MG FF:THE GIFT OF LOVE!!!!~~ PART 45:page 123 - Page 27

Originally posted by: indepgal

lovely! but dont separate them...!

thnx for the comment 😃...separation well Maaneet cant be away from each other for a long time na... 😊

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

thnx for the comment...vl update today itself...😊

Awesome ff. . . . Actually i saw this movie. . . . But u changed it lil bit. . .

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

Awesome ff. . . . Actually i saw this movie. . . . But u changed it lil bit. . .

Yes...included some changes for MAANEET...😃

Thnx a lot to all who commented and pressed LIKE button...A big hug to all 🤗 Keep on motivating me. Before starting this i want to ask a question...Should i wind up this FF after Maaneet gettin united or continue it? 😕 Wat i hav plannd is almost similar to the upcoming track of GHSP(oops i'm givin away my storyline...😆)So would u like me to continue???plzzz let me know...

Now here is the update...

PART 28

Weddings do take place in heaven & Khurana Mansion lukd nothing less than that.Anwesha's sangeet was attended by leading bollywood personalities & even some famous hollywood personalities who were in touch with Maan Singh Khurana when he was in US.
Annie was dressed in a silver color lehnga with elegant work adorned with precious stones.Arjun wore a sherwani complementing her luk.Piya lukd sensuous in a red saree & Abhay as usual in black.Maan Singh Khurana graced the ceremony with his presence in a simple royal blue sherwani ofcourse xposing his toned chest.Dev & NT made it simple as he wore a simple white kurta & she a blue color saree.Last but not the least Geet Handa lukd simply beautiful in a proper punjabi attire(same costume of hp shadi durin rasika case).Maan was totally blown seeing her in the proper punjabi style.He couldnt take his eyes from her.

They were all posing for a photo when Maan noticed that Geet was missing.He stopped the photographer and looked around.Geet was serving some of the guests.

Maan called her,: Geet

Everyone was shocked.Dadima didnt thot much.She knew Maan was considerate.Sharma and Sameera frowned😡.Sharma who was standing near Maan whispered to him,:beta ye family photo he.

Maan:I know uncle thats y i'm callin her.

Sharma was shocked 😲

Maan indicated Geet to join them.She shook her head seeing him demanding like a kid and joined them.Maan stood next to her & CLICK!!! 😃

The songs started & everyone danced.Sameera tried to get Maan's attention by dancing with him but his eyes were glued on his mishty.

CHORUS:Banno Ki Mehndi Kya Kehna
Banno Ka Joda Kya Kehna
Banno Lage Hai Phoolon Ka Gehna
Banno Ki Aankhen Kajrari
Banno Lage Sabse Pyaari
Banno Pe Jaaon Main Vaari Vaari

Geet hid behind Anvesha.

MAAN:Banno Ki Saheli Resham Ki Dori
Chhup Chhup Ke Sharmaaye Dekhe Chori Chori
Banno Ki Saheli Resham Ki Dori
Chup Chup Ke Sharmaye Dekhe Chori Chori
Yeh Maane Ya Na Maane Main To Ispe Mar Gaya
Yeh Ladki Haay Allah Haay Haay Re Allah
Yeh Ladki Haay Allah Haay Haay Re Allah

SAMEERA: Babul Ki Galiyaan Na Chad Ke Jaana
Paagal Deewana Isko Samjaana
Babul Ki Galiyaan Na Chad Ke Jaana
Paagal Deewana Isko Samjaana
Dekho Ji Dekho Yeh To Mere Peeche Pad Gaya
Yeh Ladka Haay Allah Haay Haay Re Allah
Yeh Ladka Haay Allah Haay Haay Re Allah



Sameera was dancing around Maan & he tried to avoid her.Geet smiled at his plight.He was singing lukin at Geet but everyone including dadi thot it was for Sameera.No one xcept Annie & Piya noticed the way in which Maaneet were singing & dancing with their eyes and joined each other occassionally!!! 😉

MAAN : Lab Kahe Na Kahe Bolti Hai Nazar
Pyaar Nahin Chupta Yaar Chhupaane Se
Pyaar Nahin Chupta Yaar Chhupaane Se
SAMEERA:Roop Ghoonghat Mein Ho To Suhana Lage
Baat Nahin Banti Yaar Bataane Se
MAAN:Yeh Dil Ki Baatein Dil Hi Jaane Ya Jaane Khuda
Yeh Ladki Haay Allah Haay Haay Re Allah
SAMEERA:Yeh Ladka Haay Allah Haay Haay Re Allah

GEET(pretending as if she is singing for Annie but lukin at Maan) : Mangne Se Kabhi Haath Milta Nahin
Jodiyaan Banti Hai Pehle Se Sabki
Jodiyaan Banti Hai Pehle Se Sabki

MAAN (pointing to Geet who stood behind Sameera): Oh Leke Baaraat Ghar Tere Aaonga Main
Meri Nahin Yeh to Marzi Hai Rab Ki

SAMEERA : Are Ja Re Ja Yun Jhooti Muthi Baatein Na Bana
Yeh Ladka Haay Allah Haay Haay Re Allah
Yeh Ladka Haay Allah Haay Haay Re Allah

MAAN:Banno Ki Saheli Resham Ki Dori
Chhup Chhup Ke Sharmaaye Dekhe Chori Chori

SAMEERA:Babul Ki Galiyaan Na Chad Ke Jaana
Paagal Deewana Isko Samjaana

MAAN:Yeh Maane Ya Na Maane Main To Ispe Mar Gaya
Yeh Ladki Yeh Ladki Haay Allah Haay Haay Re Allah

CHORUS:Yeh Ladka Haay Allah Haay Haay Re Allah
Yeh Ladki Haay Allah Haay Haay Re Allah
Yeh Ladka Haay Allah Haay Haay Re Allah

The beats got faster Geet was dancing with pinky & tasha lukin at Maan.Maan was standing near Sameera but with each moves he was lukin at Geet & she was complementing him silently with a smile.Sameera noticed this.She couldnt take this & she kissed Maan on his cheek in front of everyone.The smile disappeared from Geet's face when she saw that.Maan was shocked himself.Dadi was embarassed but felt good somewhere.Sharmaji was happy as if he hit some jackpot.Piya & Annie murmured to each other, "Bhai to gaye"
Maan rushed to outhouse finding Geet missing in the function.Sameera secretly followed him(author's comment:sameera jasus frm united states of Amritsar! 🤣)

Geet sat on her bed.As soon as Maan entered the room she turned her face away.His heart ached when he saw her turning away from him.He went near her.
Maan: geet meri baat to suno
As soon as he sat near her she rushed to washroom.Maan dipped his head down sadly.He was about to leave when he heard the washroom door open.He slowly raised his head & was puzzled to see her approaching him with a tray containing dettol,warm water & cotton😕.She turned his cheek(where Sam kissed him😉)forcefully & started wiping it with the cotton.Maan smiled when he realized that she was fakin this anger.He pulled her closer and made her sit on his lap.She still gave him her angry luks.

Maan:waise geet...sirf dettol se saaf karne se kaam nhe chalega
Geet(innocently):phir?
Maan:medicine do na
Geet :medicine
Maan:Hmm... (his fingers gently touched her soft lips & she blushed😳)

Maan:geet kya sach me tumhe aj bura nhe laga?
Geet:bura to laga tha Maan...par Sameera ki wajah se nhe balki isliye ki sabke samne me apko apna nhe keh saki...na apke pas aye...Annie -Arjun,Piya-Abhay ki tarah me apke sath dance bhi nhe kar payi...na ap chahkar bhi mere karib a paye...par me janti hu Maan humare halat hi aise he.Annie apke behen hone ke sath meri ache saheli bhi he.Aur me ye kabhi nhe chahte ki humare wajah se uski khushiyo me koi bhi aanch aye.

Maan(bringing her in his embrace): ab zyada der nhe lagega mishty...bas ek bar Annie ki doli uth jaye me dadima se humare bare me baat karunga.Aur mene soch bhi liya he ki Annie ke reception me humari shadi announce karenge!
Geet: sach Maan?
Maan: ha geet..thats y i hav planned a grand reception party.Kyuki us din me puri duniya ko (lukin into her eyes..) Mrs.Maan Singh Khurana se milwane ja rha hu..

Geet blushes hearing this.☺️
Maan smiles & whispers in her ear,'Geet mera medicine nhe diya tumne..'
Geet: medicine?
Maan:ha wo dettol ke baad..
Geet: acha?
Maan:hmm...
He closes his eyes & brings his cheek near her anticipating for a kiss.Geet moves towards him her lips brushing against his cheek. Maan suddenly opened his eyes in shock as she bit his cheek.
Maan:geeet
Geet:ha Geet!😡
Maan:ye kya?
Geet:sahi he na.Ap jayiye apni Sameera ke pas. Wo degi apko pappi aur jhappi! Huh!😡

Maan:par tumne to kaha tha ki tumhe bura nhe laga?
Geet:ha to...usne kiss kiya iska bura nhe laga aur ap jo uske pas jake dance kar rhe the uska kya?😡
Maan:arey me kab gaya?
Geet: ha ha wo hi apke peeche pad gayi he na?
Maan made a baby face.
Geet:aur ap to dudh peete bache ho na..Apne bhav diya isliye wo pas ayi..aur apko uski saza bhi milegi.😡
Maan: kuch bhi manzoor he begam sahiba! Apka hukum sarakho par.
Geet: to aj ap yaha outhouse me nhe apne bedroom me soyenge...
Maan:mishty lekin... 😲
Geet :ab ap jayiye Maan..
Maan:arey geet shona...meri baat..
She pushes him to the door.Maan holds her hand & spins her bringing her to his embrace... Mahiii... mahii...mahi...😳

Maan:gudnite kiss to de sakta hu na?

She smiles and he locks his lips with her...his hands stroking her waist & she dug her nails on his hair...yet again a deep passionate kiss...

Sameera was watching all these from the other side of the door.The fear of losing 'Maan Singh Khurana' again woke up in her.She was fuming in anger😡seeing them together.It was she who wanted to possess him like this.She had been expecting to witness a fight bcoz of her and here they are once again fighting to love each other...She ran away from there to the mansion.

Sharmaji was in one of the guest rooms.Sameera went to him with teary eyes.She told him wat she saw few minutes before.

Sam: dad Maan reception me shadi announce kar dega.Phir hum kuch nhe kar payenge.Aur wo Savitri Devi ko to Maan ke kushi ke agey kuch nhe dikta.Ab kya hoga dad? Hum dekte reh jayenge...😭
Sharma:nhe beta..aisa kuch nhe hoga.Maan shadi tab announce karega na jab wo ladki yeha he.Reception se pehle hum use yeha se bhaga denge aur ye kam khud Savitri Devi se karvayenge.
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Its Annie's haldi ceremony.Everybody including Geet applied haldi to her.They were all enjoying a lot. Geet was wearing a saree while Maan in his usual white costume.
Later Geet went upstairs to get some 'shagun ki thali'.She was arranging the thali when she felt his presence.She could feel his eyes falling like laser light on her back (if u hav an xperience with laser light they are really intense & gives u headache if viewed continuously jst like MSK's luks uff..u cant gape at for a long time...thats why this anology😉)
Geet:Maan ap yaha?
Maan:...
She continues arranging the thali,'Maan ap yaha kya kar rhe?Go downstairs.Guests r there & they vl ask for u..ap jayiye..

Maan comes closer to her & hugs her from back...
Maan:Geet i want ur help..
Geet(luks at him worriedly):kya hua Maan?
Maan:wo Geet jab bhi me...tumhe sari me dekta hu me sas nhe le pata...
Geet:acha..(she wacks him)Maan mujhe bohat kam he jane dijiye...
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The same time in Savitri Devi's room.
Dadi:Sharmaji why r u lukin worried?
Sharma:to aur kya karu?Jo kuch bhi ho rha he usey dekh kar me shant kaisey rahu?
Dadi:ye ap kya keh rhe he?Hume kuch samaj nhe a rha.Saaf saaf bataiye hua kya he?
Sharma: ab hona kya he? Apne hume zubaan di he aur apka pota waha apne secretary ke sath...
Dadi:Sharmaji...hold ur tongue..u r talkin abt MAAN KHURANA
Sharma:ha yehi soch kar humne ha kaha tha.Ap bade log honge par me ek beti ka pitha hu.
Dadi:i understand but u should be mistaken.Geet is a simple girl.She had been a gr8 help for me during these days.
Sharma:if u dnt believe me go upstairs & find out urself.

Savitri Devi lukd angrily at Sharma & went upstairs.She was shocked with what she saw there.

Geet was leaving when Maan held her hand.She stopped.Maan slowly moved near her nuzzling her earlobe and then her nape...his hands slowly moved to her bare waist inside the saree & his finger tips slightly caressing her navel.Geet closed her eyes & was breathing heavily...He went on stroking her waist...completely lost in her.
'Maaan..mujhe jane dijiye',she moaned.

Dadima couldnt take it anymore & she turned away in disgust only to face Sharma & Sameera.
Dadi:ap fikar mat kariye.Ye me sambhal lungi.

Sharma & Sameera exchange a victory smile.😈
Savitri Devi was really upset.She didnt expect this from Geet.The girl who herself told her that she never thot of Maan in that way,who knew well that she wantd Sameera to be her bahu.Still how could she? But not anymore.She had to close this Geet's chapter today itself!😡
'Maan beta',called Dadi.
Maaneet straightened themselves immediately.Dadi pretended as if she had not seen anything.She ignored Geet and took Maan to a side.Geet didnt want to interfere.So she went downstairs.

Maan(lukin at the direction of Geet):kya hua dadi?
Dadi:wo beta hume Arjun ke liye kuch gift dena he shagun ke tor par.To u should go to buy a wrist watch.
Maan:ok dadi. I vl send Adi now.
Dadi:no no that wont be sufficient.Beta its a gift for our 'damaat'
Maan:ok dadi but u know na i dnt like shopping.Y dont u send Dev?
Dadi: Maan no more xcuse! Its ur sister's wedding & i want it to be perfect.
Maan:ok dadima.i vl go.(he still luks around for Geet.For some reason he didnt want to leave her alone...
Dadi:Maan now go! And take ur own time to select,after all its a matter of our reputation.
Maan:ji dadi.
He left unwillingly with Adi.
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Geet was in the dining hall serving tea to the guests.Dadi came there & stood staring at her.She turned to luk at her.
Geet:arey dadima ap?me apke liye chai bana du?
Dadi:hmm...
Geet pours milk on a cup & mixes sugar.
Dadi:Apka ghar kaha he Geet?
A sad smile crept on her face when she heard that.But she definitely didnt want to hurt dadi with her sad story on one of the happiest days of her life.So she just answered wat is relevant.

Geet:ji wo Hoshiarpur
dadi:aur ap Maan ko kaise janti he?
Geet:wo veerji ke sath HP aye the.
Dadi was surprised with that reply.She again watched Geet makin her tea.
Dadi:apko to bohat kuch ata he.

Geet sensed a sarcassm but she ignored it.
Geet: ha dadima,wo kya he na darji humesha kaha karte the ki ladkiya jitni bhi padi likhi ho,ghar ka kam to unhe ana chahiye.
Dadi:acha to kya tumhare darji ne hi tumse kaha tha kya mere pote ke gale padne ?😡

The tea pot almost dropped from her hand when she heard that😲.She just closed her eyes in pain.
NT sensed some trouble and signalled the guests to leave the room drawing their attention to something else.
Now the room was left with Dadi,Geet,Sharma,Sameera & some servants.

Sharma:i know these middle class people very well.Dekha hoga ladka acha he,rayiz he to laga diya apni ghar ki ladki ko uske peeche.Otherwise y didnt anyone come lukin for her?

Tears welled up her eyes but she didnt let them come out from her eyes.
Just then Annie came running.

Annie:dadi wat r u doin? Ap jaisa soch rhe he waisa nhe he.Maan bhai...
Dadi: Annie its ur shadi today.U should concentrate on that.
Annie:par dadi...
Dadi:apne kamre me jao...
Annie:lekin..
Dadi:humne kaha na! Ab jayiye ap.

Annie lukd at Geet helplessly & left the room.

Dadi:pata nhe aisa kya dekha he mere bacho ne isme?

Geet dips her head down.She clinches her fist preventing her tears...

Sharma:arey Savitriji aise ladkiyo ke ghar me yehi sikate he ki kisi bhi tarah amir ladke ko apne pallu me band lo aur bas usko apne ishare pe nachao.Uske liye ye kuch bhi karte he.Maan beta to heera he.Isne hi unhe apne jaal me phasaya he.Ye khud jake giri hogi bistar pe...Phir wo to mard he na thoda unka mann bhi phisal gaya hoga.

Geet:bas Sharmaji ap apni had par kar rhe he.

Dadi: bas Geet.Aj meri poti ki shadi he aur mujhe koi tamasha nhe chahiye.Agar tum me zara si bhi izzat,sharam aur swabhiman ho to NIKAL JAO MERE GHAR SE.

Geet stood there shocked😲..She wanted to burst out.She turned around slowly and left the room.As soon as she went out of their sight the tears she had held poured down endlessly😭 😭 😭.She ran outside and sat on her knees in the garden.She couldnt take this much pain...'kyu babaji? Kya mujhe khushiyo ka haq nhe?Kya mujhe jeene ka haq nhe?

They had accused her family!Her family that had always stood by her side..that brought her up with values of honesty and simplicity.She had been a pampered child.No one ever talked to her like this.They always treated her like a flower...so softly...tenderly had they brought her up.Yet she wasnt a spoilt child.She clearly knew her limits.But today so many fingers were pointed against her...her family.How could they make such cheap allegations?

The pain in her heart was unbearable.She needed a hand of comfort...a shoulder to lean...a lap where she could rest her head...she felt so lonely...she wanted to hug Rano,her mother and cry her heart out😭... 'Maaa...' she cried😭.She got up from there and walked out aimlessly...She crossed the gate of Khurana Mansion and went away...not even lukin back once...
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PRECAP:
Dadi: 😲 Maan ye..
Maan: dadima BAS ek aur shabd nhe warna me bhul jaunga ki humara rishta kya he! 😡


Hope u like this part.I think it was long enough...Thnx once again for ur wonderful comments!😃 I hav tried to reply to all of them. Wait one or two days for Maan's reaction! Give me ur opinions plzz...waitin for ur comments..

i feel lik strangling sam, her father and dadi..
feeling extremely sorry for geet...
hope maan is able to salvage the situation and is able to trace and placate her..
simply marvellous update
keep writing

plzz continue with the storu..coz u write beautifully...
i simply love ur narration...

love u and ur ffs

reva

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

i feel lik strangling sam, her father and dadi..
feeling extremely sorry for geet...
hope maan is able to salvage the situation and is able to trace and placate her..
simply marvellous update
keep writing

plzz continue with the storu..coz u write beautifully...
i simply love ur narration...

love u and ur ffs

reva

Thnk u dear. 😃 I feel humbled by ur appreciation...vl continue definitely...

Not only sam nd sharmaji maan's daadi is also responsible for all . . . . She is such stupid woman . . . . She wants maan's happiness naa can't she see wats makes him happy. . . .

superb!!!!

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

Not only sam nd sharmaji maan's daadi is also responsible for all . . . . She is such stupid woman . . . . She wants maan's happiness naa can't she see wats makes him happy. . . .

Yes..but dadi is being mislead by these two devils...😡