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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: angili

I know simi I am just joking and laughing with you


I know Angi. Same here😆😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk


*pouts* no one understands me hmph..
Looks like you are the only one that knows what I am going thru😆

Angi deary I will always love you and everyone!

Nice try btw..Ii will try to make it long but I know not possible😆😆


awww...



no doubt about that...😊

hope angi is happy now😆
Edited by honeygrape - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I updated One shot take a look guys!

in the meantime am gonna finish this update...in like half hour...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay guys,

Finally back with the update. Sorry it took so long...Hope you guys like this update...new twists in the story..so lets see what happenes...

Ohh yeah do read the note at the end...very important!
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😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 36

Geet looked at Maan as he slept peacefully. She has never seen him this shant before. There was new sense of calmness around him now ever since the confession she made last night. She never thought that she will be able to fall in love with her Shetan. The Shetan that left no stone un-turned in order to get her. He made her life hell but sweet as well. She gently traced his feature...slowly moving her finger from his forehead, to his nose before stopping at his lips.

She blushed thinking how he gently kissed her last night. One thing that really bothered her though no matter what...no matter how much she loves him and wants to give it a try on their marriage..there is and always will be a "but" in their relationship. His past still haunts her. What is in his past that made him like this? What is he hiding? Why doesn't he want to share it with her? She quickly removed her finger when he stirred in his sleep. She lays down turning her back towards him. She felt his arm going around her waist pulling her towards him. She holds his hand on top of her stomach...Maan nuzzles her neck from the back...she closes her eyes...

Maan: If you want to touch me just say so...I wouldn't mind...(He whispers against her ear, teasing her..making her blush...he was awake the whole time she was tracing his face...he makes her lie down on her back to look at her...(he kisses her neck while she kept her eyes closed...he holds her hand and brings it to his face..) Here now you can touch me...(She tried to remove her hand due to shyness and feeling really embarrassed that she got caught...she shakes her head no...Maan lets go of her hand and looks at her...) Okay looks like I have to show you what to do...(He brings up his hand and touches her face...he traces her forehead with his finger...moving down to each eye...placing small kisses as he moved down on the same spot where his finger had traced her feature...He gently pressed his thumb on her lips making her gasp...) Like this Geet...

He replaces his thumb with his lips and gently kisses her. She puts her arms around him while he kisses her and while he still moved his finger down her neck, to her chest...he kisses her neck moving down as his fingers moved down simultaneously. He gently rubs her belly with his palm..she arches her back slightly..giving more room for him.

He kisses her stomach as he puts his one hand around her back holding her in place. He moves upward while kissing...he kisses her in between the hallow of her chest...she holds his shoulder for support...Maan holds her sari pallu almost pulling it off when the phone rang. Maan looks at the phone with anger. Geet quickly runs to the bathroom unable to face him.

Maan: This better be a good reason to call me this early. (he smirks) Let her plead and cry as much as she wants. I will be there soon. (he hangs up the phone. Geet stands there shocked at the statement he made. Maan looks her way and gets up.) I have to go. (he goes to the bathroom to get ready. Geet sat opposite of him on the dining table looking at him. Maan puts the spoon down looking at her...) What happened?

Geet (looks down...and fidgets with her dupatta unable to ask him what she wanted to ask him. Maan comes around the table and sits next to her...he makes her look at him urging her to speak) woh aaj subah phone par

Maan (sighs) Don't worry about that...in time you will find out. (he looks at the time) I have to go now. Bye. See you tonight...

he gets up to leave...leaving her yet again doomed in her own thoughts...Maan orders the driver to go to the hospital. He goes inside..hearing loud noises. He goes toward the noise..there was a crowd present around her..while a women yelling and crying noises could be heard. Maan smirks he knew who that voice belonged to. He made his way past the crowd. She was at the receptionists yelling...trying to make her understand while the doctors tried telling her same thing again and again.

Doctor: You cannot leave from here without paying the bills.

Pammi: But I don't have any money. Please I will do anything. Please.

Doctor: Am sorry..if you don't pay then we will be forced to call the police on you. (Maan crosses his arms across his chest happy hearing that..)

Pammi (shocked): What?! You can't do that! It is you guys that will be going to the police station. You guys over charged me with all the medication. I have proof.

Doctor: Ma'am we didn't over charge you...we just did our job. (The doctor looked toward Maan. He shook his head yes.) Nurse please call the police right now.

Pammi: Please don't do this. I really have no money. please..(she looks at the crowd and saw Maan standing there. She smiles and goes to him...she holds his hand..) Maan beta look at what the doctor is saying.

Maan (puts on a sad and sympathetic look) What happened Pammi Massi?

Pammi: Look at what the doctor is saying. They are over charging me and said that they will put me in jail if I don't pay

Maan (shocked) What?! (he holds her hand) Don't worry I will make it all better. (he goes to the doctor...) What is the problem here?

Doctor: She is not paying her amount sir. We tried explaining to her nicely but she is not listening. We have no other option but to call the police now.

Maan: Hmm let me see the bill. (The doctor hands him the bill. He was shocked) the amount is too big.

Pammi: Maan won't you pay...please...

Maan: I wish I could...but it is too much..I don't know

Pammi: Maan don't say that...please..you have the property the business..you could do something...(Maan holds her hand)

Maan (smiles) Okay...(he looks at the doctor) I will have my accountant pay the whole amount...(Pammi looks at him with happiness)

Pammi: thank you beta..I knew I could count on you. (Maan gives her a reassuring smile. Both hug..Maan gives her an evil look while hugging...while Pammi smiled..."you still are the same Maan as you were as a kid...a fool..." She smiles...)
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NOTES:
Okay I have good news and bad news and a very good news...which news should I give first? hmmm okay I will give you guys a bad news first followed by two good news. I don't want you guys to kill me and by the time you guys read the two good news maybe your anger will lessen as well.

BAD NEWS:
I will not be able to update after Wednesday. Thanksgiving is coming on Thursday..and I will be busy starting from Thursday with family. So I don't think I will come online as much or maybe not at all during that time. So After Wednesday I will return on Monday with my regular updates.

GOOD NEWS:
I am on facebook so if you have facebook and wants to add me as a friend. Here is the link: https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100002153940039

A VERY GOOD NEWS:
Since I won't update on Thrusday, I will give a Maha update on Wednesday with loads of twists and maybe some look into the past as well.

So that is it! What you guys think?😆

Ohh and do check out this topic that I made yesterday: Security Systems and Vikram
Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Simi lovely update 😊
Pammi has still not changed 😡
well i know thanks giving in US, np take your time, but will u update all the ffs pls pls
Edited by zaara2212 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update
nyc way 2 start wid some maneet moments nd den shift twds pammi
lyk d pace of ur story
:)
Edited by 111priyan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zaara2212

Simi lovely update 😊
Pammi has still not changed 😡
well i know thanks giving in US, np take your time, but will u update all the ffs pls pls


Thank you!

Yeah I will try to update all my fan fics by wednesday folloowed by mass pm's😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
I jus hop Maan open up with Geet
Pammi is so fool thnking Maan is fool hahahaha
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 111priyan

Lovely update
nyc way 2 start wid some maneet moments nd den shift twds pammi
lyk d pace of ur story
:)


Thank you!!
Of course I had to start with the Maaneets..itna toh banta hai 😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

I jus hop Maan open up with Geet

Pammi is so fool thnking Maan is fool hahahaha


yeah lets see if he does or does not Afsha
haha yeah I know..she is so stupid to think that he is the same😆

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