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Posted: 14 years ago

Ok so most of you got it right!!!! Please just keep patience. This is a FF and will undergo many emotions.

Here is the next part. Enjoy!!!!

Chapter 46 – Proposal

Same Night around 10:00 PM

Chaiyiji – "Are you sure beta"

NT – "Yes Mom, I am sure...I absolutely love him...and you just now said he is the best...is se acha ladka kahan milega...and after this finally we will be equal to tayaji on our own"

Chaiyiji and NT were talking in their room after retiring from Dinner. NT had taken a strong liking to Maan and Chayiji was more than happy with her daughter' intentions.

Next Morning 8:00 AM

Chaiyji had entered Raj – Nisha's bedroom for a private talk.

Chayiji – "Bhaisahib, mujhe aapse kuch baat karni thi"

Raj – "Haan bolo Preeto"

Chaiyiji – "Aap to jaante ho ki maine kaise Naintara ko itna bada kiya hai. Ab bas meri ek hi wish hai ki uski shaadi achi jagah ho jaye. Aaj yeh hote to main une keh deti par ab to woh nahin hain. Isiliye main aapse apne dil ki baat kehne aayi hoon"

Nisha – "Aise kyon bol rahi ho Preeto. We are all one family. We also want Naina to get married in a nice house. Do you have some boy in your mind? If yes, we will come with you and talk about her marriage"

Chaiyiji – "Haan...ladka to hai meri nazar mein...Naina ko bhi bahut pasand hai but he is more in your league then ours"

Raj – "Phir wahi baat Preeto...there is no difference for me between Naina and Geet. Main jitna Geet ke liye karoonga utna hi Naina ke liye bhi...ladka kaun hai"

Chaiyiji – "Maan"

Raj and Nisha were startled. After recovering quickly Raj said– "Yeh to bahut achi baat hai. Main aaj hi Rishab se baat karta hoon. It is finally up to him but I am sure he will not have problem. Bas Maan ka nahin pata"

Chaiyiji – "Yeh sab to chalta rehta hai bhaisahib...Waise bhi Simran ki baat bahut purani ho gayi hai...humein koi problem nahin hai. I think Rishab bhai sahib should put some pressure on Maan. Har cheez sahi umar mein hi achi rehti hai. He should get settled now"

Raj – "Thik hai...Let's talk to Rishab today only"

Raj, Nisha and Preeto talked to Rishab and Juhi in the afternoon. Chaiyji as usual kept doing her emotional drama.

Rishab – "Yeh to bahut achi baat hai...Humne to Naina ko bachpan se dekha hai. Aur kya chaiye. Lekin Maan ke mood ka kuch pata nahin. This time I don't want to hear his excuses. So give me sometime. I will put this proposal in front of him in such a way that he will not be able to refuse...kyon Juhi"

Juhi nodded – "Haan...main to bahut khush hoon...sach bas ab Maan ki shaadi ho jaye"

Chaiyiji was ecstatic and so was Naintara who heard the entire conversation from behind the pillar.

Same time Maan, Geet and Rahul returned from their band practice. Naintara gave a shy smile to Maan and ran away from there. Maan could not understand the reason and just shrugged his shoulder.

Evening 4:00 PM

Maan's phone buzzed as he lazed around his bed reading a magazine.

Maan – "Hmmm"

Geet – "Jaanu"

Maan knew something was up with that sweet sugary Jaanu

Maan – "Bolo"

Geet – "Main aaj nahin aa paungi…ghar mein chayiji and Naina hain…kya kahoongi sab se…please"

Maan was getting mad – "Yeh tumahri chaiyiji aur Naintara ki problem kya hai?"

Geet – "aisa kuch nahin hai"

Maan – "What do you mean…they are so interfering and you chayiji doesn't know what to say when. Upar se who Naintara….I am telling you Geet. She does not seem to have good intentions and she is jealous of you"

Geet – "of oh Maan…aap to na…I know chayiji is little bitter but I am used to her interfering nature now. She is all dad has in terms of relations. And you tell me Maan, Naina lost her father when she was just 14. I am sure I would have been jealous like hell if she had a dad like mine and I didn't have any"

Maan – "It is ok to yearn for people you have lost but not to be so jealous. It is not your fault that she doesn't have her dad anymore. Anyways main tumse bahas kyon kar raha hoon….tumhein to sab mein bas acha hi dikhta hai…lekin job hi ho…I have to meet you babes…I am missing you so much"

Geet – "Maan please aaj nahin…tomorrow after office pakka"

Saying this Geet cut the phone. She knew Maan was angry at her. "Koi na…kal mana lungi" She giggled thinking to herself.

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Precap – Missed Date

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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update yar, Ye naintarabe na always creating problems.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome upeate so my prediction was right when will all this end i mean when the family would come to know about maaneet let me guess 5-10 parts or more plz tell me
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ye kya tha
Why the hell this Naina n Chayji had to come in middle
Pata nahi ab kya hoga
I jus hop Geet doent scarifice her love for that Naina
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Posted: 14 years ago
actually mujhe story bahot slow jathe nazar aa rahi hai update shuru hone se pehle hi khatam hojata hai
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...why is this nt coming in between maaneet?...
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Posted: 14 years ago
oowh... Like guessed. Naintara was indeed eying on Maan.
I feel sick when she shy in front Maan. Yucks 🤢
I hope Geet wont sacrifice her love of her family.
Even if she does that, am sure Maan will never agree to it.
Thx for the pM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

what was that ... jiska darr tha wahin hua ...

omg !!!!!! plz .. ab confusion create mat karna ... plzzz ... dont want any probs between maaneet ...

tell me one thing r u planning to make them elope n marry ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome yaar !! loved it !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
I wish maan NT ko samajh jaye jaldi

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