Love story with a strange twist:Maaneet FF Climax - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
hey nice ff so twist may b during wedding mistakeingly geet with maan and muskaan with dev omg it will b interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
excellent prologue. can you plz pm me ,added you as buddy.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
hey
really interesting
lovely ff
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Hehehe nice concept..plz PM...would love to read more😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35

Love story with a strange twist:Part 2

Anand and Muskaan are tensed as Geet has not reached home.
A:Where is Geet?
They hear a voice from behind:Don't worry.Geet is safe.
They turn back.That is Dev.He has put his arms around Geet.
Anand and Muskaan are relieved.
D:I'm sorry.I just took Geet out.
Anand smiles:It's ok.I'm happy to see you both happy together.
They both smile.

Mus:Geet..having open romance?You have become very smart.
Geet is embarassed.
Mus:Ok..come.We have to do preparations for the engagement.

Engagement function..
Dev and Maan have worn sharvani.Geet wears a green traditional costume.Muskaan wears a baby pink traditional costume.They exchange rings.
The couples are sitting together.
Dev and Geet smile together.

D:I feel happy that you are my fiancee.
She blushes.
M:Muskaan..i'm just thrilled.
She giggles:Why?Do you think our engagement was an adventure?
He smiles.
M:I like adventerous love stories.Taking risk to win our love.
He smiles.

Anand:Though the engagement of both my daughters are on the same day,the wedding won't be on the same day.
All the faces becomes dull.
A:The astrologer said Maan and Muskaan's wedding should happen only later.So Dev and Geet's wedding should be done first.
Maan's face is dull.
Maan whispers:Muskaan..i have to wait to get you in my life.
She smiles:Wait...waiting for your love is sweet no?
He smiles:Yes.But at the same time it's impatience.
She smiles:You are in a hurry to get me?
He nods:Yes.
She blushes.

On the previous day of wedding of Dev..Maan throws a bachelor's party.Black is the colour of the party.All have worn black clothes.
All are having disco.
D:Maan..what was the need of all these things?You know that i'm not comfortable with partying.
M:Oh come on bro.Dance and have fun.This is the last chance.Once Geet enters your life you won't be able to party like this.
D:That's ok.I will be happy if Geet is against me partying as i hate partying.
Maan laughs:Funny!
They are shocked to see Muskaan entering the hall in a black outfit.
M:Muskaan!
D:You are happy to see your lady.
Maan smiles.
Mus:Hi guys.
M:How come you are here?This is bachelor's party and you are a girl.
Mus:Don't say that i'm just a girl.
M:So you admit that you are a tom boy.
Mus:I don't mind if you call me a tom boy.By the way..tell me..do you have any problem if i attend your party?I'm bored of the traditional sangeet mehendi function at home.I just want to have fun.
Maan smiles.
D:Muskaan is a perfect match for you.Both of you love partying.Carry on.
Mus:Hey Dev..you also join us.
D:No..no..i don't know disco.
Mus:Join us.Automatically you will dance.
M:Yes.
Maan and Muskaan pull Dev.They push him to the dance floor.
The song 'Dil hai mera deewana kya
Kehta hai ab ghabrana kya
Taal pe jab jhoome badan
Hichkichana sharmana kya
Khul ke jhoomon khul ke gaao
Aaoo aaoo yeh khul ke kaho
It's the time to disco
It's the time to disco'{Kal ho na ho} is going on.They dance.

M:How was the party?
Mus:Cool.After a long time i enjoyed a lot.I danced with full heart.It was a rocking party.Congrats Maan.
M:Muskaan..will you be there with me to dance the rest of the life?
Dev smiles.Muskaan's smile slowly disappears seeing him emotional.

Mus:Maan..why are getting so emotional?We are engaged.We are going to get married also.Then why are you talking like this?
D:Maan is like this sometimes.Sometimes really crazy..sometimes very emotional.
Muskaan laughs:Really Dev?
Maan smiles.

Dev and Geet's wedding.
Dev ties mangalsuthra around Geet's neck.

Geet puts the garland around his neck accepting him as her husband.

They both are lost in each other.

Dev's and Geet's room..
Geet is trying to remove her necklace.Dev comes and holds her hand.They both look into each other's eyes.Slowly Dev removes her necklace.
He loosens her hair.Geet feels so shy that she runs away and sits on the bed.Dev sits near her.
D:Geet..do you love me?
Like a naughty kid she replies:Ya...that's why i married you.

He smiles:I like the way the answered my question.It was like an innocent kid.
She smiles.
D:I love you Geet.
They both look into each other's eyes.
D:We are made for each other.
G:Yes.I knew that when i saw you for the first time.We suit each other.Look at the mirror.
They sit very close to each other touching each other's face.
G:We look good with each other.Right?
Dev puts his tongue out in a funny manner:Ya.

She laughs.He also bursts into laughter.
Then they become serious.His hands touches her hand romantically.They both are so romantic that they sing and have romance:
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

Ho tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke
Dekhti hoon ab kayee
Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe..{Once Upon A Time In Mumbai}.
Dev goes closer to Geet.

Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
loved it yaar...update the next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
nice pls add me to ur pm list:)
do cont soon:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
lovely update dear...so dev and geet are married...😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
part 2
nice part...
so Dev and Geet are married...sigh...
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
great update..
so geet & dev married hmm 🤔
continue soon

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