Fan's Fiction: 'Bhagya Lekh'

Ritu Aigal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: indupriya2008

Itni jaldi padh liya..😕...anyways ..thank u 😳

ha..aapka PM aate hi pada..😊

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Arunita Chandra

@RoseFairy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

indu ..woh police inspector ka role kisiko diya hai kya??

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indupriya2008

@indupriya2008

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: jhum_86
indu ..woh police inspector ka role kisiko diya hai kya??

oh yaad dilane ka thnx, maine toh likhna bhool hi gayi..

Ambik hai police inspector..

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peihu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

@indu - nice update dear😃
par driver ko 50,00 rupees..dats too much..itna to mujhe bhi nahi milta😆
ambhik as a cop😆 nd worm in eagles mitt..kya comparison hai..😆
i hpe murli ji helps..keep writing

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Bhargavi

@Historylover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

very nice part indu 👏
loved ambhik's dialogues ..usike jaise wicked hain 😉
mujhe chandu k dukh padh k rona aa raha tha...but thank god ..he has met murli sir...ab sab thik ho jayega 😊 aisi mujhe umeed hai 😉 😃

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Moner_Radio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

@ indu :
gr8 writing yar👏, bdw, wat is barmy = pagal kya 😕?? anyways, dis update is a bit filmy ( 1970's AB films 😉) , specially D & Ambik scenes + Mura , par koi nahi ji😃, ab Murli sir aa gaye hai na toh sab thik ho jayega apne app !! 😉

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Moner_Radio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: peihu
@indu - nice update dear😃
par driver ko 50,00 rupees..dats too much..itna to mujhe bhi nahi milta😆
ambhik as a cop😆 nd worm in eagles mitt..kya comparison hai..😆
i hpe murli ji helps..keep writing

@ peihu : kyu re , kaam kya karti ho tum ?? 😉

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indupriya2008

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: polly_03
@ indu :
gr8 writing yar👏, bdw, wat is barmy = pagal kya 😕?? anyways, dis update is a bit filmy ( 1970's AB films 😉) , specially D & Ambik scenes + Mura , par koi nahi ji😃, ab Murli sir aa gaye hai na toh sab thik ho jayega apne app !! 😉

Ya, aap sahi kah rahi ho jab maine likh rahi thi, mujhe bhi purani films ke scene yaad aarahe the😆

Nevertheless, ab Murli sir chankya yojna use karengey..

Peihu di dentist hain..

@all- thnx for ur lovely comments..

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indupriya2008

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: peihu
@indu - nice update dear😃
par driver ko 50,00 rupees..dats too much..itna to mujhe bhi nahi milta😆
ambhik as a cop😆 nd worm in eagles mitt..kya comparison hai..😆
i hpe murli ji helps..keep writing

Di rihan ke dad business man hain n unki NGO bhi hai, toh paise bahut hain n D unka ek vishwas pat tha...wasie D ki evilness Dikhane ke liye itni salary de di use..😆

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peihu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#70

@polly - main ek ubharti hui dentist hoon😆😆😆
isliy mujhe zyaada pagaar nahi milti hai re😆

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