At first I thought Mayank Sharma was nervous was the title of this piece. Either way for a first verse it is tremendous enough. Stoic Sharma shaking, now that is a sight!
Maybe, he would have to die today?...What if this really is your last day on earth? 😆 cute
He decided then and there that he would get the door fixed the next day. I love such detailing that isn't sudden, just part of the narrative so doesn't throw you off course BUT at the same time prolongs the ride in a way those mini bumps of a roller coaster ride, those unexpected surprises that make it all fun.
I loved the plot device of having Nupur read aloud an article which she then negates or affirms in tone or gestures, whilst elucidating the story. Cleverly done.
his dimples digging in his cheeks Nicely penned.
I thought I was romantic Wonderful twist
I liked the whole son/ mother and father daughter symmetry and the intelligent running joke was inspired.
Lovely OS. With love, Sabah
