FF-A TWIST LOVE Final NOTE page 117 - Page 38

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesomd update
liked kids part.they r really naughty.abhiya part was too hot.one more thing dont end this ff soon.i love this ff very much
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thankyou - I feel so privelleged - though I am Carisma pronounced Carizma. lol
Thankyou darling for this FF with Karishma..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome amazing update ayesha,loved karishma n surya to the core,these kids r very naughty but cute too loved it.loved sid n metz emotion conversation,karishma is having feeling for jeh n surya is having feeling for ananya cool now want to see how abhiya will react to it.loved kids coonversation wid everyone.Wow abhiya romance its awesome just loved it n their shopping for kids was too good.thanks for pm n sorry for late reply,overall its awesome update you are the best writer.plz update soon n plz dont end soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

:::Precap 72:::Flying High:::

Surya had requested Tara and Kabir spend a little time at the Raichand manor with them. He was missing doing practical magic with her. Surya managed to keep Ananya with him using the old Raichand charm to flatter her till she could not say no to his cute cherub face. It was proving to hard to say no to the twins and Surya was loving everyone playing fiddle to their tunes. Karishma spent majority of the time with Jeh now. She liked having him nearby. It gave her a sense of security and he in return liked playing games with her. Chand and Haseena were beginning to get a little worried with their growing feelings emanating from Kari.
Haseena whispered her concern to Chand-I know Jeh is a good boy and is well mannered but this is unheard of. She is only a baby.
Chand motioned a similar verdict to Haseena's-I know but we can't even tear her away from him. You've seen the temper tantrums she throws at us when we try to keep Jeh out of her life. Abhay needs to handle this himself.
Haseena observing Jeh and Kari together-I hope Abhay can handle this. I can't see Kari upset.
Karishma had heard the whole conversation beaming to herself mentally noting that her grandparents truly did love her and were worried about her. Karishma had to think of a way for her Dad to accept Jeh.
Surya on Skype with his sister had waved at Abhay and Pia with eagerness. They wanted their parents to go out and see the Eiffel Tower and bring them souvenirs so they can see and be part of their parents life. Abhay didn't have the heart to say no to his children and promised he'd bring them what they wanted. Plus they would make a return home as soon as possible.
Edited by matwamango - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

OMG karishma loves jeh!!!! how will abhay react hearing this???

interesting precap... plzz update soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice Pecap...Eagerly waiting for the update! How will Abhay handle this situation?He's very possessive about his kids. Continue soon!😊
Edited by prerna26 - 13 years ago
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nyc precap waiting 4 d update!!!!
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:::Update 72:::Flying High:::

Maithali and little Karishma were looking at Beauty and the Beast book together. Karishma wanted to read the book to Maithali in her own style She wanted Maithali to feel with the full capacity of her heart which was still beating for her Dad. Nobody could blame any girl for falling for her Dad. After all he was special. But Karishma wanted Maithali Aunty to be happy with someone who loved her just as much as she loved her Father. Part of her felt bad that her Dad was always meant for her Mom but the other was glad that her Mom won the best guy ever. Both women deserved happiness and only Momma could have made Pappa happy. They were always meant for each other. Now to make Aunty Maithali see she was always meant for Chachu.

Karishma held Maithali's hand in hers laying her palm flat-I want to show U something. This is something i haven't shown anyone here. This is your story which in fact is not very different to my own fairytale book Beauty and the Beast. See Momma's story is the same as yours only U both saw it differently.
Maithali sighed deeply-U aren't still trying to show me my future are U little one? I already know your game.
Karishma flashed a bright smile-U read me well but i read everyone better. See this (Shows her hand to Maithali) Mom was always supposed to be with Pappa. She is U after all but she is like Papa's ultimate prize for his lonliness throught the centuries. He has in a way meditated for her by cleansing himself of all evil inside of him. Mom was made to bring Pappa into the light. An unnatural occurance can only be met by a supernatural occurance right? Pappa being a vampire and Momma being part U was ideal na. They fought each other and yet fate has them together is a strange fate na? U and Chachu are the same. U are fighting to hold on to Pappa. U are Chachu's ultimate gift. U have given him life. Just like Momma gave life to Pappa.
Surya crawled into the adjacent room wher Kari was busy with Maithali-Can i join in? Mishu Aunt is busy blasting Chachu and Arjun with a gun and a few balls hitting them. Its fun to watch but now i'm bored. She screams a lot. So whats going on here?
Karishma revealed-I am showing Aunty her future but i need U bhai. We have to open her up to Chachu.
Surya joined hands with his sister-U got it it. Now I guess U really want t see how special we are huh? Ok U have to close your eyes.
Maithali mused trying to keep a straight face-I do like your Chachu. U kids need to leave alone what U do not understand.
Surya made a sarcastic look-U kidding us right? We know more than you'll ever know and thats an understatement. Now Kari. (Karishma glared) Ok Sis i get it U hate the name. Show her now.
Karishma warned Maithali-I am going to make it easier for U to move on but this will mean U won't feel an inclination of feeling guilty at wanting what U think is right. Just keep an open mind.

Karishma showed Maithali another alternative route via unlocking Maithali's heart so it would feel ten folds the emotions she had buried. Karishma placed her tiny hand upon Maithali's chest bringing her brother's palms over hers so their powers would become super charged. Karishma managed to neutralise the love Maithali had for Abhay and supress it in order to allow entry for Sid. It was the last resort but this way everyone would gain from this little exercise. Maithali Aunty deserved to be happy for once in her life and if it meant a little helping hand then it was worth it.

Maithali suddenly felt a burst of energy within her as her black cloud cleared out of her mind and her heart no longer hurt. She could see with clarity now. In her minds eyes she saw how Sid and Abhay were pretty much the same guy now. All the negativity she had towards the cheeky vampire was now erased from her conciousness leaving her with positivity. All was forgiven now that Maithali didn't hold it against Sid for taking Abhay away from her. In fact she no longer felt the world screwed her over or that her fate had betrayed her. The future was no longer bleak but it brightened her whole outlook now. Destiny was not her enemy nor was this new overridden sensation to feel regret for making Sid fight so much to be with her. Maithali could see a little glimpse into her future with Sid. They were happy with each other. More than this it was the thought of knowing she was at peace with herself and didn't feel inclined to being so wrapped up with having Abhay in her head all the time.

Surya and Karishma took their hand away from Maithali looking at her catching her breath back into real time.
Surya searched for a change in Maithali's features-How do U see things now?
Maithali hugged the pair-Better. Thank U. I can't believe how complicated my life has been but i feel at one now. I think i can justify myself with no Abhay around in my head.
Karishma beamed jumping up and down in Maithali's lap-Cool. See it worked. I know Papa will always be a big part of your life but U won't obsess about him as much now. Meaning Chachu has free entry.
Maithali smiled holding both the wtins in her arms-U two won't give up will U?
Surya gave his Aunt a cute little wink-I'm my fathers son, Surya Raichands never gives up. My sister and i will keep on trying to get our best Uncle and Aunty in the World to be happy. Its all we want. Give Chachu a chance. U won't rgret it and U know the Raichand charm works on everyone.
Maithali laughed stroking their cheek-Ok U win.

Sid was running away from Misha's rubber darts shooting at him as target practice. Misha was trying her hunting techniques on Sid to see how many she got with Sid in his vampire mode-U wild cat stop shooting at me. I maybe a vampire but those things are annoying.
Misha continued her assault on Sid jumping over the couch-I am nearly all out. U have to bear it for me ok? Otherwise i will spill to Abhay that U lost the twins?
Sid gritted his teeth-Oh really? I say U tell them now that i know U and my darling nephew and niece did this on purpose at my expense. I'll see how brother dear handles his wisecracking not so funny Saali.
Misha pointed at Sid-- swearing me huh?
Sid at Arjuna pleading to take her away from him-I am getting drummed by your crazy woman sort her out dude before i really bite my teeth into something.

Maithali came out from the adjacent room folding her arms tapping it with her fingers-Oh you're going to bire something are U?
Sid chokes out a nervous laughter-No I was just saying it. I'm innocent.
Maithali gave Misha a wink-Hand over the gun sister.
Misha throws the weapon to Maithali who starts shooting at Sid laughing-How do U like me now Sid? Threatening women.
Sid caught hold of Maithali-Ok so U get to fire at me for free. I'd rather get shot by U a million times over than have some strange woman hit me. It feels good coming from U.
Maithali teased Sid back for the first time without feeling awkward about it-Oh Sid U are way too corny for me but i like the way U talk. So do U want to play a real game of wrestling huh rather than aimlessly get shot at huh?
Sid swayed Maithali in his arms finding Maithali a little different-Are U sure U are ok?
Maithali smiled-I've never been better Sid. I'm sorry for hurting U. I never meant to.
Sid kissed Maithali's hands then hushed her lips-For U Maithali i am willing to swallow any poison. U don't hurt me. Its what i feel (Points at his heart) in here that hurts.
Maithali gave Sid a sweet smile only for him-Maybe we can start again huh? Go out together alone maybe and see where we go from there huh?
Sid picked Maithali up in his arms and started swaying with her around the room.
Misha was shell-shocked at what just transpired right before her eyes.

Tara sat on Kabir's knee was playing with his fingers in her hand. Both of them were busy wrapped up in each other to bother about Maithali and Sid's love saga about to kick off. Kabir was now used to being different. Tara, Sarah or Ananya as Surya liked to call her were working with Helena to help him find his feet again. They were working on allowing his soul to re-enter without causing any consequences to the natural order of the World itself.

Kabir kissed Tara's cheek-U know we came here for the twins but they have been busy with their own matchmaking schemes.
Tara added with intrigue-Well whatever they had cooking in their over-active brain worked. Maithali is really giving Siddy boy a shot. Maybe now we can see real sparks fly huh? Abhay is going to kill Jeh. I'm not worried about Ananya seeming as Pia alreadly loves her. Karishma is Daddy's little girl.
Kabir looking into Tara's eyes with yearning-You're still worried about me aren't U? (Touche's her arms gently with his) Don't be. Whatever will happen ; will happen Tara. Take each day at a time.
Tara broke contact with Kabir-I am. Its just harder to accept it ok. I did..
Kabir soothed Tara's distress away-U are not to blame ok. My life is just jinxed. I think my family must have been very bad at one point in our lives to warrant this. Maybe its my sins for playing girls around for too long.
Tara choked out-Or maybe its because i thought i could cheat death.
Kabir finished kissing Tara's lips-We can do this together ok.

Abhay and Pia in France, Eiffel TOWER

It was dark when Abhay took Pia to their final date in Paris to the top of the Eiffel Tower. Pia had her white gown on by the German designer Philip Plein. Abhay wanted to take Pia to an eatery but they couldn't consume any human foods so there was no point of bothering with booking a table but he had sneaked in with her for a little dancing in the main hall. His kids wanted them to enjoy their last night here then their wish was his command. Abhay felt homesick for the first time in his life. He missed his Daughter's cherub cheeks and those cute dimples. The baby scent she had made him pine for her and then there was his cheeky son who owned him.

Pia encircled her arms around Abhay's waist listening to the band play in the background whispering to him-U want to go back now don't U? (Abhay's eyes spoke volumes) I want to hold my babies Abhay. Its been fun here but our place will always be with our family. They mean the World to us.
Abhay sensed Pia emoting her maternal yearnings for her twins emanating from her voice-I guess it goes to show how human we really are Pia huh?
Pia rested her head against Abhay's chest feeling him pull her closer to him twirling her around super fast-I'd rather maintain this aspect of our past mortal life Abhay. Do U think they miss us?
Abhay hoped they enjoyed their freedom because come tomorrow or within a few hours Abhay wasn't going to let his twins out of his sight-I just want to feel the warmth of their touch Pia. I'm sure they miss us right? We have taken a lot of photo's here Pia.

Pia kissed Abhay's lips smiling at him-Why don't U show me some of your other powers Abhay? I want to see the top of this place.
Abhay swirled Pia around dipping her head down and then raising her up again-Fine but i'll race U there. I want to see how fast U can pick up your vampire abilities and if U can match it with mine?
Pia flirted back with Abhay-So far i've matched U in every department dear husband.
Abhay let go of Pia's hand-On the count of three. 1, 2 (Pia left) Hey cheat.

They got out of the building and climbed up the Eiffel tower running upwards to see the beautiful view from up above. Pia waited for Abhay to catch up-So U finally made it huh?
Abhay held Pia in his arms with the wind blowing in her hair-U cheat. Now U have to pay for being such a spoil sport.
Pia held on the support of the structure of the tower itself to get to Abhay holding him in his arms-Oh U can give me whatever punishment U want to Abhay. I'll take it.

Abhay wanted Pia to kiss him with the same intensity as she had done in their mansion in Paris. Pia obeyed giving Abhay more than what he bargained for-Wow. U just keep getting better.
Pia whispered to Abhay-Oh i think i am getting the hang of being a vampire and a mother Abhay. Wait till U see what i have planned for U on our way back to India. We have plenty of time to kill before we get home. I'm planning of making the most of our alone time.
Abhay was already getting hot under the collar-Are U trying to make me sweat it out till then Pia?
Pia grinned with her lips curling into a pout-Oh the wait will be worth it Abhay.
Abhay holds Pia and jumps off the Tower feeling the thrill of the moment landing on their feet-Now this is what i call a real trip. I missed doing this.
Pia moaned-I can't believe as a human U never did this with me other than when U had to save me.
Abhay smirked at Pia-U think i'd ever endanger U by doing stupid stunts Pia. Now U are a vampire U are pretty invincible so we can go on dare devil rides only now we have a family to think about remember.
Pia pushed Abhay playfully-Yeah i know Abhay. I am doubly glad i am no longer human. Now i get to see the world in your eyes.

After half an hour Abhay took Pia in his arms and placed her in their private jet waiting for them to take off. Abhay had plenty of luggage with 2 for his daughter and one for his son. A toys luggage and then 3 for Pia and the rest were for his Mom and Dad along with Pia's parents and their friends. Just as Pia had promised Abhay was met by a night full of passion on their way back matching their honeymoon. This one was mainly led by Pia. She had teased, tantalised, made Abhay beg for release.

Pia laying in their bed in Abhay's arms-So Abhay am i forgiven?
Abhay kissed Pia again-U know how to play me don't U Pia?
Pia confided-U are an easy target Abhay. U can't help but let me get away with whatever i want. Next time i want U to show me exactly how much U want me Abhay. I can't do all teh work U know. I want my husband to show me exactly how much U want me?
Abhay smirks at Pia-I think i can arrange this Pia.

Abhay held Pia in his arms showing Pia just how much he wants her.
Edited by matwamango - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ayesha
congrats sorry was busy so read properly now read all of it😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Precap is surely interesting and the kids are notorious. Waiting for Abhiya to be back. And Abhay sure is in for a shock. But Chandeena seems to be fine with everything. Waiting to see Abhays reaction. Hope he doesn't make a falooda of Jai.

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