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PART 20
Geet:Maan ****** kholiye
Maan still in shock😲 not able to make out wat she said.She pushed him back getting up.Her hands still snaked around him.
Geet: ab ap yuhi murthy bankar rahenge ya windows khulenge?
Maan: windows!
Geet: kyu koi problem he?
Maan: problem? This is may & u knw it vl b terribly hot outside.agar windows open kiya to ac band karne padegi.
Geet: to kariye na.. Usme kya he? Nature hs made al the seasons to enjoy! Just like the 1st drop of rain brings happiness to us these killing hot rays hv amused me always..They bring back my childhood memories...the way we kids run along the fields & sweat as hell but v r least bothered...Even now i feel those rays on me.. Whatevr hapens around i'm least bothered...I vl definitely xplore the happiness in my life...like v used to xplore those fields not even knowing wat v r lukin for...😊
Maan luked at her in awe 😍.He cant stop falling for her,no doubt...She is his driving force...the girl who brought back life in him which he lost once...its she who made him drench in the rain once again...was it rain or was he drenched in her love he wondered...she is the one who brought sunshine in his life...a life which he delibrately stopped living...he made himself rough,stubborn so that no one ever again crosses the high walls he built around his heart...he made himself devoid of any emotion...punishing himself for no mistake of his but still he felt responsible...But now its all past...coz God brought him an angel...his angel who taught him to live...to love again...She came into his life like a sunshine & he felt himself like a drop of snow melting before her...he knew now y he love her bcoz somewhere she was he or wat he used to be once...she reminded him about himself..The Maan who was lost somewhere...
Geet enjoying the dhoop...The rays of sun,he felt,mellowed as they had to touch her face which was so innocent & divine...He felt blissful just watchin her like this...
Wel,the whole thing was blissful for him only.
Others came out to the central cabin complaining about the heat...Annie being the 1st one.
Annie: bhai ac ko kya ho ga... (she sees Maan lost in Geet and shooks her head)
Piya asks her eyeing wat happend & she points to Maan.
Annie(whispers to piya):ye to abi se joru ka gulam ban gaye socho shadi ke baad kya hoga? (they giggle 😆 & decide to pull his leg)
Annie: kyu bhai r u feelin too cold to switch off the ac?
Maan:nhe wo to emm.. me bas...
Piya:oho annie unhe dhup sekne do na...
Maan realises & shots a glare @ them.Geet lost lukin outside not even listening 2 them.
Meanwhile NT joins them & asks innocently,:kitni dhup he na? Wat hapnd to ac?😛
Annie: are bhabi ab to dilli me raat ko bi suraj nikal ayega...
Annie & Piya hi-five each other,Maan gets irritated & leaves them.NT perplexed...😕
Geet joins them and they chat...typical ladies stuff!!
The men havin their own type in the adjacent cabin...
Arjun:Abhay hw does it feel to be married?
Abhay: u r goin to xperience it soon..i dnt want to break the suspense..
Arjun: thats y i ws askin...Agar pata chale to pehle hi bhaag jaunga na..
Maan:sochna bi mat Arjun
He finds Maan & Dev staring at him,their hands crossed over chest
Arjun(a bit scared) : chill guys! I ws jokin.. Nd she is my luv aftr al...
Maan,Dev & Abhay smile...Arjun relieved...Nd they continue with their man to man talk...
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KM
Daadima was in her room thinking abt his grandson..Am i forcing him with Sameera? And wat about that girl Geet?wats Maan upto?need to figure out soon.All i want is Maan's happiness.And i can see that since that since Sam came here.(oops dadi invited Sam almst the same time wen geet came) But i cant see that in his eyes for her.Aur aj y did he ask her to stay? May b he was concerned and its gud he trusts Sam.Sab theek he but geet? Y do i feel that Maan has some feelings for this girl?But she herself told me there is nothing btwn them.Wat if she herself dnt knw?nhe is bar hum maan ko dukhi nhe dek sakte.Hume sach ka pata karna hoga !
Sameera enters dadi's room.
Sam:kya hua dadima?
Dadi:beta hum geet ke bare me soch rhe the.
Sam shocked & annoyed bt pretend to b ok.
Dadi:waise wo ladki bohat achi he,genuine and innocent.Apka kya khayal he?
Sam: sorry dadi bt i think u should not judge nyone in such a short span of time.I mean..Who is that girl? Maan's friend? Kabse? She is younger than him,doesnt luk like one of his league,then hw?Maan never before mentioned abt such a girl.atleast apko to batate?Ye achanak kaha se aye? I'm not accusing nyone bt i'm jst sayin it for the wel being of Khurana parivaar.I hv heard many cases like u knw girls blackmailing rich families demanding money or marriage otherwise they would go to media..ab geet wont be like that bt its better to be alert
Dadi: bt u knw Maan na? Wo itni asani se kisi par vishwas nhe karte.
Sam:hmm.. Ye to wo janti hogi na.Waise maine jo bi kah rhe hu khurana parivaar ki bhalai ke liye kaha.
Dadi:hmm..
Dadi brushed aside her doubts.Sameera is the rite choice,she thot.
Sam had a victorious smile.
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AGRA FORT
The garden is decorated beautifully with orchids,balloons...everything rarest of its kind still it lukd simple perfect for the wedding of the lovers... A table is placed at the centre with a huge wedding cake.Abhay slips the ring in Piya's finger elegantly (with the pkyek dil ibadat bgm..ofcrse) Arjun holds annie even closer, Maan's eyes meet geet their eyes confiding...but they look away.Abhay & Piya cut the cake and share it to each other.It was a simple but memorable occasion.Their true love blessed with the presence of their loved ones,wat else could they ask for.But Piya wanted something more or should i say they planned somethng else...
Annie raised a toast for them.She wished her sister a happy life frm the bottom of her heart that everybody had tears in their eyes...wel now its time for some fun,said Annie & winked!
Annie:ehemm...(clears her her throat)Little birdie frm oz says, MSK sings wel!
Ooo... (Sound the audience..)
Maan angry and shockd!
Annie:we wanna hear u!
Maan: stop it annie.noways!
Piya: cmon bhai its my shadi.aur yeha koi aur to nhe he!
Maan silent.
Geet:suniye...
Maan mesmerised by those words... Annie and Piya dancing with joy in their mind,its mission accomplished already!
Geet:Piya aur annie itna request kar rhe to ga lijiye na..
Maan(stil lost): hmm..
Ne & Piya:yeee...
Maan realises wat he said.bt he cnt refuse hw could its a request by geet...
He turns around and walks.He reaches the side of the fort frm where Shah Jahan saw his love rest in peace... A brilliant view of the Taj with jst the river Yamuna separating them.
Maan closed his eyes.He could feel her even closer... Thats ironical wen he sees her standing closer to him he feels she is far away frm him,bt wen he closes his eyes he is not seeing her but he can feel her so close to his soul...
Maan sings...
(yet again a tamil song.This is not delibrate bt no othr song fits the situation better.hope u enjoy this!)
REQUEST: listen to this song plzz.. while reading..:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N60WFv1qdxI
Maan:etho etho ondru unnai kelpen
illai endral illai endral uyir thirapen
un padam nadaka nan pukal viripen
un dekam muzhuka thangatal pathipen
ulahi ulahi lahi oru asai manadukul podum
athai mattum ne thandal pothum..ullahi ullahi lahi..
I vl ask somethng to u
if u say no i vl giv my life
i vl spread flowers for ur feet to walk
i vl cover ur body with gold..
Ullahi ullahi lahi.. Just a hope in mind is enough..
U hav to give only that...ullahi...
Maan stands with one leg on a step & other at ground...gazing at the Taj.The open part of his white shirt moving with the wind...
Geet stood a few feet away frm him,his back facing her...Her eyes widen hearing him... Others make themselves comfortable enjoyin the song.
Geet moves a bit forward & stops.
Geet: nalla manam un pol kidayath
nandri sola varthai enaketh
oru tai ne un sey nan inda uravuk piriveth?
Nobody has a good heart like u.
I dnt hav words to thank u.
U r like a mother & i'm ur child then how vl this relation ever separate?
Maan turns to luk at her.
Maan: tai madiyil sey than varalama
thalli nindru thunbam tharalama
unai konja manam kenja enai thaniye vidalama?
Vl the child cme to mom's lap?
Or should torture by standing away frm her?
Is it rite to leave me alone wen my heart begs to caress you?
Geet moves backward.she breathes heavingly not able to bear his gaze. She luks down
geet: kuzhanthayum kumari endrayach
konjidum paruvavum poyache
manam pole makal vazha ne vazhthum thayache
the child is grown up as a young girl now
the stage of caressing is gone now
You are a mother who should her bless her child to live her life
Maan nodding in a negative way :hmm hmm etho ondru...
They move in the caravan to Akbar tomb.Maan & Geet steal glances oblivious to others.
At the tomb,the click snaps.A group foto was to be taken.Geet stands near NT,Maan at the other end.The photographer requests geet to stand near Maan.They stand apart,the man signals to be closer..Geet hesitates,Maan authoritively put hands on her shoulder & brings her closer.The photo clicks the moment she luks at his eyes.She frees herself & moves away.Maan follows her.Now they r alone while others xploring interiors of the tomb.
Maan walks facing her in reverse with a white pigeon on his shoulder.
Maan:vennilave poovai vaipene
vanavile udayae thaipene
unakaka ethum seiven ne enakena seyvayo?
I vl keep the moonlite as flowers for u & the rainbows as clothes for u
i vl do nything for u
wat vl u do 4 me?
Geet: intha oru janmam pothath
ezhu janmam eduthum therath
antha daivam unai kaka
dinam thozhuven thavarath
This birth wont b enough.
I cant repay it in seven births too.
I vl never fail to pray to God to protect u.
Maan helds her around her waist brings her closer to him,luks into her eyes
Maan:enna nan keten theriyatha?
Innavum en manam puriyatha?
Ada raama ivan padu intha penmai ariyathaaa..
Dont u know wat i askd?
Even now dont u understand my mind?
Maan closes his eyes & inch forward their foreheads touching.
Oh rama(God!) doesn't this womanhood come to about my torment?
Geet (tilts her head,slowly frees herself):hmm.. (humming)
Maan:etho ondru..
Geet runs back to the group and behaves like nothing hapnd.She doesnt luk @ him.They sing in unision,'ullahi ullahi lahiii...
Ullahi ullahi.. (their eyes meet) lahiii...
The song ends...its a full moon-lit nite, perfect romantic atmosphere...Geet stood at the entrance adoring the beauty of the Taj. Annie & Piya joins after the security check followed by the guys.
Piya:chale Geet..
And they enter the Taj together...the perfect place for Maan & Geet to be Maaneet...the eight wonder in the seventh wonder!!!!
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PRECAP:GEET SLAPS MAAN!!!
Hope u like it.Sorry for the same precap.nxt part vl surely hav this.Actually the idea of song came to me suddenly and that made it lengthy.I thinks thats worth as it is an update after a long break.
Plz plz post long comments! That motivates me...
Criticize me if u r bored...that vl help me improve.
I realy dnt knw if non-tamilians would njoy the song! So special request to those people to comment on the song & the part as a whole.
Nxt update after 19th may only.
njoy al!
Seems like i'm gonna get chappals,stones & rotten eggs 4 my idea of new ff 1000thl.. Any way i vl try to write wen i'm free.
Thnk u all for ur support!
Edited by madhubala123 - 14 years ago
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