DIL YE MANTHA NAHIN maneet ff NOTE PG 88 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
congratulations 4 u r new ff di...

d concept is simply amazing...

post d 1st part soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Beautiful concept.cont soon
congratz girl 4 new ff,waitng 4 it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

...dear.😊.
1stly dear 4 PM me..😛..
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3rdly 4 ur new FF dear..🥳🥳🥳...
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not only that also
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me dear ...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Congrats on new FF:-D
nice one ...cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Congrats on your new F/F

Loved the concept

please update soon and pm me

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
PART _1

Geet came running to the maan 's cabin
she is so happy no one had seen her like that before all are noticing some special charm in her today
Mann Maan...
he is shocked to see geet like that he knew what she want to say him but he never thought she ll come in this way
Maan this words i never said anyone till now i never felt maan when u came in to my life it is a stone but now it is sea with much emotions which no one cant read except u
he is so happy inside but he want to tease geet !
GEET what the hell u are saying ! i cant get u !
i knew i m being so emotinal
MAAN I LOVE U
she said those 3 magical words for which he is waiting for many years
but he want to suprise her so he said
GEET u are mistaken i never thought about u like that how can u think that i love u geet !
i just helped u becoz i thought u were my frd but here u are saying love how can u geet !
she is now mad listening to those words
tears rolled down her eyes
maan want to hug and cocoon her but he thought when he gives her suprise these tears of sad ll become in to happiness
Mann plz dont say that i have seen the love in ur eyes plz dont say that u are not love with me
i cant stand maan rather i die!
GEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! shirt up how can u say that ha
i m ur frd geet be like that plz geet dont make it serious to me leave now she tunred back and he is smiling thinking about the suprise which he gives her in the evng
but here she is so hurted she want to say something but she left the place
she is drvining the car so rapidly that no one cant beat her
i cant live without him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
how can u do this babaji !!!!! i thought u were with me but why u never gave me the love what i wanted not my parents my family
now even maan dont love me
then why i should live
she goes rapidly and hit the tree where the glass broken and she is in critical condition...

SUPRISE TIME:
maan is ready to give suprise for her and he called her but her phone came not reachable he tried many times but not reachable
his he is frustated why she is not lifting the phone suddenly call came from geet darji saying that she met with accident and her condition is critical
he dont no what to do yes she is right she said she ll die
how can u do this geet ! i waited for u many years
why u did not wait for me
why u left me geet !!!!!
he ran to the hospital ...
when he came whole the KHURANA'S and HANDA'S are there in tears saying that she is no more...
he entered the ICU and he saw her she so pale still oxgyen mask is there he is just staring at her there are no words to say only tears are saying
but doc said she is no more...he sat there and shouted
GEET !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

precap: ll she come back


dear frds thanx for being with me
i m sending 327 pms hope i can get back them dear
and now i ll update daily
becoz now i have holidays dear
so no prob for 15 days


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Edited by abisamratgunjan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
awesome update
maan's one teasing session has cost her life
precap is interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
wow dear really good start amazing updaet plz continue soon😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
gud start...
hw cud he play with her emotions..
pls geet cum bak...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Omg what a start,itna bada jhatka
maan's teasng cost him his love,its awsome,update soon

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