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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay guys lets close this thread down so I can update the next chapter either by today (if it is closed today) or wait till tomorrow...😆

Enjoy!

😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 40

Today is our wedding anniversary. I have made his favorite food and decorated the whole house hoping to please him. Maan helped me with making a cake on him, although I had to stop him from eating all the frosting. Chocolate cake is Maan's favorite as well. Both the father son have similar tastes..if only both spent some time together.

Anyway, He has such a big sweet tooth. The minute I would turn my back on the cake..he would take his finger and wipe the chocolate frosting from top of the cake putting it into his mouth. I pretended I didn't notice. You know the saying...mothers have two eyes on the back of their heads. I hope he likes it.

"Chocolate cake...what if I make it for Maan...will he like it too?"

Geet quickly smiles and goes to the kitchen to make him a cake. Finally, she got to know at least one of his likes. She was thankful that Pammi and Dev were not downstairs. For some reason she was getting this weird vibe from them. She didn't like the way Dev looks at her or smiles at her. Geet could see the double face of Pammi and she cannot wait to know her true colors and what she has done to make Maan like this. What trust did she break? What trust did his father break? This house is filled with mystery that draws one over here. This house truly is a Shetan's house from the past to the present ruled by two different Shetans.

Maan sat in the office...angry...he closed his eyes...his face..how dare he show his face to him again after what he has done. He calls the detectives...

"DO I HAVE TO CALL YOU GUYS FOR UPDATES! I PAY YOU TO REPORT TO ME NOT THE OTHER WAY AROUND! What happened with what I asked last night?..."

He slams the phone on the table...Pammi and Dev they are messing with wrong person...now they will pay for letting him out. They will pay for messing with me and for thinking they can play two games. Maan smirks..he calls up Adi..

Adi (knocks on the door) yes Sii siirr you called?

Maan: Yes, you know the peon that used to work here...

Adi: Yes sir...he went to the hospital right

Maan; hmm get him a position in the accounting department. Have him look at the accounts, give him the training that he needs.

Adi: Yes sir but (He shuts his mouth up after seeing his angry face) anything else sir?

Maan: You may leave now. (Adi nodes his head and quickly leaves the office...Maan sits back in the chair...okay Dev...lets see how you get out of my trap that I will set out for you...he smirks...)

Geet at home looks at the time..it was almost time for him to come home. She looks at the cake...feeling quiet happy with the outcome. She couldn't wait to see Maan's face when he sees she made his favorite cake. As she was clearing up the table..Dev comes from behind her and smiles.

Dev: Nice cake. (His voice startles her..she turns around to look at him. He was smiling at her.) What is the occasion?

Geet: woh just like that...

Dev (comes forward a little...Pammi smirks while peaking inside the kitchen) Can I have a bite?

Geet: No...I made it for

Maan: WHAT IS GOING ON HERE!!

Both were shocked and turns around to see Maan's red angry face. He was staring down at Dev with anger. He came home from work but just as he was going up the stairs..he saw Dev near Geet. Anger and jealousy took control of his body. Now he had no idea what he can do.

Geet looks at him with fear. She never saw him this mad before. Dev backed up a little seeing his anger...Maan comes forward and steps in between of Geet and Dev almost shielding her. He holds her hand and drags her outside the kitchen to the room. He closes the door with anger and backs her up against the door. He looks at her with anger...

Geet (looks at him with tears) Maan you are hurting me

Maan: Not as much as how I am feeling right now. How much pain I am going through. YOU ARE ONLY MINE!

Geet (touches his face) I am...only yours...no one else's...(her touch was calming his anger...he loosened his hold on her shoulders a bit..) I told you this heart beats only for you now...I only love you.

Maan (looks at her...) I can't lose you

Geet: You won't. (Geet looks at him with worry...she was beginning to understand her Shetan a little...she could see his shell being broken up a little...she saw his vulnerable side...he is not as strong as he portrays in front of everyone...she now knew how much of constant reassurance he needs. She won't ever leave him but hopefully he understands that overtime...) I made something for you today. (Maan smirks and pulls her closer...he nuzzles her neck while playing with her hair...)

Maan: What did you make?

Geet: Chocolate cake. Your favorite.

Maan looks at her shocked...chocolate cake...he remembers making the cake with his mom when he was little..he loved her frosting...the way she made it...he remember she giving him a frosting filled bowl to lick away...he loved watching her baking in the kitchen while he sat on the kitchen counter...eating the cookies or trying to help her making a huge mess in the process. He lets go her...he wanted to forget his past...he didn't want to remember anything of the past however great the memories might be. Geet looks at him shocked...

"Maan what happened?"

Maan: I have to go freshen up.

Geet: You didn't say anything about the cake

Maan: I don't eat sweets.

Geet: But I thought you would like...

Maan: I don't...I don't like anything that is related to my past. I have changed and so have my taste. (He leaves for the bathroom in anger...)
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Pammi and Dev laugh with each other seeing Maan's reaction.

Dev: I loved his reaction...but gotta say he got a nice looking wife. I wouldn't mind having her for one night

Pammi: Dev don't forget our main mission here. We know his weakness now...we have to use that weakness against him

Dev: You are right...

Pammi (smirks) Little by little we will break him down...and give him the same treatment that he did to me...(she says with anger)

Precap: Why don't you change me since you took out the clothes?😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update dear...loved it...

wow and am first today...😊

ohhh this pammi n dev😡 can you pls keep that dev away from geet...😡 he is sick...😡

"Geet (touches his face) I am...only yours...no one else's...(her touch was calming his anger...he loosened his hold on her shoulders a bit..) I told you this heart beats only for you now...I only love you."


ooh i loved this part...
Edited by honeygrape - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
want ki pammi ko ache se maza chakye maaneet...maaneet ko alag mat krna
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...maan really seems not to be liking it on seeing any other person near geet...especially dev...and then geet made the cake...but he doesnt want to hear ot it...awesome update n wonderful precap...hehe...continue soon n thnxxx...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...maan hates everything related to his past even the sweets now..poor him..he has suffered so much..dev and pammi are really evil...they are plannind to use geet now...but i guess maan will never let that happen...
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago



Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part!!!!!!!

paami n dev messing with wrong person n thinking of using geet will cost them heavy... poor they dont even know hpow deadly possessive he is abt geet!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I wanna mass murder EVERY SINGLE Dev that shows up in all your stories!!! 😡

DEVVV!!!!!!🤢 He's so disguisting!
Maaneet: 😳

Precap: 😍

😉
Edited by XXaquafireXX - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update, paami aur dev kitne galat famimei jerahe hei, maan unko kacha chabayega agar woh geet ke ass pass be aeye.
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Posted: 13 years ago
There it goes...Pammi and Dev will surely create rift b/w Maaneet...I really really hope that it doesn't happen, b/c if Maan treats Geet this way, then how is he better than his father


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