Fan's Fiction: 'Bhagya Lekh'

Characters:

Rushi(Chandu)as Rihan,

Aashika(Meera)as Drakshita

Amatya Raksha as Mr.Pasha

Karvinath as Mr. Nath

Acharya Chankya as Murli sir

Digvijay as Vijay

Dhanand, Shashank n Aditya as themselves.

Peihu n Radhi as her-selves.

😳~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Part-1~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~😳

From Drakshita's POV-

I'm in the super market wandering through long n huge passage in my loneliness. I'll keep cursing those guests bcoz of whom I'm all alone here a long list of goods in my hands, handed over to me by my mother. Being busy in my feelings n views, I reached the last thing of the list which teased me a lot,"Why they keep Multi-grain flour on top of the shelf?". I looked for the store keeper, but find store totally empty of humans. This tym I'm not satisfied with my height n luking foolishly here n there.

Suddenly a hand pass through front of my eyes, "I think this is the one which u need.", he says. My eyes are at level with him, I blankly luking at his innocent face. He again says, shaking the packet near my face. I snatched packet from him n walked away as overween without even thanking him. All my manners n obsequies are in vain, I pay after check out to shopkeeper n stand outside the mall for taxi.

Its evening now, night fairies have started painting the sky with shimmering stars n glowing moon. I haven't get taxi, tears starts to pipe out of my eyes.

Once a car stopped before me. I cleaned off tears from my cheeks. Slowly, tho door opens "wanna lift"; he is the same boy who helped me in mall. I shooked my head in approval n slipped into the car beside him. He ordered his driver " Dhanand, keep all these bags on the seat beside u."

He broked the absolute silence in the car,"What's ur gud name". I stammered, "My name is Drakshita".

"nice name", he smiled. "Myself Rihan Maurya, nice to meet u" n he unfolded his handbefore me. Its just like overture of friendship for me. As I moved my hand towards his, there comes a speed breaker n I clutched his hand tightly n stare at his face. His cheeks blushes with a sweet smile on his face. I sustained myself n move my head to other side of window, but my eyes r still stricken on his face.

Soon I reached home n moved out of car n thanked him. He with a cute smile "Bye, hope we'll meet again" waved his hand. I too smiled n lifted up my hand n waved my fingers. The car turns n followed the same path. I keep luking there till it vanishes.

I turned back n found himself standing behind me n staring me. I lost myself in depth of his eyes. I luk down n find myself roaming in the sweet memories of our first meeting. My cheeks turn red n I ran away having my cllge books in my hands.

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😳 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Part 3~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 😳

The days passed on, it is the day of inauguration, as Peihu said she has done. It's a huge makeover of the bakery into a glowing new styled corner, named,"Mr. Nath's Corner". Though it is her last day with us but she always remain relish in my memories. I'm working there as waiter n my mother as chef.

One evening, Drakshita with her friends come to this newly opened spot. Shashank goes to serve her but by fault sum pastries fall on her beautiful black dress ornamented with lace of red roses. She burst out on him. She is not that girl whom I deem close to me, its truly an another one in her cadaver. She stood up from her chair n starts approaching towards me, I frighten fully run into washroom, someone opens the door I turns pallid its Drakshita there. She cleans off her dress n as she looks herself in mirror her lips r frozen, "Rihan". I take a deep breath. She continues "Where have u disappeared leaving me behind? Have u at least one time think about me, how I persistent myself devoid of u". A tear shed from her eye I grasp that on my palm, it shines like a pearl. I lay my hand on her shoulder but she throws it away n stride out, but her armlet which I gifted her strike by door, broke into pieces n all beads scatter on the floor , its seems as my heart broken into pieces n falls on the ground. It stifles my voice, "Try to understand me, Drak…" I only wish she would have heard it. I'm down to the ground, soon I come out n find her nowhere only her sweet smiling face, red cheeks, reminiscences are dancing in front of my eyes, my eyes r full of tears I run to my mom n clasp her, she take me in her arms n said ," Kya hua Rihan, kyun ro raha hai tu, bol na beta."

I clean off my tears "Kuch nahi maa, apki yaad aarahi thi". She smiles n said, "Main kahan ja rahi hoon, yahin toh hun maine tere pass" n she tightly cuddle me.

After a few days, all things grow to be usual. A strange person cum in our corner with a girl dressed professionally, Shashank go to receive their order, "Nahi-Nahi, hum tumhe order nahi denge. Tumhe dekh kar lagta hai ki tum yahan jo kuch banta hai sab kha jate ho. Kahin humara mangaya hua khana kha gaye toh, toh hum kya khangey. Jao kisi aur ko bhejo."

He lefts the table very dismay fully n humiliated n sends Aditya there.

"Kahiye sir aap ko kya chahiye" he said, placing the pen on his notepad.

"Kya tumhare se phele jo aaya tha, who tumhare saath khana Bantker nahi khata?" that man said ludicrously. "Chalo hum tumhe order to de dete hain per use tum mat lana kisi theek thak ko bhejna, kahin tumse late waqt khana gir gaya toh." And he laughed stupidly.
Aditya comes in kitchen uttering something n said me to serve the person.
I went to that table with sizzlers, sum cakes n juices in my hands. As I starts putting it onto the table, "Dhanand u, killer of my father." I exclaimed . I hold his collar n admonish him. He proclaimed "Radhi hume is na samaj ladke se bachao." She called out, "Manager, Manager!!". Soon Mr. Pasha comes running, n throws me on back table and screamed loudly, "Tum Pagal ho gaye ho Rihan, apne customer ko kaise handle kiya jata hai bhul gaye ho kya? Chalo mafi maango in se."

I turn insolently n goes into the kitchen without saying any word.

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Thnksss peihu di, bhargu, ritu, polly, abhi, radhi, aru di n kushi di for ur valuable comments. 😳

😳~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Part-4~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~😳

I walk inside the kitchen pick up a knife, starts moving towards the door n keep gazing Dhanand. Suddenly my mom grab my hand ," Rihan, hosh mein aa beta . Yeh kya karne jar aha hai tu? "

"Maa, chod do mujhe aaj maine aapne Papa ke Qatil ko mar ker hi chodunga."

She snatch knife from my hand n throws it away," Nahi tu aisa kuch bhi nahi karega. Tune kabhi socha bhi hai, ise marker tujhe kya milega?"

After few seconds, she continues "Jail.". She lay her hands on her lips, tears r incessantly flowing from her elegant eyes.

"Jail chala jayega tu, phir tere bina mera kya hoga. Wahan jail maine policewale tujhe marengey, aur yeh dekh kar maine yahan mar jaoungi.."

"Nahi maa, Nahi aissa mat bol. Aap kheti ho toh main is kuch nhi kahunga.. per aap mujhse door jane ki baat mat karna."

I also start weeping n seize her in my arms.

After Dhanand leave, Mr. Nath called me in his room.

I slowly opened the door, he is facing towards wall, "Aao Rihan, main tumhara he intezar kar raha tha."

I uneasily put my footstep inside.

"Toh kya samzte ho, tum apne aap ko chokre. "

I linger silently.

"Jawab do maine tumse kuch poocha hai."

I just thrilled in front of his boisterous voice. I stammer," Main aapka matlab nhi samja, sir."

"Nadan na bano, jo kuch wahan niche hua who kyat ha?"

"I'm sorry sir main aapne aapko control nahi kar paya."

He mischeviously luked at me n boast," Tum garib ho, isilye main tumhe aur tumhari maa ko dhayn mein rakhte hue, Tumhe ek mahine ki liye kaam se nikalta hun..Get lost!". I left his room, down shouldered.

Whole night I'm gazing the ceiling fan, recollecting my past in glow of moon. Next dawn, mom left me for work.

I 'm unaccompanied n workless sits on chair n starts turning the pages of phone dairy. All of sudden , my mind joggles," This is the one who definitely help me out in locating Dhanand n acquiring my reverange."

Originally posted by: radhikarani

thnx indu.. 4 making it seperate.

Lv it very much

waise is forum ka band baj gayi. Ths ff r nly thngs 2 read.

N nw
oye hoye chandu pure josh me h..
n my dhananand hah a full 2 villian..

N thnx 1nce 4 my name also in intro.
Lv ya. Kp writn

oh u edit a small means chanakya's ntry na?

Originally posted by: Historylover

gr8 indu..lovely piece of writing again 👏 ..chandu bechara unemployment ka mara 😭

and u hav made a separate thread...thats also great 😳 ..it'd b easier to read 😉