Anya FF~~Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hai~~Updated Ch4 Pg5

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Hello people...
I wish to write a new FF on Anant and Navya ki kahani Navya ki zubaani, after 3 years...
And instead of commerce students, they're medical students...


PROLOGUE: They decided to stay GOOD friends and has been the case for the past three years, but this very friendship made them pine for each other day after day

CHAPTER 1: TUM MERE KAUN HO?!

Dadi was laughing loudly over the phone and continuously saying: "Woh kab aah raha hai??".
For a change, I wanted to know who or maybe I just wanted to divert my attention to something else because I was feeling very uneasy, I haven't seen HIM for over two days and couldn't help but look at my mobile and cry silently.

I sat down and recalled what happened some days ago..." Sochke hi dil bekaboo ho jata hai..."
Anant came looking for me like some mad chap in Kanpur, while I was away for a medical internship. Oh God! Poor Soul! When he finally confessed his love...

(slowly the flashback became clearer)
There was a riot outbreak in Kanpur, everyone was fleeing here and there...In the meantime, I was at the medical camp, helping out with some casualties. When Anant came to know about the riot, he landed up in the city on that very day. He went around all the hospitals of the city and could not find me. He became more confused and worried and that is when he thought of giving a ring to Ritz, who for some reason couldn't come along; she informed Anant about the medical camp.

Without losing any second, Anant left for that place but when he arrived there, the tents were destroyed and there was fire everywhere. I know how damn scared he was when he saw the sight of that place and out of fear and uncertainty, he started crying my name out loud;
he was looking for me everywhere and his eyes were red with tears, fear and anger...Fear for me and anger for himself...


(Everyone-the nurses, doctors and patients were transferred from that camp to a safer place when we heard that the riot was approaching us...They managed to get away while I was left behind..I had to run and run and run for my life and had to find a safe hideout)

But when I heard Anant's voice, I had to come out..Then I saw him in that condition and couldn't help but run and hug him b'coz I was scared to death myself. I could feel his strong arms giving me the assurance that I was between safe hands.

He hugged me so hard as if he was not going to see me again; he was also blabbering and muttering something under his breath, which was difficult to understand. But soon, his voice became much clearer and I could hear him say those wonderful words, I've been craving to hear for the past 3 years:

Anant: I love you Navya, I love you so much...Darr tha ki kahin tumhe kho na doun. KAHAN THI TUM??!! Jaan hi nikaal di thi meri!! Itni naraaz thi mujhse??

Main to usse nazrein hi nahin mila pa rahi thi..par dheere se yeh kaha ki:

Me: Main kaun hoti hoon tumse naraaz hone wali?? Main tumhari kya lagti hoon Anant?? Koi bhi nahin!! Tumhara to rishta...Tum mere kaun ho!!!??

(I could feel that his heart was crying like mine...maybe more).

But then, he placed a finger on his lips to silence me and continued:

Anant: This is it!! Ab mujhse aur bardaash nahi hoga!! Ab mujhse aur sahaa nahin jaayega!!
Main apne Baba ke bataaye hue raaste par chal to raha tha par main khush nahin tha! Har waqt tumhare hi baare me sochta rehta, unke saath hota tha, tab bhi!!

Navya, kabhi kabhi kuch rishton ke dor ko aur mazboot karne ke liye, kuch usool badalne parte hain. Kal tak main bahut confused tha:
Ek taraf par meri family, meri parvarish, mere usool tthe, aur doosri taraf par TUM thi!!
Lekin mujhe ab yeh ehsaas hogaya hai ki:

TUM...SIRF TUM MUJHE PURA KARTI HO!
I CANNOT EVEN IMAGINE A DAY WITHOUT YOU, AUR YAHAN PAR TO MERI PURI ZINDAGI KA SAWAAL HAI!!
Agar tum ho mere saath, to tum meri family ka hissa ban jaaogi, mere family ke paas rahogi to unhe ehsaas hoga ki unki parvarish galat nahin kyunki main TUMHE choona aur waise bhi... Jabse tumse pyaar kiya hai, meri puri ki puri duniya ulti-phulti ho gayi hai...mere usool bhi, by the way!!

He kept looking at me for quite some time...Total silence...It was awkwardness in the true sense. But then Anant looked up to me, but this time, he looked moreover determined about something!!

Anant: Navya...

I looked into his eyes, but when I met his gaze, sharam ke maare ankhen idhar-udhar ghumne lage!

Anant: Navya, meri taraf dekho! Dekho na...please!!!😳
MUJHSE SHAADI KAROGI??!!😊

I was literally shocked: KYA???
I couldn't believe what I just heard. But he seemed to be pretty convincing.

Anant: Tumne theek suna...
MUJHSE SHAADI KAROGI??!!

Me: Par Anant, tumhara to rishta...

Anant: Tum uski fikr mat karo, main sab kuch aur sabko sambhal lunga!! Par pehle mere sawwal ka jawaab do!!

Me: Lekin Anant, mere ma-papa ka kya??

Anant: Navya, pehle hum Mumbai chalte hai, phir sochte hai

Then again the famous silence charon taraf chaa gaya. But then, we both cried bitterly and hugged each other dearly as I said on and on:

Han Anant han!! Han, main bhi tumse pyar karti hoon, Han, main bhi tumse door nahin reh sakti...han, main bhi tumhare saath apni puri zindagi bitaana chahti hoon!! Tujh mein hi mujhe apna rab dikhta hai...Han Anant Han!!!

Precap:
After some times, my mobile rang and I rushed to see who was it and was terribly happy to see Anant's name flashing!!




DO LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS AND LET ME KNOW WHETHER SHOULD I CONTINUE!!
n YEAH, DON'T FORGET TO HIT THE <LIKE> BUTTON IF U LIKED IT!!
Thank You!!!😊

Edited by Ish-Loves-Anya - 14 years ago

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I love the siggy!!! The phone conversation!! 😍
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simply awesome 👏, I loved the idea of putting the pics . it makes the story even more interesting.😊
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awesome yaar... keep itup d gud work :)
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OMG..!!! that waas fabulous...!!!!! loved it..! plz continue soonn 👏
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nice start yaar! plz pm me when u update
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Guys!! Coming up soon with chapter 2!!
I'm happy that u people liked it!!
I'll try to pm if possible!!😊
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Hey guys, I'm back with chapter 2!!
Hope that you people enjoy this one as well...😉
I know its quite short, but I'll try to make it longer the next time!

CHAPTER 2: ZINDAGI KA FESLA

That very night, Anant and I left for Mumbai as he drove for the whole night.

On the way, we remembered our times together...The Happy ones.😊. and the crazy 😉ones...and the sad ones😭. It was such a mixture of emotions!!!






On reaching the city the following day, we did not return home immediately; instead, Anant called Ranbir, Ritz and Appy to our favourite garden corner.

Wahan par humne sab ke saamne yeh accept kiya ki hum ek doosre se bahut pyar karte hai aur hum yeh judaai bardaash nahin kar payenge!


Anant: Kuch Socho Ranbir! Kuch socho! Ab hum kya karein??

Ranbir: Tum dono ke saamne sirf ek hi raasta hai!


Anant and I: Kya????
(Then we looked at each other, then elsewhere)

Ranbir: Tum dono bhaag kar shaadi kar lo!

Anant, Appy, Ritz and I: BHAAG KAR SHAADI????!!!

Me: Bhaagna koi solution nahin hai!


Anant: Han yaar! Bhaagke shaadi? Iska consequence toh...

Appy: Kya Ranbir? Kaun kaun se ideas de rahe ho?

Ritz: Guys...Ek taraf se dekha jaaye, toh Ranbir theek hi keh raha hai! Socho! Instead ki woh dono, I mean tum dono bhaagkar shaadi karo, isse achcha hai ki tum log court marriage ya phir Hindi Act ke anusaar, religious marriage kar lo!


Appy: Phir? Hitler ji ka gussa?? Anant ke papa ka gussa??

Ritz: Appy! Puri tarah meri baat to sun lo! Hum Anant aur Navya ki shaadi karwa to lenge lekin unke shaadi ko tab tak chupaaye rakhenge, jab tak unke family ko bataane ka waqt nahin aa jata!

AUR ISME MAIN TUM LOGO KI MADAD KAROUNGI!!

All of a sudden, out of nowhere, a known voice gave away this statement which left me and the rest of us...STUNNED



Me: Di?! Aap??!!

Renuka di: Han Navi main. Main jaanti hoon ki pehle main aisa kabhi nahin kehti..
Lekin thokar khake hi insaan ki aankhen khulti hai. Anant, main jaanti hoon, shayad sirf maine hi apni behen ko inn teen salon me tarapte hue dekha hai...Raat-raat jaagkar blankly kuch na kuch dekhti rehti thi, apne hi duniya mein gumsum rehti thi, chup-chap apna kaam karti...dadi ki daat bhi uspar koi asar nahin kar raha tha! Main to boloun, ki yeh toh ek zinda laash ban chuki thi...Jee to rahi thi...but-just-for-the-namesake...


I coul
d feel Anant's eyes examining me thoroughly but lovingly, then he came up to me and held my hands and this sent positive vibes throughout my body, my heart and my soul.


Ritz: Renuka di, aap to law student reh chuki ho na...Toh aap hi bataao na ki humein exactly
karna kya hoga?

Renuka di: Dekho Ritika, main ek kaam kar sakti hoon! Normally, court marriage karne ke liye kum se kum ek mahine pehle hi apply karna chahiye. Lekin meri ek bahut acchi dost inn deenon in charge hai... To main shayad parso ka date fix karwa sakti hoon! All in all, char witnesses chaahiye honge aur waise bhi, tum dono already 21 years ka barrier paar kar chuke ho. So isme koi dikkat nahin honi chaahiye!

Me: Lekin di...Maa aur papa? Main unke wishwaas ko iss tarah choor-choor nahin kar sakti! Unke sapne, unke armaan ka kya?


Renuka di: To tum kya chahti ho Navi? Papa aur dadi ko tumhare aur Anant ke pyar ke baare me bhanak par jaaye aur woh tumhari shaadi Kanpur ke kissi acche gharaane ke acche ladke se karwa de? Yehi chahti ho tum?

I was more or less worried about the same thing, but the moment i set my eyes on Anant, all the tension flew in the air as I knew that I belonged with him...<to him>...and no one else!!!




The flashback was over as...

After some times, my mobile rang and I rushed to see who was it and was terribly happy to see Anant's name flashing!!

Anant: Hello angel! Kaisi ho tum? Mujhe miss kiya??

Me: Anant aap bhi na...Kuch fikr hi nahin hai aapko. Main kitni pareshaan thi! DO DIN! Do din se maine aapko nahin dekha, aapki awaaz nahin suni! Lekin aapko kya??




Precap:
Dadi called me in the living room to have tea and was saying something on I think, someone special coming to meet me tomorrow afternoon and that I had to return home early whatsoever par main apni dhun mei khoyi thi!










Edited by Ish-Sajan - 14 years ago
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quite interesting and awesome images which looks so real,and update also nice,continue it soon,eagerly waiting for next update😊😊
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I love ur idea of putting images ...it makes the story so interesting ...simply wonderful job ...👏
Waiting eagerly for the next chapter now😊

And I loved it when Anant called navi "angel..." so sweet and romantic...i could almost hear him saying "mujhe miss kiya ?"

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