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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice Kankana... loved Geet's reaction ... cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey sis...how are u and thanx for pm...

wonderful,beautiful update.

Geet's family-members all are so rude...first of all they don't let her go outside because of their so called IZZAATT..and now they have thrown her out now they don't care of their IZZAATT...wow what a family and I am hell angry on her mother-father...what type of parents they are? they can't protect their child and her mother,she slapped her instead of protecting her from other's wrath..😡

Transformation of Geet from coy female to Sherni was unbelievable...she has so strong feelings for Maan that she just stand against her family...gave them good answers...bravo Geet...👏

Maan is worried about the feelings Geet is harbouring for him...because he have lost one hand and now his career is also in question so it is obvious he will think like that...it is definately his love towards her...

Now who is in Maan's room...is it Geet or don't tell me she has done something bad to herself and her spirit has come...if she is for real how she came inside and nobody see her coming in...I am hell worried...plaese update soon next part.

Phew so long comments...u must be tired of reading 😆so I am ending it here.

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Edited by tushti-kiran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

hey sis...how are u and thanx for pm...

wonderful,beautiful update.

Geet's family-members all are so rude...first of all they don't let her go outside because of their so called IZZAATT..and now they have thrown her out now they don't care of their IZZAATT...wow what a family and I am hell angry on her mother-father...what type of parents they are? they can't protect their child and her mother,she slapped her instead of protecting her from other's wrath..😡

Transformation of Geet from coy female to Sherni was unbelievable...she has so strong feelings for Maan that she just stand against her family...gave them good answers...bravo Geet...👏

Maan is worried about the feelings Geet is harbouring for him...because he have lost one hand and now his career is also in question so it is obvious he will think like that...it is definately his love towards her...

Now who is in Maan's room...is it Geet or don't tell me she has done something bad to herself and her spirit has come...if she is for real how she came inside and nobody see her coming in...I am hell worried...plaese update soon next part.

Phew so long comments...u must be tired of reading 😆so I am ending it here.

I



DII...this is not AAHAAT...😃😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

nyce update kanu loved it

i knw geet hogi... nxt jaldi krna update 😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 810Kankana



DII...this is not AAHAAT...😃😆



thank GOD really I became afraid and worried
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear...👍🏼👏

kitni ghatiya hai yeh brij aur darji aur unke soch...i really hate dem...😡😡
magar hum khush hai kyunki geet ne himmat dikhayi aur apni awz uthai...apne pyar k khilaaf ek bhi budi baaein bardasht nehi ki...sahi ki usne ghar chodke...
dua karti hoon k maan aur maan k mummy usse maan le...

thanx fr d pm dear n luv u sweety...❤️🤗



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Posted: 13 years ago

PART-13

Maan stands nearby his window ,gazing outside...the sky is totally covered by dark blackish cloud, which makes that night much more gloomy, a heavy wind along with the flashes of lightning are already been started. Maan has completely lost in his thought that he couldn't realize there is another person with him within his room. He gets trembled up as he hears his name...MAAN...!!!

it's not his Mother's voice.

Maan just turns around & witnesses that angelic beauty, just standing thereby, completely wet, her drenched, open hairs teasing her face all the way, still Maan can find her eyes, those big almond-twinkle eyeballs are gazing at him without a blink. Finally Maan is able to speak up that name...GEET...!!! tum !!! yahan!!!! iitni raat ko...!!!

...his list of queries is too long. Geet rushes at Maan & tightly hugs him all the way. That sudden reaction from Geet makes Maan speechless. He doesn't understand how to react, what to say, he can feel that Geet is sobbing. He tries to talk to her, patting her back.

Maan: Kaya huya Geet...'batayo mujhe...he cups her face.

Geet: Maan , main sab kuch chod ke aayee hun'.

Maan gets shocked...matlab!!

Geet tells him everything, what has happened to her tonight in the Handa house, how her Daarji, Veerji insulted her, how they have passed wrong comments against Maan. Maan stands there silent.

Geet: Main uunhe hamesha ke liye chod aayee hun Maan'

Maan: Par aisa kyun kiya tumne...'.Geet gets thoroughly surprised with Maan's response.

Geet: Yeh aap kaya kah rahe hain Maan'..!!!

Maan: sahi toh kah rahe the tumhare gharwale'...mere saath tumhara koi future nahi hai'

Geet: Maan...she holds Maan by his shoulder'...meri taraf dekhiye Maan ,kaya aap mujhse pyaar nahi karte?? Maan turns around his face'...closes his eyes.

Maan: Geet , yeh galat-fahemi tumhe kaise huyee, hum sirf achhe dost hai ...Geet looks stunned,She again holds back Maan.

...kaya bola aapne...ek ladki ki aankhein kabhi bhi yeh dhokha nahi kha sakti'...aap jhoot bol rahe hain Maan'...mujhe pata hai aap jhoot bol rahe hain'.

Maan: Yehi sacch hai Geet'...he still keeps his eyes closed...Geet cups his face with her both hands'...meri aankhon mein aankhein daal ke kahiye key aap mujhse pyaar nahi karte'...woh sare pal, sare ahsaas aapne kabhi mehsus hi nahi kiya'...woh lamhe jo humne saath bitaaye the, aapke liye koi maayne hi nahi rakhte'...batayiye naa Maan, batayiye naa...her eyes get drenched. Maan controls his emotions, opens up his eyes & gazes at Geet.

...hain sab jhoote the, woh lamha, woh ahsas, sabkuch , maine kabhi bhi ,kuch bhi mehsus nahi kiya , suna tumne...yehi sunna chahti ho naa tum !!!...Geet gets shattered down on to the floor, looking dumbstruck.

...Aap sach much mujhse pyaar nahi karte hain Maan...!!! she murmurs. Maan hits on the wall with his fist.

...tum samajti kyun nahi ho Geet '...he yells out, that constant sound of thunderstorm & heavy lightning have covered up his shouting.

...mera koi bharosa nahi hai'...tumhare aage tumhari puree zindegi padhi hai '...tumhe koi bhi mil jaayega, jo tumhe har tarha se khus rakhegaa'...

...kaya aapko lagta hai main kisi aur ke saath khus rah paayungii, Geet speaks out properly after such a long time. Maan suddenly rushes at her, holds her by her shoulder.

...kaya tum mujh jaise 'apaahich' ke saath khus rah paayogii Geet, Geet stares him without a blink'...jawaab do Geet'...jawaab do mujhe'.??

Geet : Main aapse pyaar karti hun Maan'...mujhe aapke siwa aur kuch nahi chahiye.

Maan can't say anything, just lost into her eyes for a while'...then suddenly realizes what he is doing'...he just controls himself.

Maan: Geet, tumhe ghar wapas jana hoga.

Geet: Main toh nahi jaayungii.

Maan: Par tum yahan nahi rah sakti.

Geet: Thik hai, ...she is about to move from there.

Maan: Kahan jaa rahi ho...?

Geet: Kyun...aap ko kyun fikr ho rahi hai,main kahin bhi jaayun...aapko kaya fark padhta hai'...main uush ghar se kasam kha ke aayee hun, zinda uush ghar mein kadam kabhi nahi rakhungii'...aab aap mujhe uush ghar mein bhejna chahte hi hain' ...toh...all of a sudden she moves quickly towards the balcony & tries to jump from there. Maan grabs her all the way.

'Geet'...kaya kar rahi ho tum'!!!...Geet tries to release herself out from Maan's embrace.

'Chodiye mujhe'...mujhe chodiye'...mujhe marna hai '...mujhe marr jaane dijiye Maan'...marr jane dijiye mujhe '...Maan hugs her tightly from the back...dips his face within her shoulder...wants to get entangled within those beautiful, long, blackish hairy traps which are still teasing her face...Maan gets so much closer to Geet, that they can feel the heart-beats of both. Maan clears up those tiny-hairy burdens from her face, Geet gets trembled up as he kisses her on the corner of her face, on her ear-lobe, on her neck.

She closes her eyes, completely lost into those feelings which she has felt for the 1st time in her life, she gets completely enthralled with those touch that too from her beloved, she wants that moment to be stopped as she wants to get loved by Maan exactly like this way for ever & ever & ever. Although that thunderstorm is being there outside, but that real thundershower is happening down there in between those 2 hearts. They don't speak even a word, let their love do the job, they both couldn't even imagine before that how much they feel for each other. Maan tries to control himself a lot, but finally he has lost the battle with his own heart, he can't stop himself from showering his love, his adore on that person whom he loves more than his life. Even Geet can't believe that he is the same person who has claimed just a while ago that he feels nothing for her, then how come she feels his breathing gets more & more faster as he gradually clears up all those barriers between them, how come she feels that burning sensation coming out from his lips as he touches her skin each & every moment. Tonight she wants to give over all her love, all her desire, her longing, her craving, her thirst to that one person who is more than God to her. Both want to control each other's feelings, but that unspoken thirst for love, that eagerness to get closed, that longing to get loved make them insane. Otherwise that Maan who wants to even get separated from Geet, how come tonight he wants to destroy all those limits between them.


"I still hear your voice, when you sleep next to me.
I still feel your touch in my dreams.
Forgive me my weakness, but I don't know why
without you it's hard to survive.

'Cause every time we touch, I get this feeling.
And every time we kiss I swear I could fly.
Can't you feel my heart beat fast, I want this to last.
Need you by my side.
'Cause every time we touch, I feel the static.
And every time we kiss, I reach for the sky.
Can't you hear my heart beat so...
I can't let you go.
Want you in my life.

Your arms are my castle; your heart is my sky.
They wipe away tears that I cry.
The good and the bad times, we've been through them all.
You make me rise when I fall.

'Cause every time we touch, I get this feeling.
And every time we kiss I swear I could fly.
Can't you feel my heart beat fast, I want this to last.
Need you by my side.
'Cause every time we touch, I feel the static.
And every time we kiss, I reach for the sky.
Can't you hear my heart beat so...
I can't let you go.
Want you in my life."

-"Everytime We Touch" By CASCADA

PRECAPE- KEEP GUESSING'... 😊😊


PART -12

PART -14



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Edited by 810Kankana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
U r so bad...kya cliffhanger par chod diya...scene to poora hone deti 😉 thoda kisses se tumhara kya bigad jata😍☺️

anyway very cute update...first Maan tried to be away from Geet because he doesn't want to ruin her life but when geet is adamently confessed her feelings and tried to commit suicide he has to accept his and her feelings...but there is long way ahead.. they have to work hard to get going and make their career.

Edited by tushti-kiran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update...👏👍🏼

magar pehle toh humein zor ka jhatka dheerese laga jab maan ne geet ko thukra diye...maano humarein toh dil hi toot gaye...felt very bad fr geet...😭😭😭😭🥺🥺
i can guess why maan done dat to geet before...coz he thought he's handicapped...but what he had done if he became handicapped after marriage?...i think dat time maan would hav given her divorce!...😊😆
i knw maan loves geet sooo much...he only wants her happiness...magar pagal ladka...yeah toh samajh k geet k khushi sirf maan se hai...maan ki geet...😳


thanx fr d pm kana...luv u sweety...❤️

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