MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140. - Page 63

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!!superb update!!!!
they r on the way to become one...
mayur r so mature here...
u r a perfect write...
cant wait for the next part...
do update ASAP...
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Posted: 14 years ago
And well here we go. 😃

Wonderful Fantasia.

it brought about what I had expected from it, and boy am I not glad about that!

It was beautiful, serene and pure. LOVED IT. (:

Continue soon. ❤️

Love,
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update Kinza! continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter 11
-ANother beautiful chapter and like always, u were brilliant in bringing out the emotions of the characters! Mayank remembering Kanchi and though Nupur was a bit hurt, she still was there for him. It's nice to see their relationship developing.
-The morning scene where he is waiting for the kids to get up was cute...and then the kids were JUST ADORABLE!! and the family hug was beautiful! now, they are a complete family...just MayUr need to let go of the past and move ahead.

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Posted: 14 years ago
You know I thought the next chapter would be the same..them just romancing..but the rain element you brought out was like so different and awesome! :) Loved it and love you!! Muahhh!! <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
okay so my three sweethearts - ayhsu, pallu and ria, have black mailed me like anything and scared from threats .. i had to update .. wo bhi romance k tarkey k sath!! .. 😳 .. it's thier luck that i had already planned this part as a full romantic part! . 😆.. i hope u all enjoyy!! .. 😳
Chapter # 15

They kissed for a while, when Mayank softly pulled back. Nupur opened her eyes and found Mayank ardently looking at her. She looked back in his eyes, and there was nothing as guilt or regret. They both conveyed trust to each other through their eyes.

Slipping his hand across her waist, Mayank picked her up in his arms, while she just closed her eyes. Placing her in the middle of the bed, he got in by her side and today it was nupur's turn to snuggle to him. She hid her face in his chest and holding his collar tight in her fists, she slept soon, enjoying the warm hold and the soft caress in her hair.

Mayank thought of using sleeping pills again, sleep was nowhere near him. He kept on thinking for a long time and was getting entangled more in thoughts and perplexities, but one thing which was warming his heart was nupur's closeness.

Her nails were gently pressing around his neck, and her hairs were entangled in his shirt buttons. He pulled her more close, and pressed his lips over her forehead. He was holding her very tight when suddenly he realized that he may be was suffocating her and then loosened her grip, but nupur, even in her sleep snuggled more close.

He smiled and then again held her tight and started playing with her hair, they were so soft and silky, this was the first time he had touched her hair. He reached for the clip in her hair and opened her hair. He ruffled them to flow, and wished if she was awake and they would be standing somewhere on a cliff in windy weather, it would have been a heavenly site.

He took a deep breath and then rubbing fingers through her hair, he finally slept.

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'mayank ..",

His mind was detecting some voice but still he was too sleepy to react,

"mayank ..", the voice became a bit stiff and then he felt delicate rub in his hair and it took him a second to realize that who it was, he slowly opened his eyes and saw the smiling face of nupur.

"good morning", she ruffled his hair, "chalo uth jao ap, you are getting late", she smiled and mayank pulled her close, "tum thek ho?', he asked in a whisper, tucking her hair behind her ears, and nupur nodded, "thek hon main, per ap uth jao, it's already 7!, mujhe bachon ko bhi uthane jana hai" , she was speaking on a spree and mayank was observing her face and eyes, making sure she was alright.

"aisey kia dekh rahe ho ap, uth jao naaa!!", she frowned

"I am making sure that you are alright or not", he pulled her more close and nupur frowned even more, "haad hai wasie, and how will you do that?", she narrowed her eyes and mayank raised his head and whispered, "aisey..", and before nupur could say anything, her lips were captured in a kiss.

On that touch, she felt warm and burning all over and surrendered by kissing him back. It was a soft kiss, with mayank's hands softly caressing her back and her hands tightly gripping his collar.

They broke soon and nupur kept her eyes lowered and mayank smiled, "okay ma'am ab ap ja sakti hain, According to Dr. Mayank, you are perfectly fine, your test reports are perfect", he whispered the last bit sensuously and hitting him on his chest, she jumped out of his arms and ran went out of the room without looking back at him, and mayank was left in awe of her blush.

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Relationship was blooming with all the essential ingredients - togetherness, pain, care, concern and the most beautiful was the recent addition ' blush.

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"dadddyyy"

Mayank was in the office, totally engrossed in a complicated hall design when he heard the melodious chorus and was surprised, "arey merey bacheyy", he dropped the pencil and sitting on his knees, he opened his arms and kids ran and hugged him.

"ap dono yahan kasiey?' he kissed their heads and kids squealed, "bus aisey hi daddy, we came to meet you!!", pranav informed excitedly and mayank hugged them again, "awww, I was missing my kids"

"and me?"

Another voice startled him and on turning he found nupur leaning on the cabin door, smiling and looking breath takingly beautiful. Mayank skipped a beat on the way she was looking in that royal blue sari, with her open hair and that full smile.

'umm, well main ne tu bus apne bachon ko miss kiya hai", he hugged the kids again and nupur's mouth was fell open.

"aur bachon ki mummy?", she pouted and mayank suppressed his giggle, "umm bachon, pata hai aj mujh se priya ma'am poch rahi thi k bachen kab ayen gey, she has something for you both"

"really?", the kids asked and he nodded.

"yayyy!!", they squealed and went to mayank's secretary, priya's cabin.

Once the kids left. Mayank got up from his knees and walked towards nupur who was glaring at him, with her arms crossed around her chest.

"mujhe kis chez ka attitude dikha rahe ho ap?",she asked as he closed the cabin door

"main?, main ne kab attitude dikaya?', h asked pulling her close, "acha !, ik welcome tak tu bola nahi ap ne!, pehli baa rap k office ayi hon main!", she narrowed her eyes and mayank smiled,

"wo is liye k", he increased his grip, "I wanted to say a special welcome", and without giving nupur chance to question again, he kissed her lips softly, while she moaned.

"welcome nupur", he whispered as they broke off and nupur smiled, "Thank you mr Sharma", she raised her head and mayank was about to kiss her again but just then they heard a knock, and they sprang apart, feeling shy and blushing.

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The romance which at first use to come with a flutter, started to come with authority.

"nupur chalo",

Mayank took the spoon from her hand and grabbed her arm, "kahan jana hai?', she asked as he was dragging her out of the kitchen, "kahan ja rahe hain, mujhe dinner banana hai", she said but soon gave up tries.

Mayank dragged her upstairs and they entered their room and finally the terrace, "yahan ku le aye hain, itni teez hawa chal rahi hai!", she frowned and mayank was plainly looking at her, he took a step towards her and removed the clip from her hair and due to the wind, they flowed without any ruffle.

"ye kia hai ab?, itni hawa mian merey baal khol diye hai, wapis kijiye clip!!", she frowned and started handling her hair and which were flowing and flittering on her face.

Mayank was thinking right that day, her hair flowing in wind was a heavenly site, it was something worth the entire beauty of this world.

"kia haiii?, now what are u staring?", she was looking at him dumbfounded while mayank slipped his hand across her waist and leaned on her ear, "you are beautiful nupur .."

Nupur experienced a displaced breath, and when mayank looked back at her, her cheeks had turned crimson and smiling he pulled her in a kiss, which was not soft from both sides, it was passionate and deep.

Breaking off, today they didn't look in each other's eyes, as today mayank trailed his lips down her jawbone to her neck and she let out a broken sigh. He was leaving butterfly kisses on her neck, nibbling her skin, while her nails were leaving marks on his neck.

He was about to explore the other side of her neck when a phone ring interrupted.

Mayank raised his head and the shade on nupur's cheeks had turned red. He chuckled and took the cell phone out form his pocket and the name flashing on the scre made him sprang apart from her.

"didi!!", he gasped and nupur started giggling, "ap tu aisey dar rahe ho jasie wo ap ko dekh rahin hain", she was laughing and glaring mayank attended the call.

"helooo mayankkk!!", diya shouted and mayank smiled, "hello didi, how are u?, bohat dair baad phone kiya ap ne", he said normally.

"hmm, main ne tu dair baad phone kiya, per tum ne itni dair se attend ki call, kiya ho raha tha?", she was giggling and mayank fumbled, "ummm .. wo .."

Nupur laughed out loud and took the phone, "hello didi!!', she said in a jubilant voice and mayank took a breath of relief and left the terrace. He didn't want to get in the soup.

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There was a constant process of knowing more about each other.

"Ye kia hai"?, nupur asked reading a card with mayank's smile.

"nothing , ik business party hai kal", he replied casually taking off his shoes.

'oh!, tu ja rahe ho ap?", she asked and mayank shook his head, "nahi jar aha hon, firstly it is a couples' invite and secondly, dress code hai", he was now heading to the dresser.

"tu kia problem hai?", she was still confused,

"merey liye problem nahi hai, it's black suit for males, but females k evening gown hai, is liye main nahi ja raha, now ofcourse u won't wear an evening gown", he said moving to the washroom and nupur took a deep breath.

Next day, mayank came home and found his suit neatly pressed, lying on the bed, "welcome home", nupur kissed his cheek, but he was confused,

"ye mera suit kyun bahir hai"?, he asked,

"kyun k ap ko function pe jana hai na!",she said smiling.

"nupuur!, I told u k couples invite hai ..

"tu ap kiya single ho?', she asked opening her eyes and mayank smiled at her cuteness, "g nahi main single nahi hon", he kissed her cheek, " lekin meri partner dress code follow nahi kar sakti toh ..

"ap se kis ne kaha k nahi kar sakti', she threw her arms around his neck and mayank looked blankly, ,

"main evening gowns pehnti hon, main ne bht bar pehna hai ",she smiled and mayank was in for a surprise, "really?"

"g haan!, Ab ap change ka lo, phir main tyaar ho jaon gi , we are already late!", she said and mayank took the suit, "are u sure na?", he asked again and nupur kissed his cheek

"suree!!", she smiled and mayank headed to change, while nupur left the room.

Nupur was sitting in the lounge, instructing children on how to behave while they both will be away, when mayank came down the stairs, dressed in a black suit.

He was coming down stairs, wearing his wrist watch, totally un aware that his family was staring at him totally in awe.

"OMG!, daddy you like a prince ..", pranav came forward and mayank raised his head from his wrist watch, "really?, thank you beta", he ruffled his hair and then Rahul came forward,

"the most handsome prince, his eyes were sparkling and mayank kissed their heads and turned towards nupur who had all the admiration in her eyes,

"bachon ko tu prince lag raha hon tu bachon ki mummy ka kia khayal hai"?, he asked walking towards her and she smirked,

"pehle main tyaar ho k ati hon, then we'll decide k ap kasiey lag rahe ho", she winked and rushed upstairs while mayank sighed at her attitude.

He couldn't wait to see her in an evening gown. She would definitely look ravishing.

Chapter 16 - Page 100

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yayyy first one to comment 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
okay, first of all kaan pakdoes and sorry for blackmailing 😃
n whoa, ive been blushing like an idiot with my husband sitting next to me and reading the update, that when i went downstairs, mind you with the same expression, my in-laws thought something else 😲 ☺️
now, thank you so much for not hurrying up with stuff.. i know, i know you'll say that the story required it, but still, thank you *chup chaap listen to my thank you without interrupting me 😳*
i love you for the "extra romance ka tadka"... thank you sooo much...i loved loved loved the update... my blush says it all 😳
i loved Dr. Mayank's tests. in this case, i wish nupur is always sick n the doctor keeps testing her 😳 haaye the way he was ruffling her hair, sooo cute 😳
ah, then the cabin scene... it was sooo damn romantic... *sighs* ... BUT i dont like the person who knocked on the door... 😡
n then the terrace ka scene... im liking this authoritative mayank 😃 *remembers someone and then concentrates back on the reply* 😳 dia ka wrong timing 😡 lekin chalo atleast she let them kiss, woh bhi passionately 😃 😳
now wat is this??? you make us wait again ? 😲 no worries, ill TRY waiting patiently 😃 and im sure ke there'll be lots of INTERESTING things in the next update 😳
thank you sooo much for updating early *pulls cheeks* and also thanks for the scraps and PM...
once again, beautiful update 😃 keep writing more like this 😃
take care and God bless 😃
Edited by rapunzel_angel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG what a pleasant surprise


Kinzu love u dear

and ayesha, payal and ria- love u all- even more than kinzu.lol lol lol
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ahem ahem-kinzu it was a very cute and romatic update
loved mayur more n more- now they r behaving just like a typical couple...
awww chari taraf sir romance he romance hai..lol lol
kinzu even i m eagerly waiting to see nups in gown and alos wanna see maaynks reaction
i hope kal bhi tum update karoge- karogi na????plzzz


Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mayur are going at a fast pace in their relationship..
happy to see them behaving like a typical couple..
I just hope this family remains happy forever
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
i was Surprised when i saw ur pm, ria, ayesha payal, Thnx alot girl, Kinza Fantastic update😳

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