haseen safar-mg ff last part pg 62 - Page 2

part-1

It was a time of evening and a train reaches a station. The sign board in station states hoshiyarpur.

People are busy in sttation . Som wher thee to catch the ain , some are leaving train. Suddenly, we can see a 2 people running towards tain. One of tem was bleeding. He has bruises all over body. Hands, head bleeding. The man who was bleeding was a young one . May be in his 25's and the other one was quite old. Like in his 40's.

Old man- beta maan, tum iss train se mumbai chale jao. Ye lo ticket.

Maan- nahi uncle mein iss arah apko yaha akele chod kr nahi jaa sakta. Aur dev, dev bhi to nahi hai.

Ram uncle- maan meri baat samjho. Wo log bahut khatarnak hai. Wo tumhari property ke liye tumhe maar denge. Abhi bhalayi isi mein hai ki tum yaha se chale jao.

Maan- nahi uncle main iss arah apko, dev ko aur iss jagah ko chod kar nahi ja sakta. Kya karunga main mumbai mein. Mein to waha kisi ko janta tak nahi.

Ram uncle- maan meri baat samjho. Tumhe jaana hoga. Tum mumbai ki chinta mat kao. Do din baa dev wapis aa raha hai mein usse mumbai bhej dunga tumhare paas.

Maan- par tab tak min waha kaha rahunga, kya karunga.

Ram uncle- tum ek kaam karna jab tak dev na aay waha ek hotel me reh lena aur han galti se bhi yaha apne ghar me phone mat karna.

Maan- jee uncle.

Ram hand overs maan some money.

Ram- maan ye paise rakho kaam aayenge. Mujhe inform kar dena mumbai jakar. Jab bhi phone karo mee ya dev ke mobile me hi phone karna. Aur sabse pehle mumbai jakar ek naya number lel lena. Aur ye no phek dena. Thik hai.

Maan- thik hai uncle. Jaisa aap kahenge main waisa hi karunga.

Train whistels.

Ram- maan ab tum jao. Apna khayal rakhna

Maan hugs him.

Maan- uncle aap bhi apna aur dev ka khayal rakhiyega.

Maan enters in train went to his compartment. Its an A.C compartment where two persons can sit.

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Originally posted by: luv_DD

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Originally posted by: preethia

interesting characters...

maan in a diff character...

Maan- par tab tak min waha kaha rahunga, kya karunga.

Originally posted by: teju2292

wow intrestimg dear
but maan is sounding like a girl...sorry to say that
but he is trully sounding like a village girl
when he said these words...
<font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Kya karunga main mumbai mein. Mein to waha kisi ko janta tak nahi.</font>

<font><font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Maan-
par tab tak min waha kaha rahunga, kya karunga.</font></font>

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<font><font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Maan-
thik hai uncle. Jaisa aap kahenge main waisa hi karunga.

<font color="#000000">but truly to say i like it so much
pm me...
waiting for more dear...
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part-2

Maan enters in train went to his compartment. Its an A.C compartment where two persons can sit.

Other sit was filled and a prson was sleeping in it, covering himself from head to toe.

Maan places his bag and sits in his place.

Train leaves the station. Maan was constantly looking out of window. His hands and head are still bleeding. He was in pain . Pain that was he is in . He looks towards sky and says why muma papa why? Why?Aap log kyun chale gaye mujhe chod ke? Kaise jiyun mein apke bina? Nahi reh sakta apka manu ap logo ke bina and he starts crying. Tears are flowing from his eyes.

He looks out and starts singing.

Chithi na koi sandesh
hoo, chithi na koi sandesh
jaane woh kaun sa desh
jahan tum chale gaye
chithi na koi sandesh
jaane woh kaun sa desh
jahan tum chale gaye
chithi na koi sandesh
jaane woh kaun sa desh
jahan tum chale gaye
jahan tum chale gaye
is dil pe lagaa ke thes
jaane woh kaun sa desh
jahan tum chale gaye...

Maan takes out the pic of his parents from his bag and sees them. Hhe caresses their pic and then hugs it.

Ek Aah Bharee Hogi
Humne Na Sunee Hogi
Jaate Jaate Tumne
Aawaz To Di Hogi
Har Waqt Yehi Hai Gham
Us Waqt Kahan The Hum
Kahan Tum Chale Gaye
Chithi Na Koi Sandesh
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
Is Dil Pe Lagaa Ke Thes
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye...

The other person who was sleeping gets up listening to his song. She was mesmerized with his singing. She feels his pain. Maan was singing and tears and flowing from his eyes.

Har Cheez Pe Ashkoon Se
Likha Hai Tumhara Naam
Ye Raste Ghar Galiyaan
Tumhe Kar Na Sakee Salaam
Hai Dil Mein Reh Gayee Baat
Jaldi Se Chuda Kar Haath
Kahan Tum Chale Gaye
Chithi Na Koi Sandesh
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
Is Dil Pe Lagaa Ke Thes
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye'''.

Listening to the song she can't control herself and start crying too.

Abh Yaadon Ke Kaante
Is Dil Mein Chubhte Hain
Na Dard Thaherta Hai
Na Aansoon Rukte Hain
Tumhe Dhoondh Raha Hai Pyaar
Hum Kaise Karein Iqraar
Ke Haan Tum Chale Gaye
Chithi Na Koi Sandesh
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
Is Dil Pe Lagaa Ke Thes
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye...
O Kahan Tum Chale Gaye
O Kahan Tum Chale Gaye
O Kahan Tum Chale Gaye...

maan stops singing to find a sweet, angelic looking girl sitting in font of him and was crying. Don't know why but maan felt pain to see her in tears.

Listening him stop she slowly look towards him to find him staring at her. She slowly removes her tears and moves towards him. She comes to him and sits beside him.

Girl ' apke gaane mein itna dard kyun hai. Aisa lagta hia ki aapne apne kisi khas ko khoya hai.

Maan- dard ab yehi to ek chiz hai jo mere paas bacha. Aap sahi keh rahi hai maine apni zindagi ke sabse anmol , sabse khaas logo ko kho diya, apne muma-papa ko kho diya.

Girl- ohhh I m so sorry.

Maan- aap kyun sorry bol rahi hai. Isme aap ki galti hai.

Girl- aap bahut ache hai. Aur bahut acha gaana bhi gaate hai.

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