MayUr OS Gallery: OS 19 - Upd Pg. 114 (5/7/2011)

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Radha

@rads14

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#761

amazing os!!😊
loved it!!
waiting for ur ff updates!

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#762

Hey CN - This was superb!!! How do you manage it everytime? See your every OS is different from each other... and thats why I don't spend all adjectives in my dictionary in one comment itself 😉

Otherwise, a day will come when I have to tell ditto to my previous comment.. 😆

Seriously Aki, as I told you in out first chat itself . You really need to take writing as a profession.. Even beyond Mayur (Though I never get bored to read on mayurs).. But it will be selfish at our side to see you limited to Mayur..

I want my next generation to read the novels of great writer Akansha and I will announce proudly that I knew her since long as choti Nivi 😍

With love,

Nivi Di

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prerna_agrawal

@prerna_agrawal

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#763

awesome!!!.... loved it!!...... its seems so true!!...... just love the way you write!!..... do write more!!......:)

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#764

hey akanksha..damn cute one-shot..the title was really intriguing..n i knew i had to read it!

so MN were dating n samrat was nupurs bro who hated mayank!..def a interesting scenario..

nupur didn't know why she was dating him..n she had reasons for her insaneness..lol..those were good..

she kept thinking she's insane but she knew she loved every little thing about him. it just took her a lot of time to realize she was in love with him..

he told her he liked her since high school..but she found it hard to believe him..well it was hard to trust a casanova..

but he knew she loved him ..n he tried to make her confess..n during a fight..she eventually did..aww!

im really worried about what samrat will say..lol.

thnx 4 d pm

do write more

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shweta

@cool_shwets

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#765

Hey aki, i'm good dear...doing well nowadays!!😎.... who won't love it when he/she has vacations for a month like me now!!.😎...but i won't be that good when my college will reopen again, next month!!😔

Coming to this os.... *sighs*

Well, i'm marvelled at your variations u adopt in ur writing!!

Gosh.....this time too it was a totally different one, i've never been through a similar piece before!!

I loved the way the 'i am insane' gradually, yet beautifully transformed to 'i am in love' .....

This is such a unique one!!...

Enjoyed reading it...

Will eagerly wait till ur next os comes up, do write a few when u take breaks from ur studies...

we'll love to read them...

Love,

Shweta

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#766

it was great!!!!!!!!!! nupur and her reasoning!!!it was funny yet so natural. loved it.

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#767

Nups thnks a lot

Loved how she was always teasing n not taking Mayu seriously

He was fab here

He already knew she loved him n thats why he had that smirk on his face

Loved their sweet nok jhoks

It was awesum

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#768

so cute

awesome job yaar

the love the four insane reasons

awesome

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-Symphony-

@-Symphony-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#769

i just loved ur os to the core....just got a chance to read the last one.....i am gonna read all ur previous ones now😛btw i luved the way u write😊 plz plz plz add me to ur pm list and pm me the next time u write an os😳😳😳

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#770

OMG.........😳....*still in my dreamland*.........this is the bestesssssttt ever OS........OMG m in love vid it......nd u shud have portrayed the kiss more romantically but that goes unnoticed since I am seriously going insane after reading this OS.............🤪