Maaneet FF-KASHMAKASH- WHEN REALITY STRUCK - Page 10

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Very..very..very beautiful update...Maan got friend like Samir..he is very lucky.

Geet somewhat confessed her feelings but Maan is reluctant because of his physical disability and right now his future is not secure...but his coach has told him to resume his practice sessions...

Geet reached her home late...Daarji has called her...and now precap is shocking...are they going to throw her out of the house?😲

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PART -12

It's been quite late. Arohi's car was stuck there in the traffic jam, resulting more or less 30 mins delay. Although Arohi drops her back to the home. Geet enters through the main doorway. Lights in Daarji's room are still switched on, it means Daarji is still awakened which is quite an awkward thing, as normally in this time at night Daarji mainly gets into sleep. Geet is about to enter into her room, she hears Daarji's loud voice'...GEET.

She could feel her feet start digging into the ground as she finds Daarji, Papaji -her whole family is standing there along with Brij. Rano is also there.

Brij: Kahan gayee thi tuh?

Geet: Jii, main main...

Brij: Yeh bakre ki tarha main main kaya kar rahi hai ...?

Rano: Brij, yeh toh Arohi ke ghar gayee thi naa'!!

Brij: Hain Maa...Arohi ke ghar gayee thi yeh'...hain na'..kyun Geet...bata sab ko ,Arohi ke ghar gayee thi naa tuh...bata...bata...he slaps her badly.

Geet remains silent.

Brij: Daarji, yeh kaya batayegi, main batata hun aapko'...humse jhoot bol ke pata nahi kahan gulcharre udhane gayee thi yeh ladki'.

Papaji: Matlab kaya hai tera Brij..?

Brij: Main iiishe Arohi ke ghar mein chod aya tha...phir mujhe laga akeli ladki iitni raat ko ghar kaise aayegii, toh main apna kaam aadha chodkar wapas gaya iishe lene '...wahan jaake pata chalta hai ,'key yeh wahan gayee hi nahi'..

Daarji: 'Gayee hi nahi' ka kaya matlab hai tera Brij'.?

Brij: Ishka matlab toh aap iishi se puchiye daarji, aur sabse bada jhoot kaya hai pata hai aapko, aaj Arohi ka janmdin toh hai hi nahi'...humse jhoot bolke pata nahi kahan gayee thi yeh besharam ladki.

Daarji: Geet, Brij sahi kah raha hai !! kahan gayee thi tuh? aur aisi kaya zaruri baat thi key tujhe jhoot bolke jana padha'...hain'...jawab de Geet'...Geet'...his voice makes Geet tremor all the way down.

Rano still can't believe what Brij is saying about Geet',she rushes to Geet, holds her tightly'.

Rano: Beta'...Brij kaya kah raha hai'...tuhne humse jhoot kaha'.

Geet: Maa ...woh main...

Rano: Iiska matlab tuhne humse jhoot kaha...tuhne mujhse bhi jhoot kaha Geet'...apni Maa se bhi!!

Geet: Woh baat nahi hai Maa...Rano slaps her.

Rano: Bas bahut huya...'aur kuch nahi sunna hai mujhe, kuch nahi sunna...'.tuhne jo karna tha woh kar diya...'kar diya Geet...she leaves from there in tears. Geet tries to stop her, but she doesn't listen to her at all.

Brij: Aisa bhi kaun mil gaya hai, jisse milne ke liye tuhne hum sabse jhoot kaha...hain...woh 'apaahiich' se milne gayee thi na tuh...bada pyaar aa raha hai ushpe...Brij's wordings send a fury in Geet's eyes.

Daarji: Kaun...kiski baat kar raha hai Brij'?

Brij: Wohi Daarji, jiske baremein akkhbar mein aaya tha...bada hero ban raha tha uushdin'...sab natak tha'...dramebaaziii'.

Veerji...Brij gets surprised with such a strong pitch of voice which stops him midway that too from Geet , its unexpected for everyone out there.

Geet: Maan ke baremein iitni badtameezee se baat na kijiye aap'.

Brij: Achha, aab tuh mujhe tameez sikhayegi'...do din huya nahi mili hai uush ladke se, abhi se jubaan ladana bhi sikh liya '...dekha Daarji'...aap sabke laad-pyaar ka nateeja...!!

Daarji: Tuh uush ladke se milne gayee thi ?

Geet: Hain Daarji'...

Papaji: Besharam ladki...'zara si bhi sharam- haya banchi hai tujhmein'...ushdin iitna sabkuch ho gaya ...'phir bhi tuh'...

Geet: Kaya woh sab kuch Maan ki wajahse huya tha, Papaji !!! uush iinsaan ne mujhe banchane ke liye apni zindegi , apna carrier sabkuch barbaad kar liya'...aur aap log'...

Brij: Oyye yeh natak bandh kar tuh'...kisne kaya kiya tha sab pata hai mujhe'.

Geet: Kaya pata hai aapko Veerji...

Brij: Mujhse jaban lada rahi hai tuh'...

Geet: Batayiyenaa'... kaya gunaah kiya hai uushne'...1000 logonke beech ,sare aam jab aapki bahen ki izjaat pe haat dala jaa raha tha naa...'tab bas wohi ek insaan tha jisshne aage aane ki himmat dikhayee thi...'aaj main zinda yahan khadi hun toh sirf aur sirf ushiki wajahse, 'main Maan ke khilaaf ek sabd bhi sunna nahi chahti...

Brij moves towards her to hit her again, but this time Geet holds his hand'.

Geet: Aur nahi Veerji, bahut sah liya maine'...aab bas'...bahut huya'.

Brij can't believe himself, that he has been stopped by Geet..!!

Daarji gets up from his seat'...Geet, tuh jaanti hai tuh kaya bol rahi hai'...iishka aanjam jaanti hai'..?

Geet: Mujhe pata hai main kaya bol rahi hun Daarji'...main Maan se pyaar karti hun'...aur anjaam bhi mujhe achhe se pata hai'...jiss ghar mein mere pyaar ki koi izjaat nahi uush ghar mein mujhe ek pal bhi nahi rahna'...she is about to get into her room.

Brij: Agar ek kadam bhi aur aage badhaya naa tuhne toh kaat daalungaa'...aaj se tera iish ghar se koi rista nahi'...nikal jaa iish ghar se'...nikal jaa...Brij shouts out like a psycho. Geet moves her way out from the Handa house without wasting a second, while coming out she just finds Rano's teary eyes peeping her through the balcony.

The party has finished long ago. Maan & Samir are still there discussing something.

Samir: Mera surprise kaise laga tujhe'...maine bola tha naa tuh zarur ekdin India ke liye khelega'...dekh lena'...It seems Maan is not listening to him, lost in his own thought.

Samir: Maan'...kaya huya...'kaya soch raha hai'...aaj iitni badi khusi mili tujhe, phir bhi tuh khus kyun nahi hai'.?

Maan: Samir'...yeh thik nahi ho raaha hai yaar'.

Samir: Kaya thik nahi ho raha'?

Maan: Geet'.

Samir: Geet ko kaya'.?

Maan: Main Geet ki zindegi barbaad nahi kar sakta...main uushke liye sahi nahi hun'...

Samir: Kaya bol raha hai tuh'...

Maan: Samir, mujhe lagta hai Geet mujhse pyaar karne lagi hai'

Samir: Yeh toh achhi baat hai naa'.

Maan: Nahi Samir'..mere saath woh kabhi khus nahi rahegii..

Samir: BABA MAAN KHURANA jii'...aapko kaya Bhavishyabani huyee hai key aap uushe khus nahi rakh paayoge'...!!

Maan: Samir majak mat kar yaar'...main bahut pareshan hun'...ushhke paas main jaa nahi sakta, aur uusse durr mujhse raha nahi jaa raha'.

Samir: Dekh Maan , yeh pyaar-waar ke baremein mujhe iitna kuch toh nahi pata, par mujhe lag raha hai tuh thoda jaldbazi kar raha hai ...'tujhe apne aapko aur Geet ko thoda aur waqt dena chahiye, jaldbazi mein koi aisa faisla mat le lena mere yaar key baad mein tum dono ko patchatana padhe.

Maan looks very much worried, doesn't say anything.

It's been very late. The weather seems be very much suffocated now, truly a severe thunderstorm is about to come. Maan comes back from Samir's place. He is doing something on his computer. His mom has come into his room.

Maan's Mom: Beta'...abhi tak jag raha hai tuh'?

Maan: Maa, woh bas sone hi jaa raha tha main...'aap soyee nahi abhi tak'

Maan's Mom: Neend nahi aa rahi hai beta,,,,,bahar mausam bhi achha nahi lag raha ...'.lagta hai tufaan aane wala hai'...Maan tries to see the sky from his window side.

Maan: Hain Maa...lag toh aisa hi raha hai'...aap soe jaayiye'...chinta mat kijiye...'main jag raha hun.

Maan's Mom departs.

Maan stands nearby his window ,gazing outside...the sky is totally covered by dark blackish cloud, which makes that night much more gloomy, a heavy wind along with the flashes of lightning are already been started. Maan has completely lost in his thought that he couldn't realize there is another person with him within his room. He gets trembled up as he hears his name'...MAAN' !!!!

it's not his Mother's voice.

PRECAPE: WHO IS IT''.!!!!😲

PART -11

PART -13

hmmm maybe it's Geet's voice xD
hehehe nicee part finally Geet stood up for herself
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