Love story with a strange twist:Maaneet FF Climax

p7:Pg 27

p8:pg 32

p9:pg 38

p10:pg 44

pt11:48

p12:pg 53,54

pt 13:pg 59

p14:pg 65

pt 15:pg 71

pt 16:pg 76

pt 17:pg 81

pt 18:87

pt19:pg 93

2nd version

pt 13:pg 97

pt 14:pg 103

pt 15:pg107

pt16:pg 113

pt 17:pg 118

pt18:pg 122

pt 19:pg 127

pt 20:pg 131

pt 21:pg 136

pt22:pg 140

pt23:pg 144

pt24:pg148

pt25:pg152

pt26:pg 155

pt27:pg 158

pt28:pg 161

pt29:pg164

pt30:pg 167

pt31:Pg 170

pt32:pg 173

pt33:pg 177
pt34:pg 181
pt 35:pg 185
pt36:pg 188
pt37:pg 192
pt 38:pg 195
pt 39:pg 198
Pt 40:pg 201
pt41:pg 205
pt 42:pg 208
pt 43:pg 211
pt 44:pg 214
pt 45:pg 217
pt 46:pg 220

Dev and Maan are brothers.They are like best buddies.Dev is silent.Maan is a cheerful guy who loves having fun.Their parents Srivastav and Karthi call them to the drawing room.
S:We called you both to tell you an important thing.You guys are still playing.You both had enough.We have decided to get both of you married.
They are shocked.
D:Marriage?
M:So soon?In a hurry?
S:Hurry?You guys have reached the right age to get married.
M:Mom...please...
Karthi smiles.
K:Don't worry.If you both see the girls we have chosen,you both will be in a hurry to get married.
M:Are they beauty queens?
K:YEs.I wanted both of you to get married to beautiful girls.One's wife should not be more beautiful than the other one's wife.So we have chosen twin sisters.
D:Twin sisters?
K:Ya.Geet and Muskaan.Muskaan matches Maan as they both are bubbly.Geet is sweet and quiet like Dev.
Karthi shows them the photograph of Geet and Muskaan.Dev and Maan are truly impressed by the sisters.

Dev and Maan go to see Muskaan and Geet.Muskaan and Geet come with tea and sweets.Dev and Maan can't take their eyes off their respective partners.

They go to the compound to talk.
Dev and Geet are so shy that they can't talk.
Dev finds earring missing from Geet's left ear.
D:Your earring?
Geet touches her left ear:Oh!
She sees her earring on the grass.She bends down to take it.Dev also bends down.His eyes are fixed on Geet.
She looks at him.She becomes conscious seeing him looking at her.She smiles with tension.He also smiles with tension.

Muskaan:You always wear funny T-shirts like this?
Maan is embarassed.
M:You find my T-shirt funny?
She chuckles.
Maan is impressed by her smile.


Their father Anand:Geet...did you like Dev?
Geet looks at Dev with a smile.She is very shy.She nods her head.Dev is very happy.
A:Muskaan..?
M:I liked Maan.
Maan is happy.
A:Did you guys liked my daughters.
They smile.Anand is happy.

Geet and Muskaan are in the room.
M:Geet..did yiu really like the guy?
Geet blushes:Yes.
M:Whom did you like?Maan or Dev?
G:Why are you asking such a stupid question?Dad chose Dev for me.I did'nt notice Maan.
M:But i noticed both.Maan is crazy.Dev is decent.You are lucky to have Dev.
G:Sometimes you are really crazy.

Dev is in the temple.Geet stands near him unknowingly to pray.They don't see each other.

When Dev turns his face he sees Geet.He is surprised to see her near him.He is happy about the pleasant surprise.

D:Hi Geet.
Geet is surprised to see him near her.
G:You?I did'nt know that you are here.
Dev smiles.
D:Do you come here regularly?
G:Yes.Goddess is my strength.
He smiles.
G:Ok,i'm going now.
D:Ok.See you..we will be there on your birthday.We have been invited for your's and Muskaan's birthday party.
She smiles.

Dev and Maan wear shervani and go for the birthday party.
They are shocked to see Geet and Muskaan in the same kind of dress.
M:How will we recognise who Muskaan and Geet are?
Geet and Muskaan smile seeing their condition.
Maan whispers to Dev's ears:I have an idea.You just say that their dressing is horrible.
D:What nonsense?How can i say that?THey will be hurt.Not only that.Their dress is very beautiful.
M:Just tell.Otherwise we won't be able to identify our partner.
D:Ok.But why me?Why can't you say that?
M:You tell bro.
D:Ok.
Dev's lips shiver.
D:Eh...eh...actually..actually..this dress does'nt suit you both.
Their face becomes dull.
Dev regrets hurting them.
One among them gets angry:What?Our dress is not good?
D:I'm sorry.Maan only told me to say like that.So that we will know who our partner is.
She:What?
M:Bro.My idea clicked.She is Muskaan.Only Muskaan can react like this.
M:Am i right?
Muskaan is embarassed.Geet smiles.
M:You guys are...yuck.And you Dev..you supported you funny brother Maan?
D:Huh..
They all smile.
M:I will kill you for obeying Maan and helping him to find out me.
She pulls his ear.
They all burts into laughter.
M:I knew that Muskaan will gie me a kick if i tell that the birthday suit is not good.That's why i asked Dev to tell that.
D:Maan..you escaped.
Again they laugh.

Geet and Muskaan cut the birthday cake and feed Anand cake.
Maan goes near Muskaan.
M:Even though you are talkative,spicy,short tempered and over smart you are interesting.
Muskaan does'nt care:O really?But i find you boring.
Maan is embarassed.:Me boring?Never.

Dev tells Geet:What i told is not true.Your dress is really beautiful.You look very pretty in this attire.
Geet blushes.
Maan comes:Wow!Having silent romance here?
Dev and Geet are embarassed.
D:What are you saying?Stop kidding Maan.Nothing like that.
M:Anyways you both look wonderful together.
Dev and Geet smile.
M;I will take a photograph.Just pose.
They pose for the photograph.
Maan takes their snap.Muskaan comes.
M:Muskaan..Dev and Geet are a perfect pair.Right?
She does'nt say anything.
D:Give the camera to me.I will take a snap of both of you.
Maan and Muskaan pose and Maan take their snap.

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