Humko Tumse Pyra Hai - Page 3

part 6
ok this is scene is taking place in kashish and multi's houses all of them are sitting and having chai.
P= Prena m= mukti k= kashish
p= so how was your day girls
m= every bad in have two new project to complete by nex week
k= that is a good thing u will get to learn
m= didi u r such a nerd 😆
k= shut up
p= how was your day kashish. how as the exam
k= the exam was very easy and then i went to work
p= any intersting cases in the hospital
k= yes. Mrs. Veena Kandelwal she says she had injuries on her face. She said she fell off the stairs but i thought someone hit her
p= oh wll maybe someone hit
k= of someone hit her why didn't she call the police
p= maybe she had been abused and was scared to tell the truth
k= maybe u are right
p= it is late now i think both of u should go to bed
k= ok
m= no i want to watch Bunty aur Babli
p= go to sllep
m= alright
k= good night
m= good night
p= good night
kashish and mukti are now in their room and on there bed
k= mukti.........
m= yes didi
k= ummm
m= what?
k= a guy came to the hospital today
m= so
k= he was looking at me
m= so
k= he was looking me strangly
m= what do u mean
k= i was bandaging veena aunty and he kept staring at me
m= really , 4 how long
k= like 30 minutes
m= wow. did i think he loves u
k= love how could anybody fall i love with me soo quickly
m= love only needs a second
k= that love is only an attraction.
m= didi u are soo unromatic
k= shut up and go to sleep ok
scene ends

😆 😆 😆 30min mein pyaar..... lol very interesting...i like it....good work!!!update soon

part 7
this part is taking placein sujal office. sujal is working and then all of he sudden he stops and thinks to himself.
s= i can't stop thinking about kashish. What is happening to me. is mom right am i really falling in luv? i have to go see kashish. maybe that will help get kashish out of my head.
he then get up and goes to the hospital.
b4 getting out of the car sujal looked in the mirror.
s= i look dashing as always
sujal enters the hospital.
he sees kashish in a lovely pink shalwar kameez.
s=kashish!
kashish turns around and sees him. but she ignores him.
k= doc plz give the file 4 kiran
s= kashish
she again ignores him
sujal than gets and grabs her by the hand
k= behave yourself r. sujal
s= why are u ignoring me
k= this is a hospital and i only listen to patients only
s= ok have it your way
sujal then grabs a glass bottle and hit on his hnd
k= what are u doing
s= now u have to talk to me
scene eds

very good job.. sujal is soooooooo cuteeeeee... 😳 & y is this kashish ignoring sujal very bad.. 🤢 hmm tho sujal kashish se baat karne ke liye ab patient ban gaya..cool... 👏
please write soon & please write a bigger part this was too short........ 😃

part 8
first of all i only got 2 comment which made me sad 😭 . Ok so lets get on with the scene the settig is still the same.
k= oh my god. so much blood is coming out. nurse plz get me the first aid kit
s= it ok! there i no need for medicine.
k= shut up! Look at how much blood is coming out
s= why do u care
k= because i am a doctor
n= here is the kit
k= thank u
s= i think i have to bleed everything i need your attention
k= plz mr. sujal. Why do u want my attention
s= because.............
k= becaus what!!!!!!!!!!!
s= because i like u
kashish is stunned at this point
k= mr. sujal u luv me
s= yes
k= no u don't. How can u luve me. u don't know anyhthing about me. u don't where i am from, who r my parents, what color do i like, what is my favorite book, what are my hobbies
s= but i know your heart
k= no one can know someone in their first meeting. So no one can fall in luv
s= luv only needs a second
k= this is not luv
s= the what is it
k= attraction
s= if it was attraction.......... then y do i think about u every second. why don't i forget u? Why can't i get u out of my head. whay have u become a part of my identity
k= u are going crazy
s= i am crazy for u
k= i don't bebleive u
s= i will make u beleive
sujal babdaging is done. He leaves and kashish is sort of in a shock
Just then we see mukti
m= didi
k= mukti what r u doing here
m= i just came here to give u your lunch
k= oh
m= did i really think he luvs u
k= no he doesn't it is just an attraction he will forget me in a week
m= if he didn't luv u he wouldn't have cut his hand for u. Just look into his eyes and u will see.
,mukti leaves and kashish is just standing there

scene ends
plz write comments 😊

jus read da whole ting woawww....n i ve only got one word...itz MINDBLOWING....gud job....totally luvin ur story....awwn sujal cut his hand 4 kash.....sucha sweet pyaar ka izhaar.....lolz...keep up da gud work...

part 9:
now this scene we will look at mukti am prem Ok So mukti is standing at the bus stop waitjng for the bus to go to college. He is wearing a white sari cause she has a mock trail today.
m= kashish didi id so stupid. She needs to she get a life. When will the bus come, i am already late.
Just then we see a black sports car. it passes by mukti vey closely and causes the mud to get over her whole sari. 😆
m= you!!!!!!!! Can't u watch while u are driving. Stupid, i don't how can u get a license.
Just then the glasses of the window are moved down and we see Prem. Prem is
p= it was accident
m= accident my foot. What will i do now
p= sorry
m= sorry. Will that make my sari white again!!! 😡 (😆)
p= i said i am sorry. i am going
m= going!!!!!!!!!
p= oh! so u don't want me to go
m= what
p= u want to stand out here a flirt with u
m= uuuuuuuuuuuuuu. Just leave
p= ok bye
Prem goes and mukti gives him an angry look
scene end

kashish805 a very good scene 8 & scene 9.. 😃 i loved sujal , kashish's scene.. sujal ne ek minute bhi nahi socha kashish se apni dil ki baat kehne main.. hmmm coollll kyun na ho he is afterall sujal... 👏 ab yeh kashish bhaav kha rahi hain.. 🤢 par no problem nahi me sure ki aisa waqt aayega jab kashish sujal ko chahne lagegi 😛 aur tab shayad sujal usse jaan bhoojkar avoid kare..mazaa aa jayega.. 😆
hmm tho prem aur mukti ke beech pehli mulaqat hui good..aur unke beech ladayi bhi hui nice.. par yeh ladayi aage chalkar pyaar banega.. 😳
plz continue soon.. 😃
waise wat's ur name ????? 😛 😊 😃

My real name is not kashish it is kiran