A Strange Meeting [Maneet FF]

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Hey guys...I'm very much nervous... This is my very first os.. I've never write anything in my whole life except for school essays ...😕.I will update it in 3 parts... pls pls if u like it press the like button and leave a comment... criticism is also well-comed

A STRANGE MEETING


Darjeeling is definitely one of the most beautiful places on the earth. Every single thing of Darjeeling is beautiful. Its said that Great dangerous are always lurking behind every beautiful thing, same is here. Every single thing have its own story here. Some of them will make you happy and the others will make you sad or it will make you to feel eerie.

Maan Singh Khurana. Owner of Khurana Industry. He was going to Darjeeling to sell his tea estate. The driver was running his car on narrow hill road. Maan was working on his laptop. But he couldn't engage himself in work. Darjeeling was making him nostalgic. He tried not to think about the past and concentrate on his work but he failed every time. He looked at the time it was 10pm. Then he looked outside of the car window. It was murky and foggy. Lights of the house were looking like beetles sparkling on the horizon. Darjeeling was looking like a seductive enchantress luring him to come and fall for her.

He opened the photo folder of his collage days. He was going through every photo, and was remembering the story behind them. He was touching every photo very tenderly like he is living those beautiful moments again.

It was bringing a smile on his face. Here is the whole gang of his friends, Anny, Arjun, Adi, Meera, Yash, Pari. His gaze stopped on a specific snap.

"Ah!" He sighed. It's the reason he was trying to avoid his past. But like Pandora he could not control his desire of opening the beautiful box. How could he avoid his past? It was part of his life, rather it was everything of his life.

It was her photo. He touched the photo very gently like he was caressing her. She was his love, his life, his world. Geet, Geet Handa.


1st part:page 2😉

2nd part: page 4😆

3rd part: page 7😛


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Thanks for your comments guys.. here s d next part.. hope u like it... and please leave a comment...😆

part:1

He was going through all of her snaps. It was like he was living all those moments again. It brought a smile on his face.

Here she is looking great in a beautiful white saree in Anny and Arjun's engagement. Arjun had split drink on her saree. She had cried badly for that. Arjun was going to help her to clean her saree but accidentally he slipped on the floor and broke a flower vase. A waiter who was carrying drinks stumbled on him. All were going wrong but her concern was only her saree. She did not even notice what's happening there. She cried rest of the night for her new saree. She was such a cry baby.

Geet with others on graduation day. They all were celebrating the last day of collage together. All were exited. Maan was the 2nd topper of heir batch. But Geet was more exited than Maan for his result.

That night they were playing truth or dare in Pari's house. Geet's dare was to dance with a hot song and to seduce Maan. She felt shy but not more than Maan himself. She started dancing on a table and her leg accidentally slipped while dancing. But luckily Maan was there to prevent her from falling on her back. He looked at her eyes. He felt that Geet had the same feeling for him which had had for her. Her eyes wanted him so badly. They were lost in their own world. But they came back to world by teasing of their friends. They were clapping as if James Bond has saved his girl's life from a killer robot.

"Romeo saved his Juliet." Arjun teased.

"Shut up Arjun." Maan said uneasily.

"We know, it happens." Yash laughed.

Maan could not say anything. He knew it they are not going to stop teasing. He had to face it. Even after a few minutes Geet joined them and started to tease him.

The game was so fun but after a few minutes girls went emotional and started to cry remembering the last day of college. They are hugging each other like they are going to be separated from each other forever. The guys were just enjoying the home movie. Maan offered Geet his hanky to weep her tears and she just kept it with her. Maan asked her to give his hanky back many times intentionally to see her reaction. Every time she would try to avoid the matter and every time Maan would enjoy her reaction, her uneasy blabbering to avoid his question. Till now when he thinks about that, his urge to kiss her come back just like those days.

The next snap was Geet in Darjeeling. They came to Darjeeling after finishing the college to celebrate and in one magical night he and Geet get separated from the whole gang accidentally and were lost together here in Darjeeling. A kind old lady allowed them to live in her house for a night.

That night they were alone together. It was raining heavily outside. They both were drenched. He couldn't move his eyes from Geet. Her damp hair, her wet skin was making it impossible for him. He couldn't resist himself. He grew closer and closer to her, grab her firmly by her waist, ran his fingers through her long black hair. She closed her eyes and her hands moved to hold him by his neck. She was so close that he could feel her heart beat on his body. They hold each other for a long time as a storm rages outside and a stronger storm rages inside his body. He kissed her passionately, fiercely on her lips and she let him. It was not in their control any more, it was like a furious wave of passion gulping them into it. That night they broke all the boundaries ' they forgot society, they forgot family friends and all the other existence, they even forgot themselves ' their different identity ' they were one that night.

Maan closed his eyes. He was living that night again. That passion was raising in him. He snapped out of it and turned the last page of the album.

With every snap the smile on his face was getting bigger and bigger but the last snap of the folder soak the smile from his face. It was snap of Geet. With Dev. Her fiance.


Edited by princess_mimi - 14 years ago
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hei very nice... loving it... continue soon

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