~Destined To Be One~MG ff pt 10 pg 130 nt pg 141 - Page 22

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Posted: 14 years ago
ye kyaa maan ko itna be hard mat banao plzz... main maan ko hate nahi karsakthi... plzzz
lekin precap is too gud yaar...
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it brought tears to my eyes how cruel maan can be ...nice update pls add me tour pm list

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
tahnks 4 da pm...Poor Geet...hate Maan...update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing!!! awww poor geet... chachi is so cruel...
maan was so heartless...
precap looks gud.. continue soon
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Hy dear its verry good update.& so sorry 4 late comments.
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updating
it will be a sad one😭😭😭
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Oh no wonder wat'z gunna happen to geet now..
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nice one
yeh maan bhi na gussa to iske naak pe hota he...dhust danav khahika...
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PART 5

Next day geet got ready in search of a job and her aunt didn't even let her have her breakfast.First she went and took all the tution fees and they were not even more than 200.After that she went and gave the auditions but she did not get selected.It was almost 9 o'clock when she was coming home as she did not get any bus.While she was coming some goons started following her.She started to run away when some of them came and blocked the way.She tried to move but they were not letting her go

Goon 1:kaha jaa rahi hai

Geet:please mujhe jaane do

Goon 2:nahi jaane dege

Goon 3:itna acha maal jo mila hai asani se nahi chor sakte hai

Geet:please jaane do

Goon 4:itni asani se nahi jaane denge jaaneman abhi toh maaza shuru hua hai

They started to come towards and geet started to cry.She was trying to call for help but no one was there.

Goon 1:tum ro kyu rahi ho

He came forward to wipe his tears when geet pushed them hard and ran away and they also started chasing her.After sometime she saw a car coming and she went and fell in front of the car.Maan was driving the car when someone fell in front if his car.He came out of the car and went near her.He saw that she could not even get up properly.He made her get up and was shocked to see her.Her hair was all messed up and her face was covered by tears.As soon as geet saw him she hugged him tight due to fear.Maan didn't knew what was happening, he just jerked her away.

Maan:tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe chune ki

Geet:please mujhe bacha lijiye kuch gunde mere peeche pare hua hai please

Maan:jhooth mat bolo

Geet:main sach keh rahi hoon

Maan turned to go away when he heard her shouting.He turned and saw that some goons were trying to take her away.Maan went and pulled geet away from them.She just hugged him tight and maan kept her hand on her head.

Maan:jao yaha se

Goon 1:tu chor usse

Maan:maine kaha jao yaha se

The goons got scared seeing his anger and they left.Geet was just crying and hugging him tight

Maan:geet wo log chale gaye

Geet looked at him and left him and wiped her tears

Geet:sorry

Maan:chalo main tumhe ghar drop kar deta hoon

She quietly went and sat in the car and maan started driving .He took the address from her.

Maan:tum itni raat ko yaha kya kar rahi thi

Geet:wo main ghar jaa rahi thi

Maan:tumhe pata hai na abhi time kya hua hai phir bhi tum itni raat ko ghar se kyu nikali

Geet:main ghar se abhi nahi nikali thi main subah se hi nikali hui hoon job ki talash main aur aate waqt mujhe taxi nahi mili thi aur phir tabhi wo gunde mere peeche par gaye

Maan did not say anything and he reached her house after sometime.She got out of the car and thanked him.Maan left after she went inside but when he drived little away from her house he noticed her purse was there

Maan:yeh toh ussi ka purse hai shayad usse isski jarurat ho sakti hai

He turned and went towards her house.As soon as he was going to enter her house he heard someone shouting.He went towards the window and was shocked to see that her aunt was continuously beating her up

Chachi:main kab se tujhe pooch rahi hoon bol *slap* bolti hain ya nahi

Geet:chachi wo

Chachi:bol

Geet: mujhe jab nahi mili

Chachi:*slap* maine tujhe kya kaha tha ki agar aaj tu bina naukri ke ghar aayi toh main tumhe yaha nahi rehna dungi

Geet: chachi

Chachi:*slap* chali jaa yaha se

Geet:chachi nahi main kaha jaungi aap logo ke siva mera iss duniya main koi bhi nahi hai

Her aunt slapped her so hardly that she fell on the floor and her head started bleeding.Rajji was trying to stop her but she was not stopping

Chachi:aaj tu nahi bachegi mere se

Geet: nahi chachi

She lifted her by her hair and started beating her with the stick.One hand was holding her hair and with the other she was beating on the legs

Geet: ahhh chachi choriye

Chachi:nahi chorungi pehle paise de tujhe tuition fees milne wali thi na

She was trying to search for her purse but could not get it

Chachi:de paise

Geet: mera purse nahi mil raha hai

Chachi:jhooth mat bol

Geet: chachi main sach keh rahi hoon

Chachi:*slap* *slap* nahi degi

Geet: chachi main kal aapko pakka paise de dungi aur kal mujhe naukri bhi mil jaegi

Chachi:agar kal tune mujhe paise nahi diye toh tu dekhna main tera kya hal karti hoon samjhi

Geet: ji chachi

Chachi:tune jo aaj paise nahi diye us ski toh tujhe saza zaroor milegi

Geet: nahi chachi please

Chachi:main tumhe saza dekar rahungi

She left her hair and went inside the kitchen and brought a piece of burning coal

Geet: chachi nahi

Chachi:haath de

Geet: nahi chachi

Chachi:de

Geet: nahi

She hid her hand behind her back and then her chachi pulled her left hand and burnt it by keeping the piece of coal in her hand and closing it

Geet: ahhh

She started to cry bitterly and chachi left her hand.The piece of coal fell from her hand

Chachi:jaa apne kamre main

Rajji:di aap chaliye main khana lekar aati hoon

Chachi:koi jarurat nahi hai khana deni ki

Rajji:par ma aapne subah bhi di ko kuch khane nahi diya aur wo din bhar se bhuki hai

Chachi:tu chup kar

Geet went inside the room crying.Rajji came and hugged her and both were crying.After sometime she stopped crying and rajji bandaged her wounds

Outside maan was shocked to see this

Maan:yeh log kaise janwar ki tarah maar rahe the sach main paagal hai aur geet wo toh kuch kar bhi nahi sakti hai bechari usse in sab ke baare main jakar poloce main complain karna chahiye

He left taking her purse with him and he was feeling very sad for her.

Precap:maan giving job to geet


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Edited by sweety.2 - 14 years ago

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