MayUr OS Gallery: OS 19 - Upd Pg. 114 (5/7/2011) - Page 79

I want next update to be ITW.

I will be back at night. OOTP waiting. 🤗

Edited- I couldn't controool. It was written by you & I so couldn't ignore that. 😉 I loved it Akki. First and foremost I'll praise your beautiful writing. I'll say this- you are my favourite writer on IF. There is such an easy flow in your words which makes me greedy for more and more and more and more and...you get the point. You are so damn talented & if you actually try your hand at non-FF writing and try to make a career out of it, you'll always top the best-selling chart! 👏

And coming to the content of the OS, it was adorable. Cute. Sweet. Amazing. Just like Mayank-Nupur are. You captured their essence so beautifully. 😳 I was grinning like an idiot. 😃😆😆

Keep writing more & more & more. Love you loads 🤗

Nidz

Fanta must be all smiles after this am sure😃😆

btw it had romance, nok-jhok, parental care, life at ease, as well as hectic...OMG i just lived how u put that all in a single flow...and the best part was how their eyes talked like always...n are always a constant source of love...u can feel it😍

seriously loved it...

thanks 4 the pm

Hehe the part where u wrote how much mayank hated the way pranav' drew on his papers reminded me of my bro when he was lil😆😆well he drew some stuff on my dad's tie lolz

Rest of the part was fun to read too...especially the kids' fight was so cute so very mnish😃😃😃

keep it up.

I am now officially a fan of yours!!

keep on writing stuff on mayur.plz write oneshots if u dnt get time to write ff😊

would love to read it:)

with love.

Aastha