Fan's Fiction: 'Bhagya Lekh' - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ peihu :
wow, nice to know dat u r a dentist😃..meri bhabhi ( sagi nahi, cousin's wife ) bhi dentist hai !! 😃😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing part
indu ji
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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~~~~~~~~~ PART-8 ~~~~~~~~~

As I open my eyes I find myself in a girlish pink coloured room decorated with dolls, flowers, teddy bears and many other soft toys. I lost myself in the charmingness-Its too beautiful n adorable room for anyone n how lucky is the one who lives in this. Suddenly my eyes struck on to a photo of a beautiful girl just like an angel in a human body.



"Arey tumhe hosh aagaya!"

I regain my conscious n look at the door, Vijay is there but I remained silent.He help me in sitting.

"Yeh khushboo hai, Murli sir ki beti."

I'm shocked how does he know what is in my mind. If she is alive today she'll definitely be of my age.

"Do u know, we have evidence against that Dhanand and Inspector."

I perplexedly glance his face, he continues..

"When they were dealing about diamonds I recorded there voice in my videocam. Now they surely get their right place."

A voice distracts his one,

"Why do u didi this all, Rihan?"

As I look in the direction of voice, Murli sir is there on the door.

"And u Vijay, I thought u r enough intelligent to cope with his feelings, but, u too flows into the cyclone of emotions."

We both become guilt stricken n starts looking at the ground.

"All these happnings r not unfamiliar with u Rihan, u knows very well that now there lives only the idoms of greed n selfishness. 'nowhere is truth n altruism to be seen. U urselves are here to show the reflection of truth to everyone, then why?"

"I'm sorry sir, I 'm unable to control myself.." tears starts falling from my eyes.

"look, look at me Rihan" he hold my arms.

"I know u r snowed under the heartrending situation of u r mother. I know u want to see her delighted forever by giving the right castigation to Dhanand, but doing these all the things can give u more blisters my child."

Then he turned n look on the photo, tears portrayed his eyes."I'll tell u a plan, come in living room."

I feel a beatific attachment with him as pure as a pearl.

"Sometimes I feel envious of u, Rihan. He cares so much about u."

We both smiled together.

"I think sir watches his daughter in u. He feels her presence in u."

"Are u kidding with me that I'm a girl, because, I just starts weeping like a innocent girl. .wait I tell u'n I run behind him."

It seems as a two butterflies are playing together in the sky.

Edited by indupriya2008 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
hey wah beautifl dscriptn w8 pics.
Bttrfly playng together.
Hmm to tum mere D k peeche cnspiracy soch rahe ho kya??
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow so beautiful description indu...two butterflies..wow...very nice dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@indu - vry well written..lookin at dat room de girls name shld be pinky😆
anyways boys dont lik girly stuff..ye rushi bhi na..isko ladkiyan aur ladkiyon ki cheezein
dono pasand hai😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for nice update pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ indu :
nice update dear 👏, waise yeh rihan ko kitne ' butterflies' pasand hai yar ?? 😉😆waiting to c how murli sir & rihan do ' band bajao ' ing of dhannu !!😉😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow indu...what an update...especially the last line is so beautiful...and i agree wid peihu...rushi ko ladkiyan aur ladkiyon ki cheezein dono bahut pasand hain 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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but indu kahan gayab ho gayi??

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