Thread 4

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Guys another thread already...I don't know what to say...hope you guys always love this Shetan!!!!😳

This update was for all the spammers in the pervious thread and I really did try to make it as long as possible and it is full of Maaneet's moment only for you guys!😳😳 Love you guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ohh one more thing...I will send out PM's to EVERYONE once a week now...😳

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😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 33

Geet looked at Maan...there was something different about him today...something that she never saw before...he was happy...why? What could be the reason? There were so many things she wanted to ask him but couldn't...even though she gave herself completely to him there is still some confusion inside her...she doesn't know what kind of right does she have on him as his wife? Does she still have the rights to ask him questions? Does she have the rights to know what is going in his head? Will he EVER share his feelings yeah, he confessed what he feels about her...he loves her but what about his past?

She knew there is still more to his past then what he told...She still wanted him to share his thinking, she wanted to get to know him better to help her know what she is feeling..what Pari said is true or not. They made love two times but she was never in her senses..she wants to know how to feels to love...she wanted to try but how can she when she always encounters a wall. His wall is so thick that she cannot get past it...how can she break it? This Shetan is so unpredictable and that is one thing that scares her.

Maan traces her lips with his thumb..she looks at him..he smiles...for the first time he smiled...he was feeling very light...seeing her suffer made him happy...seeing her cry for her son added more happiness...he enjoyed the view...he loved every single second of it and he will not forget those moments...nope..there is still more to go though...more to plan, more of them suffering...his mind wanders back into the past...he closes his eyes to block it out...no his past will not become his weakness...he didn't work this hard to spoil everything...

By water.
Badle ki aag me jal raha hai woh,
Nahin usko koi bhi ehsaas
Na din na raat ki fikar
Bas ek hi mukaam pe puchne ki zidd
Badla, badla aur sirf Badla.

Geet looks at him confused...his expressions.. changed...he seemed to be in deep thought...about what? He opens his eyes and looks at her...he moves his hand to the arm...as he was moving..Geet was slightly moving back...he was teasing her...he holds her hand and brings it toward him...he leans toward her and kisses her lips...

Maan: Geet...(he whispers) I am so happy today.

Geet: Why?

Maan: Because I finally got what I wanted...(She stands up before him...he twirls her around...he hugs her from the back while she was left confused...what did he mean?) Lets go to dinner?

Geet: Dinner?

Maan: Yeah just you and me...I have already planned...come on go get ready...

Geet: But Maan

Maan: No more questions Geet...(he makes her look at me...) Get ready...I will be down stairs...

He leaves the room...leaving her confused...she does what he asked before he questions again...meanwhile Maan waited for her downstairs. He receives a intercom from the security guard outside..

Maan: Hello...

SG: Sir someone is here to see you...

Maan (smirks) ohh really? Who is it?

SG: Its a women..she says that she knows you...Pammi...

Maan ("she is here so soon... not even two hours has been passed") hmm I am busy..and don't have time to meet anyone...

Sg: But sir..she is crying

Maan: And why should I care? Do what you are told to do. (He relaxes back in the sofa...he looks back toward the stairs and saw her coming down wearing a red saree...with sequenced borders..he stands up and goes at the bottom of the stairs...he holds out his hand..she slowly puts her hand on top of his...) Shall we go?

She nodes her head yes. Maan leads her out to the door. He takes the keys from the driver..he just wanted to be alone with her tonight...as he was driving out..Maan ignored her and kept driving..Geet looked back and saw a women calling out his name but he paid no attention...

Geet: Maan stop the car..the women might need you

Maan: I don't have time for such people. If she really needs me then am sure she will come again right...(he kept driving...he stops the car at a beach...she steps out..but due to her heels it was difficult for her to walk. Maan picked her up and led her to a table that was decorated with candles..food was already there...she looked around..no one was at the beach...) its all for us...

Geet (smiles at him) Why all this? (A soft music played in the background..Maan held her hand as he slowly danced with her. She looked around to see if anyone was watching...she was feeling uncomfortable...)

Maan: No one will come. For the night this beach is ours...(he kisses her lips..she puts her head on his chest...somehow she loved his protective nature, she felt safe in his arms...Maan hugged her back...)

Geet: Maan...

Maan: hmmm

Geet: Am I your wife?

Maan: yeah...

Geet: Can I ask you a question?

She looks at him...both stop dancing..."she wanted to share his happiness but not without knowing why...she hated being in the darkness..he knew everything about her...but she is still stuck at the same spot from the beginning...she did whatever he asked but she wanted at least little bit of right to know his past, his thoughts, everything...she couldn't bring herself to ignore it..."

Maan: You can ask me anything

Geet: Could you tell me more about your past? (Hearing of the past made him mad...he didn't want to think about it...she saw the changes in his expressions...) I want to know...I want to understand you...you say I am your wife but in what way? (he lets go of her...she holds his hands) Please Maan...won't you give me at least that much?

Maan (looks at her...questioned face...) I...am not ready...

He brings out his hands from her grip and goes to the table. Geet stood there..."not ready...how can she ever understand him...if he is not ready then she will have to find some other ways to find out...she wasn't going to be in the dark anymore...she wanted to understand her Shetan...

For the first time he didn't have an answer..he didn't know what to say...but that was the truth...he was not ready...to share his past...he couldn't open up the same wall, pain, memories...it took him many years to get through it...he made his past his strength...he wanted revenge...he has been alone for so long..that he doesn't know the meaning of share...it always has been him...no one bothered to ask him what he is going through..what he is feeling...no one...now she is asking for that...and that is one thing he cannot give her...his past is his...his memories is his...

Both ate dinner in silence..none knew what to say...both of them their own thoughts, own demons, questions running through their heads...it was hard for both to give each other what they desire...both were confused about their relations, where they stand but again both were determined in their own way. One wanted revenge and one wanted answer to her questions. In this game who will win? What will be the outcome? Will finding out the answers and getting revenge help them in their relationship?

Both of them walked on the beach in silence again...Maan helped Geet walk since it was difficult with the saree..he picked her up again... looking at each other...he puts her in front of the car's hood...he kisses her neck...she puts her arms around neck..as he kissed her...

He puts his head on her chest..listening to her heart beats...it soothed him...he remembered going to the doctors office with his mother to get sonograph for Pari...he was right with her...the doctor played her heart beat...it was beautiful...his mother looked at him with a smile...he was in awe...he laughed seeing the sonograph...watching her move around inside...Maan tensed up thinking about this...he hugged her tightly...

"Geet love me..." He hugged her tightly...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TG_LEmsdZao[/YOUTUBE]

He looked at her and hugs her...both slid off the car...Maan picked her up...carried her to a tent he had...which was hidden from where they ate..she looked inside...candles everywhere..with lights at the top giving the illusions of the stars...

Maan puts her down and hugs her from the back...Geet becomes shy and hugs him back...he kisses her neck...she wraps her arms around his neck...both of walk backwards until they fall down on the small bed...she looks at him with smile...she closes her eyes as Maan takes off her sari pin...she turns around...Maan kisses her back..while trailing his fingers..tickling her..she giggles...he opens up her blouse hook and turns her around...

she lays on top of him while she looks at him..she was hesitating to kiss him back...it was always him making the first move...he traces her face with his palm...he pulls her under him...his one hand tracing her every feature on the face while the other one move downward toward her stomach...he kisses her stomach...

Geet puts her hands on his chest...slowly moving her fingers toward his shirt button...she stops mid-way and hides her face feeling shy...Maan holds her hands and brings it toward his shirt..he helps her open his shirt buttons...she closes her eyes unable to look straight at him...he bends down kissing each of her eye...he takes off his shirt...she lays on top of him...and slowly traces his chest...she bends down kissing his chest...Maan hugged her feeling her...first time she did this..he was loving it...he holds her head and brings her face closer and closer to him...he kisses her lips...both kiss each other not being able to get enough...

Before they knew they were under the bed sheet feeling each other...Maan couldn't stop kissing her everywhere while he moved in rhythm...Geet holds him tightly..kisses his neck...she silently cries..

Maan wipes her tears away...and kisses her eyes...she smiles at him...he traces her kisses down her neck..stopping at her chest...he kisses each of her curves..Geet moans as she feels him...Both lay on the bed tired...Maan's head was on her chest...falling asleep while listening to her heartbeats with a smile...Geet looked at him...he seemed so peaceful...she wondered what he was dreaming about?

Okay guys Maan's mood was good in this one...start off the thread right with happiness and of course romance😆😆 Once again..thank you Water for that poem, thank you Arzoo, honeygrape, 111priyan, Reni, Sona, Ruhi, and everyone else for their comments/spamming the 3rd thread!😆😆

Hope you guys liked it!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😈SHETAN KA GHAR😈
CHAPTERS:



Thread 1

Thread 2

Thread 3

Current: Thread 4
Chapter 33 (above)

Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maan is right. Pammi did make haste in coming to his house.
He luvd it but it must've been devastating for geet to go through that crying seen.
If u'r husband enjoys someone's misery then it's very hard to make sense out of it.
No wonder geet wants to know more about his past.
Awww maan asked her to luv him. So sweet.
Underneath the shetan resides a little broken kid Waiting for someone to luv him with open arms.
No strings ,no loop holes just accept him the way he is.

Thank u sooo much for an adorable read.
Plz do update soon. Wud luv to read more.
Rachana's poem was well written.

And oh yeah... Congo on the new thread and me first ;)
Edited by basicquestion1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hai ram update kar k link bhi nai diya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u simi for such a beautiful update...
its nice that Maan has somebody now whom he can love...and NOW he is also getting this love back from Geet...she is his light in the dark tunnel...hope se will be able to know and understand his past and get him out of that misery he is enduring since so long...

once again...thank u so much simi for updating so soon...😊
waiting eagerly for the next part

n cograts for the new thread


Edited by thekolgal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome upate loved it
congo songo for the new thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part dear...geet got what she wanted...the feel of love...yet we want to know more about maan's past
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread...
I am so loving the flow of the story...
Please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nyc update
thanks 4 not spoiling maan' mood
gud 2 c dem forming a bond hope it strengthens wid tym
will w8 4 d tym wen maan wud open up 2 geet nd congrats 4 new thread nd thanx 4 d luvly updtae
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread...awesome update...loved maan's changing moods in this..
cont soon

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