Jai-Bani-Fanfic-concluding part

Hi guys,
This is my first try at writing a Fanfic. Hope u like it.

Continued from the last episode.. (Bani tells Roshni "raat to aapne akele bitaayi kyuki Mr Walia to sofe pe soye thee")

Later on in the morning at the breakfast table.

Jai and Jigs are sitting at the table and Bani is helping Tony in laying out the breakfast.
Roshni limps into the room and upon seeing Jai there starts pretending to be in some pain.

Jai: Roshni, ab tumhaara paav kaisa hai?

Roshni: Abhi bhi kaafi tukleef hai, din me to fir bhi theek hi rehta hai but raat ko dard badd jaata hai. Jai, I know tumhe tukleef hogi but kya tum agli kuch raate mere paas ruk sakte ho, tumhaare paas rehne se mujhe tuselee hogi ki tukleef zyada hone pe tum meri madad kar sakte ho.

Bani glares at Roshni!! 😡

Jai: (looks at Bani) Bani, Humaare family doctor se kehke Roshni ke liye ek nurse ka intezaam kardo. (Turns towards Roshni) Roshni, ek nurse mujhse kai zyaada achi tereh se tumhaara khyaal rukh sukti hai. So don't worry jub tuk tum poori tereh se theek nahi hojaati tumhaare saath har pal ek nurse rahegi.

He gets up and leaves the room.

Bani giving Roshni a slightly amused look (as if telling her paasa palat guya) also gets up and turns to leave the room

Roshni: ek minute Bani... Zyaada khush hone ki zarooret nahi. Mera yeh waar zaroor khaali guya but I promise you, agle 8 days me mai tumhe kuchre ki tereh jai ki zindagi se nikaal bahar phekoongi

Jigyaasa: Oh come on Roshni! Bani jai ki zaindagi ki hissa hai hi nuhi, tumhe usse jai ki zindugi se nahi sireph is gher se bahar nikaalna hai. Isse sireh is gher me pade rehne ki ijaazat di hai mere dayavaan Jai Bhaiya ne. Woh yeh nuhi sumejhte ki bikhariyo (beggers) ko gher ke baahar bheekh di jaati hai, gher ke ander rukh paala nahi jaata...

JIGYAASA (A VOICE SHOUTS)

They all turn stunned to find Jai standing at the top of the stairs. He comes down slowly....
Jai (in his meanest coldest voice) Apni tumeez aur is gher ke sunskaar bhool chuki ho? Meri BIWI (he stresses the word "BIWI" ) se aindaa se izzet se baat kurna wurna kuchre ki turuh tumhe is gher se bahar phikwaa doonga aur tub tumhaari haalat ek bikhaari se bhi guyi beete hogi. IS THAT CLEAR?

Jigyaasa (scared): J..j.. ji..ji.. bh..bhai..bhaiya

Jia to Roshni: Is gher ki mehmaan ho aur woh bhi sireph isliye kyuki tumhaara accident is gher ek sadasya se hua hai. So like a good guest stay here for a few days till you get well and then GET OUT.

Bani stares at Jai stunned!!!

He then turns to walk away.. Just then Rano comes out of her room to go to college.

Jai to rano: College Jaa ruhi ho?

Rano: Ji.

Jai: 2 minute rukoo, mai tumhe college chod deta hoo.

Rano: Aap? aap suddenly aaj mujhe college kyu chodna chaate hai? Don't bother Sir, mai college apne aap chali jaaongi.

Jai (in a stern voice): Rano, I will drop you. Wait here.. Then he walks away.

So does everybody else, leaving Bani and Rano there.

Rano: Didi, aaj Mr. Walia ko kya hua hai jo mejhe college chodna chaahte hai?

Bani: pata nuhi but please Rano tum apne gusse pe kaabo rukhna ager woh kuch ulta-seedha keh dete hai to please tum palat ke guesse me bura bhalaa mut kehdena.

Rano: don't worry didi, aapki khaatir mai chup rahoongi

just then Jai walks in....


cont.........

Alright guys, let me know if u like it? I know there isn't romantic scenes b/w jai bani right now but I want to really build up there romance. Jai suddenly turning into a romantic guy didn't seem to flow well at this point but don't worry it is going to happen soon.. that is.. if u guys want me to continue.................

aww...that was great ships!!
plz continue soon!

👏
great starting, loved the way that Jai yelled at Jigs 😡 and she got scared 😆
i wonder why jai is going to drop rano to college 😕
please continue soon 😛

good story please cont. soon thanks
😊

👏
good story
pls continue
luv sweetu

Good story 👏 👏 👏 please continue 😃

ok here is part2...

Jai and Rano are sitting in the car and Jai is driving.
At a red light he stops.

Jai: yaha se right lena hai na?

Rano: Yes sir.

Jai: Looks at Rano but then quietly makes the turn as the light has changed.

After driving for a moment quitely...

Jai: Sir bulaana zaroori hai?

Rano: to mai aapko aur kya bulaa sukti hoo.... SIR (stresses the word SIR).

Jai: *sighs* How about Jeejaji ?

Rano: WHAT?? Totally shocked

Jai: kyu bahut lumba hai? Well, Jeeju ya koi aur short form bhi chalega??

All this time he is staring straight ahead with slight smile and Rano is staring at him like he suddenly grew another head!!! or lost the one he had!! 😆 😆

Rano: (glaring with Anger) Aap mere Jejaji nahi hai!!

Jai raises his eyebrows and gives a quick glance to Rano before concentrating back at the road.

Jai: I hope Hindi is not one of your subjects, kyuki kaafi komzor ho tum Hindi me?? haina??

Rano: kya mutlub??

Jai: Well, jaha tuk mujhe pata hai behen ke husband ko jeejaji hi kehta hai?? Gives Rano an amused look

Rano: Aap bani didi ke husband NAHI HAI

Jai: Wedding pictures hai. Marriege certificate bhi hai. Aur leading newspapers me humaari shaadi ki khabar chuppi thi, unki copies ka bhi intezaam kar sukta hoo.. Itna proof kaafi hoga aapke liye........ looks at her smilingly .... SAALIJI..

Rano just stares shocked and Jai chuckles lightly to himself at her look..

Rano: What the hell happend to you??

Jai: tsk tsk!! language Rano!!! Bani ko pata chalaa to kaafi naraaz hogi ki tum aise shabd use karti ho!! (smilingly)But don't worry mai kuch nahi kahoonga usse. after-all jeeja-saali ko ek doosre ko coverup kurna chaahiye!!

Jai Pulls up the car at a side street and turns completely to look at Rano

Jai (seriously now): I am sorry Rano. Jo kuch bhi mere aur Pia ke beech hua uska gussa maine tumpe aur bani pe utaara hai. Bani to khair.... (stops himself and turns to look ahead again, after a moment of silence turns back towards Rano) Whatever I said that day us subke liye I am really sorry!!

Rano: aapne achaanak mere baare me apni rai kyu badal li hai?

Jai: Tumhaare baare me itni kharaab rai meri kubhi bhi nuhi thi but gusse me mujhe khud bhi hosh nahi raha ki mai kya keh raha hoo. Tumse maafi to kaafi dinse maangni thi but kal Sahil ki baato ne mujhe ehsaas kara diya ki maafi jitni jaldi hosuke maang lene chaahiye

Rano: wait a minute... Sahil ki baatoo ne?? sahil ne kub baat ki aapse?

Jai: kal shaam ko.. woh mere office aaya thaa... (flashback to sahil and Jai's convo at Jai's office)

---------------------------------------------------
Sahil & Jai's office. Jai working on some file

Sahil comes in

Sahil: Maamaji, do you have minute?

Jai: Sahil tum? yaha kya kar rahe ho?

Sahil: aapse baat kurni thi

Jai: to gher pe kurte? yaha kyu aaye ho?

Sahil: Gher pe mom humesha rehti hai aur unke saamne koi bhi baat kurna mushkil hai.

Jai: theek hai kaho! kya kehna hai?

Sahil: Rano ke baare me baat kurni hai

Jai: kaho

Sahil: Mai jaanta hu ki aapko lugta hai ki Bani maamiji aur Rano millke mujhe Rano ke pyaar me phasaane ki koshish kar ruhe hai

Jai: nuhi Sahil.......

Sahil (interupts Jai): mujhe meri baat keh dene dijeye!!
Rano mujhe phasaane ki koshish nuhi kar ruhi bulki mai hi humeshaa usse baat kurne ka bahaana dhoondta rehta hoo. Aur Bani didi to mujhe keh chuki hai ki mai rano se door rahoo.

Jai: I know! Maine tum teeno ki baate us raat sun lithi jub Bani Roshni ke kumre se baahar aayi thi....

Sahil: to aapne tub kuch kaha kyu nahi.

Jai: woh.. I didn't know what to say..

Sahil: Gr8 maamaji! (sarcastically). Mai yaha aaya thaa apki galatfehmi door kurne but ab pata chaala ki aapko to koi galatfehmi hai hi nuhi!!

Jai: Saahil listen....

Sahil (almost yelling): No maamaji u listen! jub aapko gussa aata hai to apna gussa bayaan kurne me aapko der nuhi legti but jub apni galti ka ehsaas ho jaaye to maafi maange me aapko yeh nuhi sumejh aata ki aap kya kuhe??

Jai: Sahil CALM DOWN! I am going to talk to Rano tomorrow.. aur yeh faisla maine tumhaare yaha aane se pehle hi kur liyaa thaa. so please shaant ho jaao aur gher jaao!!

Sahil turns to leave

Jai: BTW, I am proud of u Sahil that u had the guts to come and clear this up with me!!
--------------------------------------------------------
Back to the car with Rano and Jai.

Jai smilingly holds his ears: So saaliji ab humee maaf kur dijiye!!!!!

Rano smiles slightly...

Rano: its ok Jeejs

Jai: (Laughs) Jeejs hmmm... chalo yeh bhi chalega!!! better than Sir.

Jai looks at his watch!!

Jai: Oops hope tumhaari pehli class important nuhi thi kyuki humaari baatoo me aadhi class nikel guyi..

Rano (with a mischevious twinkle in her eye): Nuhi!! bus Hindi ki class thi!!!

Both laugh out loud!!!

Jai (also with a amused look in his eyes): Hind!! hmmm!!! so would u mind too much if u missed the rest of the half too. Ek baat aur kurni thi aapse.

Rano: Nope but saari baate aapko gaadi me hi kurni hai?!?!?! Kisi achee mehenge restaurant me lejaake kuch khaana-waana khilaayiye!! I mean ager saali banaaya hai to saali ko bhugutna bhi to seekhna hoga..

Jai: laughs!!! alright alright! chaliye lugaayi chunaa bataayi kaha chulna hai??

they both laugh and Jai starts the car and they drive off.........
cont..........................................

hope u liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😊

👏
wow! i loved it!
pls continue
luv sweetu

Originally posted by: ships_2006

ok here is part2...

Rano: (glaring with Anger) Aap mere Jejaji nahi hai!!

Jai raises his eyebrows and gives a quick glance to Rano before concentrating back at the road.

Jai: I hope Hindi is not one of your subjects, kyuki kaafi komzor ho tum Hindi me?? haina??

Rano: kya mutlub??

Jai: Well, jaha tuk mujhe pata hai behen ke husband ko jeejaji hi kehta hai?? Gives Rano an amused look

Rano: Aap bani didi ke husband NAHI HAI

Jai: Wedding pictures hai. Marriege certificate bhi hai. Aur leading newspapers me humaari shaadi ki khabar chuppi thi, unki copies ka bhi intezaam kar sukta hoo.. Itna proof kaafi hoga aapke liye........ looks at her smilingly .... SAALIJI..

Rano just stares shocked and Jai chuckles lightly to himself at her look..

Rano: What the hell happend to you??

Jai: tsk tsk!! language Rano!!! Bani ko pata chalaa to kaafi naraaz hogi ki tum aise shabd use karti ho!! (smilingly)But don't worry mai kuch nahi kahoonga usse. after-all jeeja-saali ko ek doosre ko coverup kurna chaahiye!!

😆 I was laughing so hard when reading this part. I hope Jai takes some advance from Rano to woo Bani.😳

Super part Ships 😳it was really amazing luv the part how sahil stood up to jai, he shud do that on the show😡 but looks like rano and jai are heading for a good start😛

plz write part 3 soon can't wait to read it😃

rocking fanfic ships. i do agree with u that u should build up romance b/w J & B slowly.