Maaneet ff- Inhuman Ties pt25pg138/NOTE pg141 - Page 13

Created

Last reply

Replies

823

Views

141.4k

Users

131

Likes

2.4k

Frequent Posters

mitzi11 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
wow 45 wife interesting
never thought in imagine
the the story i'll turn like
that
love it
amazing update
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm

Thank You Glittering Graphic

MsMovielover thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
OMG he has been married so many times...
does that mean he didnt drink blood thats why he bit her & turned her?? im a little confused but will wait for the next update..
continue soon
spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
part 5
nice part...
poor Geet got the shock of her life about Maan's previous marriages...
but her change into vampire is still the mystery...
cont soon...
-Stutz- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
lolzz... thurkey maan!!!! 'thanx for the pm...
maangeet_rocks thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
45...45...45...45😲😲😲
😲
i am still in shock about the number...when you said he has an habit..i thought the number will be 10-15 but 45??????????😲 i am actually heartbroken...

how could maan do such a thing yaar??? he duped 45 girls...😡it pains a lot to say this but maan is a b*****d. he is such a a**.

geet must be shattered to see such side of maan...lord help her??????just do me favor and plz make geet give maan a tight slap before they separate...though now i am beginning to understand why geet blames maan for her present condition...

continue soon...😃😃waiting eagerly for the update...😃😃
caffeineaddict thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 14 years ago

Location: Mumbai...next morning...

Geet was sitting on her study table and going through the reports... She was confused...not a clue...She had been studying the Report since night and was left with no Clue regarding the mysterious slaughter... She opened the Cause of Death section and found it was poisoning coupled with the head being bashed with cricket bat...She shuddered at the thought though she herself was a slaughterer. There was a knock at the door...
Geet: come in!

The door opened at she smelt a man...She turned round to see Abhijeet looking at her room amazed...
Geet: Abhijeet...aap yahaan?
Abhijeet: haan...ji Dr. actually mujhe ACP sahab ne bheja hai...report dekhne ke liye... Aapko kuch mila?
Geet: *sighs* nahi...main kal raat se report ulat-palat kar rahin hoon...pur no Success...
Abhijeet: Waise aapka room kaafi mysterious hai...kya Sunlight nahin aati...
Geet stuttered: aati hai...pur jab main kaam karti hoon...to I don't like light...Darkness helps me in concentrating...
Abhijeet: kya umda thought hai!

Geet smiled at the exclamation... Abhijeet moved forward and dropped his head on the Report... She pointed at the key points and as she did so...Abhijeet's hands touched Geet's... He gasped...
Abhijeet: aap...ki skin kaafi thandi hai...
Geet stuttered: u-umm...yes...h-hu-humesha se thi!
Abhijeet looked convinced: ohh!

They focussed back on the report...

*~*~*~*~*~*

Maan was getting ready to board his Mumbai flight when Harshvardhan bumped in...
HV: Maan...aap kahaan jaa rahe hain?
Maan replied without looking at him: Mumbai!
HV: kyun?
Maan: kaam hai...
HV: lekin achaanak?
Maan: meeting popped up...I have to leave...
HV: aapke saath koi jaa raha hai?
Maan remained silent and eventually Harshvardhan left...

*~*~*~*~*~*

Abhijeet and Geet pondered over the Report and then searched the internet for the particular poison...which was the cause of death...
They came to know that the poison was manufactured only in Dubai and were happy to get a trifle clue... Abhijeet jumped with joy and hugged Geet... After some time, he realised that he had gone ahead of his limits and stepped back...
Geet assured him: That's okay...you're my friend na!
Abhijeet smiled...

*~*~*~*~*~*

That night, Geet was lost in her thoughts...Maan's marriage and then his torture on girls...She had been weeping all the day after having a very bad fight with Maan that morning...

(Morning)
Maan got up and found that Geet was sitting on the bed...lost in thoughts...
Maan: Good Morning Geet!
Geet didn't reply...She moved away...She was furious... He asked again...
Maan: are you okay?
Geet remained silent...
Maan calmed himself down: mujhse baat karo Geet

She remained silent...That was it! Maan Singh Khurana ka ego... He dashed towards her and pulled her by hand...
She moaned in pain...Maan didn't loosen his grip...
Maan: tum mujhse baat kyun nahi kar rahi ho?
Geet remained silent though her eyes flooded with tears...
Maan: agar tumhe mujhse baat nahi karni hai...mat karo...main maraa nahi jaa raha hoon...aur ek baat...us ladki ne tumhe bataya ki meri 44 shaadiyan already ho chuki hai...and you believed...I am still on 20th...
Geet was shocked...He pushed her away and she fell on the floor after her stomach hitting on the corner of the table...
Maan went out slamming the door behind while Geet screeched in pain...she was lying there helplessly and would have been serious if Nakul had not chanced to peep in...As soon as he saw Geet, he called Daadima and she was rushed to the hospital...
After few hours of medication, the doctor announced that Geet had lost her two month child because of the injury, the family was shocked...They thought that it would be really difficult to tell Maan not knowing he himself had killed his baby...

Geet was taken back to her house and was advised bed-rest... That night Maan came home late... Geet was sleeping when the door slammed and Maan entered clumsily... She moaned... Maan!
Maan's eyes were red and he spoke: Oh! to tum yahaan ho! chalo mere saath...
Geet: kahaan?
Maan pulled her out of the bed not realising her pain and forced her to a local bar...
Geet's heart started panting...she clutched him tightly... He pulled away from her...

*~*~*~*~*~*

Geet was sitting in her room lost in her past when Ayesha came...
Ayesha: kahaan kho gayi...?
Geet: nahin...kahin bhi to nahi! tu bataa? aaj kya khaya?
Ayesha: abhi jaa rahe hain...wahi bataane aayi thi...ghar pe rehna!
Geet: hmm...

Precap
Geet lost in thoughts...

-Previous PART 5-
-Next PART 7-
Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 14 years ago
zaara2212 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
i am first


hmm interesting



Edited by zaara2212 - 14 years ago
Unknownrockstar thumbnail
Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
feeling so sad for Geet, she lost her baby...and Maan is such a b******* hate...him...didn't understand her pain
-Stutz- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
nyc parts shivul.. finally got time to read them.. this is ur best ff i gess...
wow... ]

thanx for the pm!
caffeineaddict thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

nyc parts shivul.. finally got time to read them.. this is ur best ff i gess...
wow... ]

thanx for the pm!


others are bad...😭😭😭
sorry! just kidding!!!😉

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz · 10 months ago

In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2)

Siggi by Sandhya (@sevenstreaks) (P.S this was my pitching picture to the production houses - which Sandy had done for me a couple of years...

Expand â–¼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".