Humko Tumse Pyra Hai

Character Analysis:
Sharmas:
Prena: is a middle aged women. Is a journliast and a women activist. She beleives that every women should be educated and capable enough to fight every battle of life. Same as KZK 😛 She is married and has two beautiful daughters. She is a widow.
Kashish: is a very smart girl. She always is # 1 in her school in everything else in life. Kashish doesn't beleive in love at frist sight because she thnks that in 1st sight luv both people fall in luv with the looks of the other person but not the heart. She loves her mom every much and loves her sister as well and can do anything 4 her sister. She is studying medicine in college. She luvs helping other people. kashish values her self respect more than anything. And she hates losing.
Mukti: She is not as smart as kashish but she is very samrt. She wants to become a lawyer because she beleives that everyone should receive justice. Especially equal right for women like her mom. She doesn't beleive because she has been betryed by her luve Karan who is played by Ejaz Khan.
Cast
Prerna:

Kashish:

Mukti:

Kandelwal:
Dilip: is a businesss tycoon. He doesn't beleive in equal women rights. He has serect with someone but that will revelaed later. He doesn't luv his wife at all. He is has three sons. He wants everything to go according his way. And is it doesn't go than he makes it.
Veena: is a very nice women. She has always been neglected by her husband. In fact her husbabd beats her up if naythngs happens against her. She luvs her three sons. And can sarafice anything for them.
Sujal: Ok sujal is also an business tycoon. He hates his father a lot. Because his father beat up his mom he had a bad childhood. He is looking for a loving and caring girl. he beleives in luv and is waiting for the right one. He has always taken care for his younger brothers.
Prem: Now Prem does nothing for living. all he doe is he flirts around with girls. he really takes luv as a joke and thinks that luv is worthless. The reasosn why he thinks that is because of his dad. He lovs his mom and brithers. Is every smart but luvs to pary around. Sujal always saves him from trouble.
angad: Angad always wanted to become a musician but because of his father he had to become a business men. He luvs his mom and brother but hates his dad. He beleives in luv but doesn't want to fall in luv because at all because he knows that his father won't let him marry the girl he loves. 😕

Dilip:

Venna:

Sujal:

Prem:

Angad:

part 1:
so the fan fic in the sharma resident. Since they are middle class there house is averge. We see a women( prena) in a orange sari doing pooja. prena is done with the pooja
K= kashish p= prena m=mukti
P= k and m come to get the arti.
we see a beautigul girl in an black and red kameez and shawar. She comes and quickly get the arti. This girl is kashish.
K= than mom plz wish that i pass my final exam in medcine today.
p= God bless you. Where is your sister.
k= mom she is sleeping
P= sleeping,it is 10 o'clock!
K= she was working on a case last night. So she is tired.
p= i have told this girl so many times but she doesn't listen. Mukti!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Then we see a girl in a pink night gown coming from her bedroon. She is rubbing her eyes aand is walking slowly. The girl is Mukti.
M=Good Morning
p= go brush your teeth and get ready and breakfast will be served.
Mukti goes to her bedroom and get ready. she comes oput after thrity minutes. In a white sari and black coat. Prena and kashish are at thr dining table.
P= have a mock tiral today?
M= yes mom
k= so that why you woke up til late. Why don't u do these things before hand
m= cause i am lazy
p= we all know that. But one day this laziness will cost u a lot.
m= let me eat i am already late
k= Bye everyone i have to go for my exam
m= best of luck
k=thank u
kashish l;eaves the house
p=mukti hurry u will miss the bus
m= ok i am going
p= hurry up i have to get to work
m=ok, i am going bye
P=i will go with u
M=hurry mom
Scene end

Originally posted by: shahidlover24

I'm confused...isn't this the same as this other fan fic 😕

yea it is the same fic so other topic is closed

good beginning 👏 .... and was very detailed...i like it....update soon

kashish805 dear a very nice start.. liked ur story... 👏
please continue soon.... 😃

frist of alll thank u to evey one who replied. If anyone would like to give me a suggestion on what should i do with the story plz feel free to do so.

Part 2
So this scene is taking place at the Kandelwal residents. It is 10 o' clock which is Dilip's breakfast time. Sujal, Angad and Prem are at the dinning table. Venna is standing by Dilip's chair. Then we see a man in a white suit he comes and sits down.Veena has hired a new servant
D= dilip v= veena s=sujal a=angad p=prem ser=servant
D= where is my breakfast!!!!!!!!!!!!!
v= it is coming plz wait
d= i am not a women, women wait not men
ser= here is the breakfast sir
d= ok now go
Dilip looks at his omlette and finds onions and he hates onions
d= what is this 😡 i hate onions. Vennna!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
v= sorry i will tell the chef to make a new one
d= i don't have time to waste like u do 😡 and then he slaps her
s= what are u doing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
d= don't u interfere. has your mom taught u anything
dilip punches her on the face and throws her against the wall and she bleeds
s= mom!
a= mom!
p= mom!
d= that is what she deserve. women don't get anything. they r so dumb and emotional
a= mind your language Mr. kandelwal
d= shut up! Don't u kniow how to speak to your father!
a= pa..............
dilip leaves
s= are u ok
v= i am fine
a= fine you are bleeding
v= it will stop
p= we have to take her to the hospital
s= prem go to college and angad get to work. i will take mom
a= call me if there is any trouble
s=ok
scene ends

good part dear.. 👏
please continue... 😃

good start
i am sure evryone will luv yur ff
i already luv it
please continue soon.....