Yun Hota To Kya Hota..??😍
(Dedicated to Shilpi and her impatience for tasha romance)
A Great Fall
(A Sneak Preview of my Future Chapters of Deewani)
As Naku was decorating the house for the pooja, she climbed the ladder which didn't seem too safe to her, but than there was no one else she could ask to decorate for her, and than she had told Ayi Sahib and her mother that she will finish the job before they'd got back from the Mandir.
The marigold garlands seemed more heavier than they looked, but with much difficulty she had managed hang them up. She wanted to decorate the doorway with so many flowers that anyone entering Patil Niwas would feel the happiness being welcomed and adorned in their house, and to welcome them to join in with their happiness, which had found their doorstep after a very........well only Bappa knows how many days she thought, hoping she wouldn't cast a buri nazar on her Saab's khushiyan.
Saab and Baji were upstairs discussing plans for some future event, Naku had left the tea on the gas for them, and thought it would be a good idea to decorate whilst it brewed. T
The last nail was too far out for her to reach, she knew if she stretched out that little bit further, than she would sure fall, as she looked down, she could tell the fall would be great as she was standing at the second from the top highest step on the ladder. She couldn't decide if she should risk it, but if she got down and slid the ladder further to the left, than it would take way too long, and the tea might even dry up, which will make Saab angry, as he isn't fond of strong tea.... as she argued with her thoughts in her mind she bit her bottom lip in fustration, and decided what the heck she'll just stretch out a little further...what was the worst that could happen.... as she glanced down once again... she knew the fall would be great, but tried to ignore that fact anyway as she pushed all her weight to the left side, aggravating the ladder's already uncomfortable position, which was now struggling to hold itself upright, .....oh no thought Naku, knowing she couldn't do anything to save herself, and closed her eyes tightly instead hoping that would miraculously make things better.........
Dutta had told Baji to find out what happened about the tea, as they were getting late to leave, but Baji had informed Dutta that he needed to send a driver to pick up Ayi Sahib and Babi from the Mandir, as they're car had broken down, and were waiting to be collected, and told Bhau that he needed to make a few phone calls, but he'd already told Naku to put the tea on.... and she must be bringing it any time soon, and than remembered as there's no one in the house, she might be caught up in something with all the work load, hence being the reason for her delay.
Bhau main abhi jaata hai, pehle Naku ko dekh ke aata hai, aur phir doosre driver ko phone kar ke bolta hai ke raaste se Aye Sahib aur Kaki ko uttaa laye.... said Baji, when Dutta told him that no, there's no need, you make the phone calls first, as I don't want them waiting in the heat for too long, and I will fetch Naku... announced Dutta, as he left quickly, before Baji could find a way to intrude.
Bhau agar tume Naku ke saath akele milne ka bahana chahiye tha tho mujhe bata dete, lekin Bhau to aise bhaag raha tha jaise kal kabhi aayga.ich nahin.... said Baji out loud, wondering why Dutta wanted to leg it without even giving Baji a chance to say anything.
As Dutta had made his way down, he could see Naku on the ladder and she seemed to be stretching towards the left way too much, even Dutta could see that she was in for a great fall.... not a good idea thought Dutta, ...what the hell did she think was going to happen, he tried to pace his walk a little faster so he could steady the ladder she was standing on, before it lost it's balance....uh-oh... oh shit...she was definately going to fall feared Dutta, as his fast walking became sudden running.....
She still gripped onto the garland in her hand so tightly that when her arms had simultaneously went around his iron like body frame, the garland fell miraculously around his neck, while she still held on to a few flowers which were totally destroyed in her sweaty palms, not to mention the adorable look on her face capturing all her fear perfectly even with her eyes closed so tightly, Dutta couldn't take his eyes off her, even though he'd found it quite amusing that she still thought she was safe from the fall, but still wasn't aware that she was in his arms, and quite comfortably too gripping onto his collar of his kurta rather aggressively, but he was sure not complaining..... god she was light thought Dutta to himself, strangely not wanting her to let go of him.
When Naku heard the ladder screech back against the floor tiles, she knew there was no escape from her fate, but when she fell, she didn't seem to have any pain, but she was too scared to open her eyes, just in case she was hurt but couldn't feel any pain due to shock. But than suddenly she felt two hands, no she felt two very strong hands hugging her close to his iron like massive body frame, which she seemed to find very comforting for the moment, but than her attention came to her hand which was gripping onto his collar really tightly as she could see the awkward position his kurta had been stretched into....and than she finally opened her eyes and saw Dutta..... no her Saab, who was staring at her so deeply that she could probably burn right there in his arms and not complain one bit.
Naku.... he said, that was enough to make her faint if she hadn't already, Naku.. he said again...tum theek tho ho na.... he asked in concern this time, but he seemed to have a sly type of smile on his face, but Naku wasn't understanding the joke, causing her to frown..... Saab.... was all she could say as she finally managed to make eye contact, getting shy all of a sudden realising that he was still holding onto her in such a filmy type way....
hmmm.. replied Dutta, knowing that she wanted him to put her down, but at the same time didn't want to acknowledge it, and so tried to act oblivious, to her unsaid pleas.
Saab... started Nakusha, ....not being able to tell him to put her down, ...woh aap ko kuch chahiye tha, she said, but he didn't reply and nor did he remove that smirk from his face, making Naku want to die in embarassment, so tried further .....tho mujhe bula liya hota...she said stuttering, but still nothing, .....er...woh....er...chai....Saab...chai, chahiye thi, main abhi laati hai.... she said thinking this will defintately get the message through to him, but nope, nothing, and than she tried one last time, ...Saab ...Saab......
Dutta could hold onto her all day, she was so vulnerable, and he couldn't take the smirk off his face, she was trying to make all the excuses under the sun to make him put her down, but she just couldn't bring the words to her lips... wow this girl is going to kill me with her simplicity.... it was such small things but these were the things that drove him crazy about her, he couldn't believe it.
Haan tho chai lao na.... he said motioning his head as though signalling her to leave, ...maine tumhe rokha to nahin, he added.
Lekin Saab.... she tried again, pehle aap mujhe....mujhe...neeche to... she said trying to shift her weight hoping this might work...
Kyun... he said as though in a demanding voice, ....tumhe yahan acha nahin lag raha... he teased, he knew this was it, she couldn't help it, she was so shy it was unbelievable and to his surprise rather than trying to get away from him, she hid her face as deep as she could in his chest and hugged him even tighter around his neck to hide her embarassment from him, making him not regret his decision of not letting go of her earlier, he was loving every bit of this closeness, and her way of denying that was even more adorable, he just never wanted this moment to end.....
......when suddenly an abrupt voice broke their magical trance,.......balika tumhare sapne ka rajkumaaaar....aaaarahaa haiiii, varmala...baraat...doli sajaa ke dulhaaa... chaaaarahaa haiii.....va maglaa saavdhaaan...... sang Baji imitating the Pandit's voice in the same manner as the song 'tenu leke' in Salaam-e-Ishq' whilst throwing the petals off of the marigold flowers at the couple that were so engrossed in each other like they were newly weds, that they hadn't even realised when Baji had come, ....and even had time to ruin their moment with a little drama.
Ayi Sahib and Babi had come by now, but before they could comment on Naku who was holding onto Dutta like he would disappear if she let go of him, and Baji throwing flowers at the couple...which only god knows why....they could smell strong fumes of tea leaves burning like they had been roasted and deliberately filled the air with it's strong odour.
When Dutta and Naku looked at each other, and in shock said ....Chai !!
So this is my Yun Hota to Kya Hota... scene, I do hope u guys like it, but I think this scene had so much potential on screen and could have been used to an advantage at many levels....I dnt fink Baji needed to be there....😡😆
...and I definately don't think that Ayi Sahib and Babi had to tapak at the wrong time, they cud hav figured a better way around dat😡😡 😆
Well girl's u can consdier this my sneak preview of one of my many chapters in my ff, and as these scenes haven't officially made entry into my story you can get a little hawa for it 4rm here😉
If any of u haven't cum accross my ff here is the link, not as gud as Shiplita's and Tintiny's and loads of others here, but it's my attempt, which will be d first and last lol😳
By Tink😉
Edited by tinkerbe11 - 14 years ago
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