haseen safar-mg ff last part pg 62 - Page 4

My geet. Aur kaun
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hello..i just read ur ff and the concept and both parts are awesome

thank you all for the comments and likes . i m really happy with it.

part 3

Girl ' aap bahut acha gaatte hai. Par apke gaane mein itna dard kyun hai. Aisa lagta hia ki aapne apne kisi khas ko khoya hai.

Maan- dard ab yehi to ek chiz hai jo mere paas bacha. Aap sahi keh rahi hai maine apni zindagi ke sabse anmol , sabse khaas logo ko kho diya, apne muma-papa ko kho diya.

Girl- ohhh I m so sorry.

Maan- aap kyun sorry bol rahi hai. Isme aap ki galti hai.

Girl- aap bahut ache hai. Aur bahut acha gaana bhi gaate hai.

Maan smils slightly- thank you.

Girl fowarding her for hand shake- hi I am piya

Maan shaking her hand- maan, main maan hun.

Piya looking towards his bleeding hand.

Piya- oh god maan u r bleeding. Tumh to bahut chot lagi hai. K minute let me bandage it. Piya takes out her first aid kit and starts bandaging maan.

Maan- aap ye sab saath lekar ghooomti hai, asks with an innocent face.

Piya smiles listening his question- haan main inhe apne saath rakhti hun, doctor jo hun.

Maan- aap doctor hain?

Piya- haan. Main mumbai ke hhopital me doctor hun.

Maan- iska matlab aap bhi mumbai ja rahi hai.

Piya- haan , aap bhhi mumbai ja rahe hai.

Maan- haan.

Piya- maan agar aap bura na maane to ek baat puchu

Maan- puchiye na

Piya- apko ye chot kaise lagi. Pke jakhmo kodekh kar lagta hai jaise kisi ne talwar ya kisi dhar waale hahiyar se maara ho.

Maan with painful eyes- ye jhakm mujhe mere apno ne diye hain.

Piya- apno ne?

Maan- paiso ke liye. Unhone dokhe se mujhse propetty ke papers par sign karwa kar saare propery apne naam kar li aur ab mujhe jaan se maar dalna chhte hai.

And after saying this tears started flowing out of his eyes.

Piya- shhh shant ho jaaiye maan. Kyun khud ko dukh pahucha rahe hai. Bhul jaiye sab.

Maan-kaise bhul jau piya.

Piya- maan agar ap isi tarah dukhi rahenge au royenge to aapke muma-papa bhi dukhi hoenge.

Maan listening to piya removes his tear- nahi main apne muma-papa ko dukhi nahi kar sakta. Main nahi rounga.

Piya smiles slightly ' ye hui na baat.

Piya- so maan friends.

Maan- shaking hands with her , friend. Ek baat kahu piya

Piya- kahiye

Maan- ap bahut achi hai. Aap bilkul meri mum ki tarah baat karti hai.

so guys i hope u all would like this part.

i know u all now wanted to throw chappals and tamatars on me, as u all have expected geet. but kya kare i m little devil( sahi kaha na saba) so wait till geet enters. i m going to give her a dhamaka entry

do leave your likes and comments

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Haan tinu sahi kaha devil ho tum
Awesum update
Chalo maan ko koi saathi tho hai
Varna bechare ka kya hota . .
I dnt say dat gal z geet so i win 😉
Piya ko maan ne ma se compare kiya
Kya hoga maan tera. .

hey nice part dear...⭐️
⭐️par itna short...
thoda aur bada dena tha na...
so the girl was Piya...
Maan k mom dad k baare me baat karke
Piya ne,ek bache ko samjhate hai aise samjhaya...
nice update dear...👏
continue soon...😃

yes ur devil yar

me 2nd 😃.

Originally posted by: meena..

yes ur devil yar

awesome updates

loved the update

waiting for geet entry

story is different from others

cont soon

hehee
thanks meena
glad u liked it