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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
it might b her childhood dream abt maan bringing her to such a place... datz y shez in tears... frankly speaking i don't wanna remember sameer now... and i want geet too to forget him...
ohhh am selfish gal... rite... but can't help it...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 45 ' Love and Friendship

"A month of darkness''''''''''yes Maan, a month of darkness, I went through that pain, that sorrow, where nobody was with me and I was with nobody. I always enjoyed nature, because I believed that in world, when nobody was with me, at that time, nature was with me, it cried with me when I cried, it laughed with me when I laughed, it was angry when I was angry. Nature had always been my support, the kind of support we actually expect from family or friends but nature was everything to me. I had only one friend Anandi apart from nature, once I wanted to go to the top of mountain in Hoshiarpur but I was never allowed to go anywhere without permission. I knew my family wouldn't permit me hence I didn't ask and I went with Anandi on top of the mountain. We sat down for many hourse without realizing how time went by. We watched sunset and it was the most soothing experience in my lonely world. It was almost dark by the time we left the place. I told my parents that I had some school work but Brij found out that I was wandering somewhere with Anandi and he informed to my father about it. I was punished for it and I had to go through a month of darkness. I wasn't allowed to leave my room for a month. It was the punishment for watching this natural beauty. I never understood what my fault was. Nobody was allowed to talk with me for a month. My mom used to sneak out some time to my room but that also didn't happen when my father found out. In that month, nature was also incessantly crying with me. It was raining like it never rained in years."

She continued,

"Today I hate these tears as I am able to witness the sunset but my eyes are still threatened by the image of my past and abstaining me from witnessing this beautiful sight of the Sun. I don't have any boundings today, I could be free, I could fly like a bird, but I lost that desire to fly like a bird, I lost that life which I had in me at some point of time." Geet said while tears were flowing down from her eyes."

Maan couldn't tolerate tears in her eyes, his eyes were also moist.

"Geet, today your own tears couldn't be your enemy. You have to come out of this blurred." Maan said while wiping tears from her cheeks.

Maan noticed that she was not the same Geet who he used to know years ago. She was changed or rather life had forced her to change. Her liveliness, bubbliness was hidden beneth her skin, her skin was a shield. He had to go beneath of that shield where he could connect with her. He had to reach there to remove the fractured part of her soul so that it could be revitialized.

He crouched nearer to her to cheer her up.

"Today we both will witness this beautiful sunset together and we will remember it happily rather than with some nostalgia. You went through a lot at this early age. I know we can't change that. One thing which we could change is our future. Just imagine this scenario, twenty years down the line, we will be watching the sunset together and at that time, our today will convert in to sweet reminiscence. At least we won't be sad at that day. We have to be happy today, we can't afford to malign future with sad memory."Maan said while holding her gaze.

It was like reading minds. He captured her heart and mind so well. She wanted the same thing. She wanted her future with no stain.

Maan held his arms around her shoulders while watching the sunset together.

In last decade, this was the most beautiful evening they spent. They shared something which they weren't able to share with anyone else. They touched each other to that corner of the heart which was shielded from everyone else.

They wished this moment to last forever. They wished this Sun would never set against the horizon. It was the most soothing feeling. They forgot everything like they were the only one on the earth. Of course, the Sun had to set. Sun was cascading slowly down behind the mountains. It was almost dark and they decided to leave.

Maan helped her to stand up and for a second they caught each other's gaze. It was like some kind of confirmation that they had good time today with each other. It was the feeling of meeting someone after many years. It was the feeling of meeting the lost soul.

They both felt it though not able to express it. Maan dropped Geet at her hotel.

"Thanks Maan for the wonderful surprise, I liked it."Geet said while leaving.

"Geet, would you like to join me tomorrow morning for Sunrise?"Maan asked.

Geet was little startled but she knew that she would like to. "Ok Maan, yes I would like to."

Maan was happy that he would see her tomorrow also. Whenever she was with him, he was the happiest man on the earth.

Geet entered her hotel room and Shasha and Pinky hugged her instantly. They were waiting for her to show up for so long and finally she did.
They felt relaxed by finding Geet in good condition.

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The beautiful rays hit their skin, it felt like sparkling golden. It was the most elegant sunrise. It was coming out of the mountains like a bird was peeping out of the tree. It was serene. Cool breeze was cascading down the entire body and ran a shiver. Sky was hidden under the blanket of darkness and Sun was trying to invade in to their privacy of darkness by providing salvation through heat.

Both were sitting at the top of the mountain, covered under the blanket. The only warmth they felt was their body heat and heat of their breath. It was cold temperature. They were rubbing their hands to heat up their body. After a while, unknowingly they held each other's hand while watching sweet sunrise.

Love is like the wild rose-briar;
Friendship like the holly-tree.
The holly is dark when the rose-briar blooms,
But which will bloom most constantly?

The wild rose-briar is sweet in spring,
Its summer blossoms scent the air;
Yet wait till winter comes again,
And who will call the wild-briar fair?

Then, scorn the silly rose-wreath now,
And deck thee with the holly's sheen,
That, when December blights thy brow,
He still may leave thy garland green.

(Poem by Emily Bronte)

Can't wait to read comments.

Sejal

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Edited by Asha2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
update is Awesome as usual
for d PM 😊👏


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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME!!! ITS SO GOOD TO SEE BOTH OF THEM UNDERSTANDING EACH OTHERS PAIN. TRYING TO OVER COME THEIT PASR.
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh Sej awesome as always 😛
hope this is the new beginning of Maan and Geet's relationship
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
freaking awesome dear
loved sweet n cute maaneet scenes...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update
Awww loved maans surprise 4 geet watching the sunset
Cont sooon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
😃congratulations for new thread and it is beautiful loved it ...😃
Edited by sowmyadharini - 14 years ago

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