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Posted: 14 years ago
great update...
so much suspense..
cant wait to find out more
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Posted: 14 years ago
Such a dull response... Please comment guys
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Posted: 14 years ago
i have a doubt...plz try to clarify...
why do maan keep marrying girls and leaving them? is it for money?or something else?and why doesn't his family stop him?if he does that for a night of pleasure then why not choose some other way likew***e or casual girlfrnds?and if for money then why? i mean he is msk isn't he suppose to be loaded?

plz do clarify my doubt as i am very confused😕


i love your ff...plz do continue soon...why did maan leave geet if he was in love with her???
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Posted: 14 years ago

Many of you have different queries regarding my Fan Fic! Some popular ones are...

Why did Maan marry girls and left them... He is self-sufficient
Well...actually this suspense will be revealed in a very detailed manner some time later...otherwise this FF will prove to be a very short one!
I can only say that he did that for Money!

What is Geet actually and how is Maan responsible for it though he himself is normal!
Whatever she is...she is certainly not human and Maan directly/indirectly is responsible...you all will soon come to know why!

How did they Split?
This mystery is actually the main-point of my FF! But it's fault of one of them...

Guys! Please be patient...the FF has just started and many queries have popped up...Please let me move it to the pace I have imagined and I promise that all your queries will be solved...

Signing Off,
Writer!
Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 14 years ago
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Next Morning...

Maan got up before anyone else and bashed into his gym...He was very worried that day... Pinky's words "she suicided two years ago" cannot gulp down his esophagus... He was crying and practicing Tai-chi...to ease his pain... He howled seconds later- "Geeettt"

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Geet was couching under a bush...laying her eyes on a prey ahead when her mind suddenly jerked and she got a hint as if someone was calling her... She rose and looked around...She smelled the air...It was saturated with the smell of lavender and honey and all of a sudden her prey was nowhere near her...She smirked- Oh! Great! Now the prey is even gone...Crap! Geet returned back home...angry and frustrated...When she entered...she found that her team was sitting on the Couch...She quickly smelled the situation and then corrected herself...It shouldn't look like she had gone hunting.
Abhijeet rose up to welcome her but quickly sat down seeing anger in ACP's eyes!
Abhijeet: Good Morning Dr.!
Geet: hmm...Good Morning... Hello sir...
ACP: hmm...
Geet: aap log yahaan pe...kuch kaam tha?
Abhijeet: main to aapse milne aaya tha... (looks at ACP) k-k-ka-kaam ke baare mein baat karne...

Milind and Ayesha giggled and Geet shot an angry glance at them...
ACP: Geet...hum to aise hi yahaan se jaa rahe the...socha tumhare saath breakfast karte jaaye!
Geet coughed and thought- Yeh kya nayii...musibat aa gayi...main ek baar aur human food nahi kha sakti!
Geet: sure Sir...aap log baithiye...Milind...naashte ka intezaam kar do!
Abhijeet: aap nahin khayengi...mere...humare saath!
Geet: umm...nahin...main kha chuki!
ACP: Geet!
Geet: ji Sir!
ACP: tum bhi humare saath hi khaogi!
Ayesha giggled again once: umm...Okay Sir!

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Maan was getting ready for his work when his phone rang... He picked it up and saw it was Pinky's call
Pinky: Good Morning Sir!
Maan: kya kaam hai?
Pinky: Sir...woh us ladki ke baare mein pata chala!
Maan: kiske baare mein?
Pinky: sir...jiski photo aapne mujhe di thi!

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The breakfast table was laid for the first time in Geet's house and all of the team sat together... Food was laid which consisted of eggs and steak
Abhijeet relished the food while Geet kept on tossing the food with her hand...
Abhijeet: lijiye na Dr.
Geet: main...leti hoon!
Abhijeet: lijiye na!

Abhijeet stuffed a big piece of steak in Geet's mouth which Geet almost felt to puke...but she gulped it patiently... There was just one thing sure about her...However evil she may seem to be...but she never even dreamt of attacking her team or Abhijeet who liked her so much! She finished her food patiently and then went back to her room to freshen up...

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Maan didn't wait for Nakul to give his food and ran to his Office with utter rush!...
Maan: Pinky!!
He shouted twice after which Pinky entered shaking...
Pinky: Good...
Maan: kya khabar hai tumhare paas...?
Pinky: Sir...woh...
Maan: Idiot..jaldi bolo
Pinky: Sir...woh ladki...zinda hai...

Maan's eyes brightened...: kahaan hai Geet?
Pinky: ji?
Maan: kahaan hai woh?
Pinky: sir...woh jo Lake Murder hua hai na...kal uski news aa rahi thi...
Maan: to?
Pinky: to sir...woh jo Forensic Doctor hai...aap uski photo dekh lijiye ek baar
Pinky handed over a photo to Maan...he looked at it closely...It was Geet's photo! She was wearing the Dr. Uniform and her hands were all drenched in blood...
Maan: yeh photo kab aur kahaan ki hai?
Pinky: sir...woh CID Mumbai...Forensic Doctor ki photo hai...
Maan: book a ticket to Mumbai...right now...
Pinky: ji Sir!
Maan: aur haan...Thank You...

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It was a year now since they were married and they were very happy... They would spend evenings alone and together... until one day...

Geet had gone shopping...at a local tailor shop she held out the bill
Geet: bhaiyya! yeh Maan Singh Khurana ke naam se suit hai...ban gaya?
Suddenly, A girl called her...
The Girl: How do you know Maan?
Geet: how do you know Maan?
The Girl: Are you his wife...
Then she smiled and laughed... Geet felt strange
Geet: aap hans kyun rahi hai?
Girl: Maan ne ek aur ladki ko phansa liya!
Geet: matlab?
Girl: aap uski...45th patni hongi! lollz!
Geet: Kya?

The girl took Geet aside and showed her their wedding pictures... Geet was shocked and speechless... the girl also showed the collection of his weddings! Geet was almost into tears and ran away from that place...

That night...he came home and found that Geet was sitting there with eyes swollen red... He asked her the reason for that... She showed him the snaps... He grew pale...
Geet: Maan! please...keh dijiye ki yeh sab un ladkiyon ne aapko phansaane ke liye kiya hai...hum un ladkiyon ko sue kar denge!
Maan kept quiet...Geet grew curious: Maan!
Maan: Geet...tum baitho ek baar!
Geet: aap pehle boliye ki yeh jhoot hai? please...!
Maan: Geet yeh sab sach hai...
Geet looked at him with wide open eyes...

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That was really the black day for him...But Geet still trusted him after that...He regretted he hadn't drunk and reached home that day! Geet would still have been with him...

Precap
That Terrible Night!

-PREVIOUS PART 4-
-NEXT PART 6-

Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

never thought he will play with emotions of so many girls...

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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved it ...so many marriages??
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Posted: 14 years ago
and also interesting,
loved it
cont sooon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was really good yaar...hahahhaaa abhijeeth bhi na...geet human ko bhi hunt karthe hai...yuck...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
omg when geet has pain that he might hv cheated i felt the pain...
poor her even after this she trusted him...
cant wait for the next pl cont soon

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