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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 12:
Now lets look at kashish and Sujal. This scene is taking plce in tke kandelwal household. Sujal, Prem, angad, veena, and dilip are having dinner.
dlip notices that sujal is injured
d= what happend to your hand son
s= why do u care. U only care about your work
d= shut up. i luv u. but you are not capable of my luv . veena see your son. it is all your fault
p= dad stop blaming my mom
d= so you started tooo................ u mom taught u as well
a= he is right. stop blaming mom
d= so u are going to tell me what is right and what is wrong
v= stop it
dilip get up and slaps veena
d= this what u deserve
s= dad
d= don't come btwn as
a= all our lives we saw our mom being slappped
but not anymore
d= what will u do
s= i am warnong u dad. if u do this again we will call the police. and u don't want that to happen right....... cause that will make kandelwa shares go down
dilip gets pissed and leaves
s= mom are u ok
v= yes
a= bro we have to teache dad a lesson
s= we will one day very soon.
next scen take place in the hospital in the morning. kashish is discusiing something with the nurse. just then sujal walks in. he sees kashihs and then goes to her.

k= mr. sujal what r u doing here.

s= i am here to get my dressind done

k= nurse= plz do the dressing for mr. sujal

s=- no i want u to do it

k= mr. sujal that is the nurse job

s= fine, then i won't have it done

k= if u don't have it done then you will get sick

s= i don't care

sujal leaves and kashish is worried

k= he is crazy

sujal leves.

kashish runs after him

k= sujal wait

s= stops

k= fine i will do the dressing

kashish and sujal are in the room and kashish is bandaging him

s= why did u stop me

k= because u waould get sick

s= why do u care

k= doctor care for the patient

s- u luv don't u

kashihs is sort of shocked

k= no i don't

s= yes u do i can see it your eyes

k= no i don't. and u don't like me it is just an attraction

s= u are saying that to hide your love

k= u don't know what love is

s=- love is caring for someone. u love the person more than anything. u can die for that person

k= fine prove your love

s= what do u mean

k= u said that u can die in luv. right

s= yes

k= then die

kashish is leaving

s= i am going to die. and then u will know that i loved u

sujal leaves and kashish is worried

scene end



Edited by kashish805 - 19 years ago
kashish805 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
pormo: kashish runnug after sujal and begging him to stop.
kashish805
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW!!! im reading your story after quite some time now...and all i have to say is MARVELOUS WORK....good job 👏 ....and please update soon...i hope Kashish admits to loving Sujal soon 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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do u think that kashish will admit her luv to sujal
plz reply
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashish805

do u think that kashish will admit her luv to sujal
plz reply

YEP....well she should 😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
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agree wid jaanvi......nice story ...itz luvly.....can't wiat 4 sujal n his broz 2 teach dair dad a lesson--i m sure itz gonna b a gud 1
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
Awe...that was one of the best parts ever! Awesome job!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
very very nice part....... 👏 now me sure kashish will confess her love towards sujal...... 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks everyone for your lovely comments. I will cont. some time today or tommrow.
Kashish 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 13-
kashish is running after sujal. sujal is going up the stairs
k= stop sujal plz stop
sujal doesn't listen to her
k= sujual plz. don't do this plz. don't plz sujal plz. i beging of u sujal plz don't do anything stupid. sjula listen
kashish and sujal are on the roof of the hospital
s- why do u care? why do u care that i die? u don't luv so why do u care.
k= don't sujal
s= i have noting to live for. becuz my luv doesn't luv me
sujal is about to fall
s= bye kashish i hope that after myu death u will realize how much i love
k= sujal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! i love u. i love u sujal. i rwally love u. i love u sujal. i love u
sujal has fallen off the roof and kashish is crying
scene end
enjoy
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