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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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rocking update
totally loved it
man i hate that dev and geets dad aswell
theyre both money hungry lil 🤬
but im glad that geet didnt marry him and ran away
i think that was the best idea
looking forward to the next part
yaaay maan found geet!!!!
cont soon please
cant wait
thanks for the pm!! :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys...😊

I am so sorry for not posting next and the last part...😭I've just been so busy with school and studies...🤢

Thank you for taking the time to look at this story😆

I will post the next part tomorrow... Promise😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you to everyone who commented..😆You guys are amazing..I'm so sorry for being late... I've been busy with my studies... Here you go...😆

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It was Geet standing alone in the pitch black turn of the road. It was her. Fogs around her were making everything unclear. But he was sure it was her. He couldn't be wrong recognizing her.

After 5years Maan was seeing her. She was equally beautiful and has not changed at all.. Geet was standing alone waving hand to stop the car. Oh! Her seductive smile it was making him crazy. She was indicating to stop the car.

Maan was shocked to see her. His eyes widen. A big smile spread on his face.

"Geet!" Maan shouted calling her name "GEET!"

Suddenly her eyes fell on Maan's. The smile on her face changed. It became that smile she gave Dev when Maan last time saw her before 5 years. It was the pleading sad smile.

"Driver stop the car." Maan shouted with excitement. But the driver did not follow his order. He turned the wheel at its full speed.

"Stop the car! GEET!" Maan shouted at the highest pitch of his voice.

As the car was going away from her, she was becoming hazier. Maan saw a smile on her pleading face. A joyful smile. Maan noticed a drop of tear on her cheek

But Maan lost his sight of her with the car take a turn.

Maan was going crazy "stop the car… why the hell you are not listening to me?" Maan was restless but driver didn't listen.

After a few hours of driving at full speed finally driver stopped the car.

"Why didn't you stop the car?" Maan shouted.

Hearing him two local people came forward from a roadside tea stall.

"Turn the car, now…Let me go there." But the people stopped him.

"LET ME GO!" He shouted in anger.

"Sir… The girl is not alive." The driver answered.

"What the hell? What are you saying? I just saw her."

"Yes. It's the truth. She is dead."

Maan was shocked and dumbstruck. He couldn't understand what's going on what they are saying. How dare they speak this non sense about Geet, his Geet."

"She died in a car accident before 5 years. We didn't find her body but we were sure as it was a disaster one, none can be saved in such an accident." The driver continued. "After that day the girl can be seen every last Friday of month asking for stop cars. If you let her in the car, temperature of the car starts to fall. The people in the car either die or go mad."

"How do you know?"

"A year ago we found a guy. He was shivering but not for cold for fear. Sweat was on his forehead. He just said seeing her he let the girl in….she was beautiful… as beautiful as one can be…seductive smile on her face made him go weak on his knee but then… then suddenly the car turned cold cold n more cold… cold like death and the girl.. the girl… he fainted after saying this. After a few days we came to know the guy had gone insane."

Maan could not believe what he was listening. He wants to see her at list for once. What that guy said huh she was beautiful! Yes she is but he can't estimate her beauty … no way… how could he … he didn't has Maan's eyes.

She gave a seductive smile right, how seductive it was…as she gave it when she was dancing on the table to seduce Maan…

He wants to know he wants to see he wants to go back to that place…

But what abut the smile Maan saw at her face… it was a joyful smile. He remembered how Geet's face turned upset with a blank smile and just then it changed into a joyful one as if she has got that, for what she was waiting for a long time…

Geet…now Maan knows for whom she was waiting… she was searching for him… and today she found him … she found him today at that very turn of the road from where one day they both were lost together … and today at that very turn Maan lost her forever…..


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Posted: 14 years ago
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I'm sorry guys...😭 i know you wanted a happy ending... but this is how i had planned the story..😳 hope you like it...😉

don't loose your heart I will be back soon with a happy happy love story...❤️ A modern Cinderella story with Maaneet..😎

till then chao...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess_mimi

I'm sorry guys...😭 i know you wanted a happy ending... but this is how i had planned the story..😳 hope you like it...😉

don't loose your heart I will be back soon with a happy happy love story...❤️ A modern Cinderella story with Maaneet..😎

till then chao...


aik idea du geet ko zinda kar do
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: maan13579


aik idea du geet ko zinda kar do


I wish I could do it... 😭but its not vampo show of Ekta mataji😛

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess_mimi


I wish I could do it... 😭but its not vampo show of Ekta mataji😛


lolxx show it as a dream

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it...
the end was sad but was beautifull...
and it what happens in real life most of the time...
the girl dies waiting ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful end

but sad
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