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Posted: 13 years ago
😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 38
Maha Update

Geet sat in the room thinking about Maan...why is it so hard for him to share his pain? Why can't he accept me fully as a wife? Does he not trust me? Does he not know how much I love him? I will never leave him. She hears Maan's footsteps..she quickly lies down with her back facing Maan's side. Maan slowly opens the door and sees her lying down but he knew that she is awake...he lies down next to her and pulls her toward him. He puts his arm around her waist while he puts his head near her neck...she just lays still waiting for him.

"Geet..." (he whispers) "you are my life..my everything..." (She puts her hand on top of his..silently crying) "I want to give you all the happiness...I want to share my past...give you my trust..but I am scared...worried..what if my trust is broken? What if you leave me knowing the past? I have spent my whole life being strong...I built this wall so that no emotions could cloud my judgement..."

She lays on her back looking at him...) "I told you my past before...I saw it happen...I saw my father push my mom down the stairs while she was 7 months pregnant...I was 7 years old...she died in my arms (he holds his arms up...) right in these arms...these hands touched the blood of my unborn sister...at that moment everything was gone..I was left alone...I put my dad in jail..I kicked Pammi out of the house..I had no one to talk to..no one to share my pain...and I became so used to it...its hard for me to show my emotions...I can't break that wall Geet..it is the only thing keeping me sane...keeping me from breaking into pieces..." (he gets up...Geet gets up and hugs him from the back crying...)

Geet: I don't want to your past...it is enough to know that you trust me enough and I will wait for the day when that wall is no longer there

Maan (Holds her hand and leaves the room...after few minutes he comes out...and hands her a notebook) The rest is in here...you can read it if you want...(She takes the diary and puts it on the table...and shakes her head no...)

Geet: I just want to be with you right now...(She walks back holding his hand..while Maan quietly follows her...Maan lies down next to her hugging her...) Maan...I will be here with you always...

Maan (looks at her) I know...and even if you are not..I will find you no matter what.(he smirks)

Geet (hits his arm..) You really are a shetan

Maan (holds her hand) Yeah and you are in love with this Shetan...(He smirks...he bends down kissing her lips..Geet smiles against his lips...he kisses her neck...while she wraps her arms around his neck..Maan stops kissing her...and looks at her..she looks at him confused..he goes toward his phone and turns it off tossing it on the floor...) I don't want anyone to disturb us...

Geet hugs him feeling shy...Maan's hands went around her back..opening up her blouse...he slowly takes out her sari pin loosening her pallu...she lies down..while he trace kisses all over her open skin...he holds her arms above her head...while kissing...he kisses her on top of her chest making her moan his name...

While holding her hands with one hand his other hand slowly moved down toward her chest..tickling her...he cups one of her curve in his hand gently squeezing it...she screams when he squeezes it too hard...he kisses her on her lips muffling out her screams...he loosens his hold while now his both hands grab her curves...he completely takes out her top removing every barrier between them...he starts kissing her curves with desire...while Geet holds his shoulder for support...he kisses her stomach..

he places his one hand on her thigh pushing her hip up a little..his other hand pushes her one leg up...his hands slowly made its way up...she holds his hand to stop him feeling shy...he ignores her...slowly moving his hand upward..she gasps when she felt his hand right on top of her feminine part...with his mouth...he opens up her sari pleats with his mouth...one by one taking it out...while she laid there squirming under his touch...he stops after he sari pleats were off...he takes off his shirt..Geet looks at him.and his upper body...and closes her eyes...

"Geet tonight look at me..."

She opens her eyes and looks into his eyes...she could tell he needed her...there was so much pain hidden behind those eyes...she nodded her head yes...He throws her sari on the floor...now she was only in her sari skirt...he puts his palm on her stomach..gently rubbing her stomach while moving down...his fingers went inside the sari skirt..outlining the side of her skirt...he slowly opened her skirt...he turns her around while moving the skirt down...he kisses her from the back..starting from the top...

"You are so beautiful Geet..." He murmurs while kissing her...Maan now had removed both of their barriers...both looked at each other...both in a way felt light...yeah there were still some mysteries behind his past but Geet for some reason didn't care about it...to her now...what mattered was Maan..her Shetan...Maan moved slowly...both didn't break each other's content..he kissed her tear away as both made love to each other...
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Pammi waited outside looking at the building in front of her. She smiled...as she saw her son coming out...she quickly went up to him..."What happened?"

Dev: Its done...

Pammi (looks at him with happiness) One thing is done..

Dev: But what are we going to do? We have no money or anything...I don't want to work over there as a peon again.

Pammi: Don't worry beta...that is our next step...
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Geet sat in the room...looking at one thing for past one hour...the diary that Maan gave to her last night...she wasn't sure if she should read it or not. She was actually scared then curious..she didn't know what holds in it...his past...she didn't know if she was ready enough to know it..will she be strong enough like Maan to know his complete past...her hands shook as she reached for the diary...she held it in her hand...Savitri Khruana was written on the main cover...the diary belonged to his mom...slowly she opened the diary...

Sometimes life is not what it you want it to be. There are many things that one must learn during their lifetime and even then it is not enough. I got married at the age of 20...I couldn't be happier...he was the best husband one could ask for. He really took care of me...provide me with everything that I desired but yet he seemed so distant from me. All of my insecurities were removed, when I first held Maan, my son, in my hands...he was such a lively kid. I still laugh when I remember Maan, as a baby, pulling doctors beard whenever he would come near to give him a shot. (Geet laughed) I am so blessed to have Maan as a kid. He really made my life complete.

She flipped through some more pages...

Maan is so naughty...you know he made a really big mess in the kitchen. For a three year old he is really smart. He is always laughing, playing pranks on Kaka and me sometimes. Today is mothers day. He wanted to make something special for me...he made Kaka make breakfast for me of course with his help...Maan ended up putting flour not only on himself but on Kaka and the whole kitchen too but I couldn't have asked for a better breakfast. Only one person was missing from this moment...my husband... :(

Geet tried to imagine Maan as a kid...there were no photos of him anywhere in the house..she couldn't really imagine him smiling and laughing...she wanted to bring that same smile again...

We hired a new nanny today Pammi...actually it was my husband that brought her home stating that Maan was getting too much to handle. He is a kid..kids are suppose to be naughty and playful. I didn't see what he was talking about. How can a kid be a burden on a mother and father. He never spent any time with Maan...not even once...always busy with work but I guess its good I have someone home with me now. Pammi she seems nice..she really takes good care of Maan like her own kid. Today, I found a new friend to share other then you of course...

Pammi...is this the same person that Maan was talking about? She goes to the next page...

He hit me today. For the first time my husband hit me today that too in front of Pammi and my son Maan. I didn't mind...I could take his beating and abuse..but what hurted me the most was that he had hit me in front of Maan. My heart broke into pieces seeing him sad with tears. Maan was playing around the house..leaving his toys all over the living room...Pammi almost tripped when he came home from work. He slapped me saying I can't control the kid. Isn't he a father too? Does he not have a duty towards his kid?

Geet had tears when she read that..she could feel her pain that his mother went through..she closes the diary when Nakul informed her of Maan coming home. She went down the stairs and saw him entering with two other people. She saw the women looking at her suspiciously. Geet goes down the stairs with confusion. Maan comes in front of her and smiles. He puts his arm around her waist and takes her toward the women.

Maan: Geet..I would like you to meet Pammi Massi...(She looks at him shocked.."how can he bring her home...isn't she the one that broke the trust of his mother? How can he forget that after one day?") Pammi Maasi this is my wife Geet...(Pammi was shocked but quickly replaced that with a smile.)

Pammi: Maan you didn't tell me that you are married? (She says while looking at Geet...Dev smiles looking at her from top to bottom...she felt uncomfortable..Maan hugged her closer... suppressing his anger...)

Maan: I wanted to give you a surprise..(he smiles at her...he calls Nakul) Nakul please show Pammi Massi and Dev their rooms.

Nakul was shocked to hear her name...same thoughts ran in his head as Geet but he quickly followed Maan's order before he gets angry...Geet watched them go up the stairs...Pammi turned around while going up to look at both of them. Geet marched back and forth in the room...Maan came in with a smirk...she goes and stands before him...

Geet: Maan how can you bring her home after what you told me last night...

Maan (smirks..) Geet I will be freshen up.

Geet (blocks his way..) NO. You are not going until you tell me why you brought her home.

Maan (Looks at her arm and then at her...) I have a reason behind it...I don't do anything without any reason. Just keep watching what I will do...(he says with anger and leaves...she opens the closet door taking out his clothes before going down to make dinner...)
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Pammi and Dev smiles...congratulating each other for their successful plan of getting inside the house...while Maan smirks in the room laughing at their stupidity...

Maan was in the office..waiting..he knew Pammi should be visiting him soon...after all...they have no money anymore..Maan made sure that they were broke...he made sure they didn't have a single penny in their pockets..he wanted them to come here walking all the way from their house and beg to him. He rolled the paper weight in his hand...as he waited...he had all the time and money in the world...he picked up the call...he was informed that two people have come to see him...Maan looked at his watch it was 10am

Maan: Make them wait...tell them I have two meetings lined up back to back...won't be free until after 3pm (he hangs up the phone..now he just had to wait...he gets up keeping himself busy with playing dart board..he looked at the time...two hours passed by and yet they didn't leave...he smirked..he knew they wouldn't...they need him...and in a way he needed them too to fulfill his revenge...

the time came...Maan walked out of the office and saw them sitting outside...Pammi looked up and saw Maan. She cried and ran up to him. Everyone stopped to look at them but one look from Maan made them runaway in fear.

Pammi: Maan we have no where to go now. We have no money. (Maan made a sad face) I don't know what we will do. Where we will go.

Maan: Its okay...Pammi Massi

Pammi: I know you helped us a lot already but please do us one more favor...

Maan; Anything you want..

Pammi: Get us a small house or an apartment...please...anywhere..

Maan: I can't do that..(Both look at him shocked...Pammi looked down mad...) I can't do that if I already have a house for you to live in

Pammi (Looks up with a smile) What do you mean?

Maan; you will come with me at my house..after all its the least I can for you. You took care of me.

Pammi: God bless you beta.

Maan (smiles) come lets go home...

Pammi looks at Dev..."now we will use Maan...just like I used his father...this property will be mine...'

Dev: What about his wife?

Pammi: Don't worry...as long as we have Maan on our side..nothing else matters (She smirks)

Maan in the room..."I will destroy you Pammi...you messed with the wrong person..." He smirks and just when he was about to leave..he receives a phone call...

"Hello...what?!" He threw the phone on the floor in anger...his father has been released from jail.

Guys sorry if it is short and not as long..I woke up with a fever and a stuffy nose...and is busy at work😭 Hope you guys liked the twists that I brought in here as well as some Maaneet moments
Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

waiting! dhamaka ke liye!!


its up😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
😆😆 dekah mai..btw whats happning on OS dhaaga?
mera net was down re..isliye last week full i was crying😭
bindu tells me mazee karring sab
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Posted: 13 years ago

its up😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey its awesome part dear...

loved the maaneet moments...

waiting for the next part...

update soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Pammi should taste her own medicines. She deserve that.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
just luvd luvd it
awww maaneet r now one as maan n geet n not shetan & geet
geet luvd him widout knwing his past
awww such a hot & passionate part
luvd how geet is understanding maan n his pain behind his anger
poor maans mom she suffered so much
i so wanna make this pammi n dev b eaten by piranhas
arrghh they r so cheap
how dare dev lay eyes on geet
hope maan makes them rot in hell
how can such cheap ppl exist on earth
just wait n watch pammi shetan is cuming
cont soon!
Edited by ananya95 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic update
loved the maaneet bit *wink* ;) heheheh
pammi is a BEEEP and maan is gonna sort her out MSK way 😎
loved the update
cant wait for the next part
continue soon
mwahh
xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
oh no maans father is out but maan would take care of it i know no can can leave peacefully by messing with msk
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Posted: 13 years ago
its awesome
love Maaneet moments
Shit...how his father got bail??
This Dev and Pammi are so dead🤬
Enjoy your vacations
Will be waiting for monday
Luv
TC
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