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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sorry for the late replies Richa, I am very busy with my college schedule,and also hve to give a seminar on Friday,and also hve a test on Saturday.😉
Just read all your parts.Fantabulous writing yaar 👏,loved the last part most,too emotional and tragic.😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ ritu :
jhum is ryt, ur update is more lyk d news reports on railway accidents dat we read abt in d newspapers & c in d news channels every other day..u know wat, since d last 4 yrs i hv been staying in kolkata, i go to my home town in Assam during d durga puja holidays, & we hv to go by train everytym, & everytym i get into d train, d same thots pass thru my mind everytym.." will i wake up alive 2mrw mrng " ?? & no, den ?? & if yes, den will i b alive to return journey back to kolkata ??😭

even dis yr also, i wud b going 4 a month's holiday to Assam during d diwali tym..pata nahi zinda laut paungi v ya nahi, aaj kal ke rail accidents ko dekh kar to mujhe trains se hi darr lag ta hai !! 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
nice update
loved it

srry for short comment indu
mere examz hai n m damm bsy so jaldi se padke short sa comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
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indu
ur style of putting character's feelings into words is really gr8...very emotional part...but loved it 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@polly...
It is horrible😭
we cant predict anything abt our own lives...but the reason behind this is also us or among us...its really unfortunate😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thnx ritu,radhi, aru di, kushi di, abhi, peihu di, polly n bhargu for spending ur valuable tym here.

@aru di- sry 😭maine news reporting nhi karna chahti thi, but logon ki feelings n unke saath hone wale devilish behavior ko explain karna chahti thi..really sry ki yeh nws reports jaisa ban gaya.

@peihu-Shukriya for ur praising words di

@abhi-thnx n no sry for late replies , i can understand.. Gud Luck 👍🏼 for Seminar n Test.

@kushi di- thnx di .. aap exams pe dhyan do..Gud Luck..👍🏼
Yeh sab toh baad mein bhi study ho sakte hain.


@polly- aap daro nhi, yeh hum sabke saath hota hai. Even when i sits in car or even on cycle or scooty..I don't knw whether i do a come back or not..😭
But, Mera vichar yeh nahi tha ki maine sab ko dara doon, but ek human per aise condition mein gujarne wale pain ko define karna chahti thi.

@bhargu- Dhanyvad... 😳







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Posted: 14 years ago
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😳~~~~~~~~~~~~Part-7~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~😳

A day passed as a moment'I still have a fury for Dhanand n wants vengeance at any cost. However Murli sir is not there but I have capability to do so..but it'll be better if I consult him. With a jerk I pick up phone n the bell rings..

"Hello!!"

"Hello! May I talk to peihu.?"

"Ya, I'm speaking. U r Rihan, rite?"

"Yes, myself Rihan. Aapko yaad raha?"

"Tu toh mujhe hamesha yaad rehta hai..meri jaan!"

"Oh sry aawaz saaf nhi aarahi'kya kaha aapne."

"Nothing..bolo kuch kaam tha kya?"

"I want to meet u. It's important"

"But where?"

"In the coffee shop Near Belmonte Showroom at 10:00"

"Ok, I'll reach there."

I'm in the coffee shop waiting for peihu to come, I'm busy in reading the menu.

Suddenly someone puts palms on my eyes, "Pechano kaun?" My hands just reached to my eyes, they r soft hands of a girl. I murmur, "Drak'' Peihu".

She removed her hands from my eyes n sits on the chair before me.

"Hello Rihu ji!! Sorry main thodi late ho gayi. Pta hai na yahan ka traffic."

"Ya I can understand"

We order one capachino with strawbweey muffins.

"Haan toh kya kaam tha?"

"Who aap kisi business tycoon Dhanand ko janti hain?"

"Let me think'.Nahi maine yeh naam pheli baar suna hai."

I become too sad. She take my hands in her n said,"Udas mat ho, maine kahin se pta jaroor kar dongi."

I exclaimed,"Really!"

She shook her head in approval.

"Tumhe kyon janna hai, uske bare mein?"

"Yeh bahut lambi kahani hai, baad maine kabhi bataunga."

"Haan uske saath ek ladki thi, uski PS thi shayad, kya naam tha '.(I'm trying to recall the name)"

"Radhi'Radhi kahker bulaya tha usne."

"one minute Radhi!! Who toh meri ek friend ka naam hai, who bhi PS hai.."

Maiine pooch ker batati hun."

She rang the phone to her friend'

After 15 minutes..

"Haan Dhanand ka pta chal gaya hai'Woh Radhi ka boss hai bolo aagey kya karna hai."

"Unse kaho ki mujhe Dhanand ka appointment Chahiye at Mr.Nath's Corner at 11'o clock."

"Ok."

We have left the bakery together. She told me that she'll left this city tonight because her work here is complete.

I'm again become sad, she take me to a gift shop n bring a crystal ball for me something is written on it," Special friends r life's greatest blessings." and a fairy is inside it.



I moved to home placing this adorable gift on my table, I remember the happy moments we have shared.

At 9:30 my mummy arrived home, I hug her ,"Meri pyari maa aagyi. Aao na mummy maine aapke liya khana banker rakha hai milker khate hain chalo."

"Arey Wah khushboo toh bahut achi aarahi hai." She said praising me.

After dinner, we both go for a sleep.

As mummy vanishes in sweet dreams, silently I move out of the bed n then out of home. Stars r twinkling in the black sky as the fairies r paving my path to put Dhanand in his actual place. I arrive at Mr. Nath's Corner at 10:30, Shashank n Adittya r already there with Vijay Murli sir's scholar according to our equipped plan. At sharp 11 a car stops in front of bakery. A man in black shoes, hazy brown coat-pant n a bluish shirt with a pink tie comes out from the car and starts approaching the entrance gate of Corner. He looks around opens the door from his left hand n put his right foot forward straight into the spot.


...to be continued

Edited by indupriya2008 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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are baap re kitni interesting update hai...very nice indu...but peihu ja rahi hai??hai ye sunke peihu pr kya gujregi...meri jaan aham aham
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jhum_86

are baap re kitni interesting update hai...very nice indu...but peihu ja rahi hai??hai ye sunke peihu pr kya gujregi...meri jaan aham aham

thnx di, peihu di toh waise bhi Drakshita n Rihan ke pass aatey hi dukhi ho jati hain so maine unhe kuch dino ke liye aram de diya..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Indu..grt writing..👏
Peihu😆
waiting for ur next😊

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