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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Thank you darling.
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hi dear, update soon,cant wait for the update...please ab itna parpao mat update ke liye yaar

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#93

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

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Innocent Heart

(For Tellyme's FF - Her Complete Submission)
 
Innocent
Her Innocent heart
Only used to beat for him
Ever since she had known him
Ever since she had felt his presence
Ever since she had felt his pain
Ever since she had felt his restlessness
Her innocent heart
Only used to beat for him
 
He was the only one for her
His ego, his anger, his rejection
It was all hers and only hers
She accepted it all with an open heart
She accepted it all with her outstretched arms
She accepted it all because that is all she got from him
She accepted it all because it was all unknown to her
She accepted it all because her heart had given him all the rights
Just to him, because
Her innocent heart
Only used to beat for him
 
Days became months and months became years
She grew up into a beautiful woman
And he into a handsome man
She loved him day after day
He hated her night after night
One day destiny played a game and married them together
She knew that she loved him
Loved him with the last breath of her selfless soul
She knew that he hated her
Hated her with the last breath of his heartless soul
Yet, her innocent heart
Only used to beat for him
 
Every minute, every hour, every day
He kept on tormenting and torturing her
With his silence and with his cruel words
She died a little breath by breath
She died a little day by day
She died a little night after night
Her eyes became soulless and hollow
Her heart became as numb as a hard stone
Her tears got stuck in her throat
Her breath got suffocated in her soul
With immense pain pricking her mind, body and soul
She lost it, lost it all
Her love, her patience and her strength
She lost it, lost it all
Her selfless soul that only used to beat for him
 
Today, she is no longer innocent
Her innocent heart that only used to beat for him
Has drowned, drowned in the reality of his cruelness
In reality of his hatred and resentment
In reality of his anger and ego
Her innocent heart and her innocent soul
Are far away, far away from him.
 
Edited by Water. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
"innocent heart"
very sweet poem. full of hopes n dreams that eventually got demolished. it reminds me of  "laws of love" by Ashleydevlin . have u read it? 
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

"innocent heart"

very sweet poem. full of hopes n dreams that eventually got demolished. it reminds me of  "laws of love" by Ashleydevlin . have u read it? 


Yes, I have read all her FF's
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Water.

Innocent Heart

(For Tellyme's FF - Her Complete Submission)
 
Innocent
Her Innocent heart
Only used to beat for him
Ever since she had known him
Ever since she had felt his presence
Ever since she had felt his pain
Ever since she had felt his restlessness
Her innocent heart
Only used to beat for him
 
He was the only one for her
His ego, his anger, his rejection
It was all hers and only hers
She accepted it all with an open heart
She accepted it all with her outstretched arms
She accepted it all because that is all she got from him
She accepted it all because it was all unknown to her
She accepted it all because her heart had given him all the rights
Just to him, because
Her innocent heart
Only used to beat for him
 
Days became months and months became years
She grew up into a beautiful woman
And he into a handsome man
She loved him day after day
He hated her night after night
One day destiny played a game and married them together
She knew that she loved him
Loved him with the last breath of her selfless soul
She knew that he hated her
Hated her with the last breath of his heartless soul
Yet, her innocent heart
Only used to beat for him
 
Every minute, every hour, every day
He kept on tormenting and torturing her
With his silence and with his cruel words
She died a little breath by breath
She died a little day by day
She died a little night after night
Her eyes became soulless and hollow
Her heart became as numb as a hard stone
Her tears got stuck in her throat
Her breath got suffocated in her soul
With immense pain pricking her mind, body and soul
She lost it, lost it all
Her love, her patience and her strength
She lost it, lost it all
Her selfless soul that only used to beat for him
 
Today, she is no longer innocent
Her innocent heart that only used to beat for him
Has drowned, drowned in the reality of his cruelness
In reality of his hatred and resentment
In reality of his anger and ego
Her innocent heart and her innocent soul
Are far away, far away from him.
 


To embrace what the future holds,

 you have to first be able to let go of what

 keeps holding you on to the past
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: basicquestion1


To embrace what the future holds,

 you have to first be able to let go of what

 keeps holding you on to the past

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi,
love ur writing skills
great work
 
godbless
pls pm  ur new posts
 
love tc
dhamigeet
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.


Hey,

I am so overwhelmed with ur comments.
Thank you so much.
It means a lot to me. 
Happy Diwali to u too.🤗
I can try to see if luck comes ur way. I will try my best dear. ðŸ˜³


u deserve it dear!!!

omg really??? can't waitt!!😃