FF Suhaag Ki Nishaani...PART 9 PG 31 - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
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so sad.....bechara maan died in geets love.....update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92


OK .

So I read the 3 parts of your ff . You really know how to keep the readers @ the edge 😈 not that am complaining 😆

Loved it , quite interesting 😎
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 3
is Maan alright?
this is getting me more curious.............
bring him back alive..................
cont soon and thanks for the pm dear.................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wanted to share this poem first,I thought it fits cos of the last 2 lines.

Aankhein Khulli ho to chehra tumhara ho,

WHEN MY EYES ARE OPEN,I WANT TO SEE YOUR FACE

Aankhein Band ho to sapna tumhara ho,

WHEN MY EYES ARE CLOSED,I WANT TO DREAM ABOUT YOU

Mujhe maut ka darn a hoga agar,

I WONT BE SCARED OF DEATH IF

Kafan me kaprey ke jaga Dupatta tumhara ho.

IN MY GRAVE,INSTEAD OF A CLOTH,THERE WILL BE A DUPATTA OF YOURS.

Thanks for all the comments,I love reading them,They encourage me to write more updates.Pls do tell me how u think the FF is going.
Part 4

GEET SLOWLY WALKS TO THE STRETCHER AND PICKS UP THE TAWEEZ BUT DOESN'T LOOK AT THE FACE OF WHOSE THERE.

Mum:Geet,Come here!!!!

SHE LOOKS AT THE TAWEEZ,FLASHBACK OF HER PUTTING THE TAWEEZ ON MAAN.

Geet:I gave this to Maan,Hows it here?

Wardboy:Sometimes,items are mixed up.

Geet:Well,they should be looked after.This is very precious to my husband.

Wardboy:Sorry Ma'am,Whats your husbands name? we'll return it to him.

Geet:Maan Singh Khurana.

WARDBOY IS CONFUSED.

Wardboy:But this is-

Mum:Geet,Come.We have to go quick.

Geet:He was saying something.

Mum:Never Mind.Come.

THEY LEAVE.THEY ARE SAT IN THE CAR.

MUM ST:TODAY,WE WERE SAVED.BUT WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW? I CANT HIDE THIS TRUTH FROM HER FOREVER.SHE HAS A RIGHT TO KNOW BUT I DON'T KNOW WHAT SHE'LL DO WHEN SHE FINDS OUT.NOW EVEN GODS STARTED GIVING SIGNS.I DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH LONGER I'LL BE ABLE TO HIDE IT FROM HER.

SHE LOOKS AT GEETS STOMACH.

Geet:Mum!! Mum,whats wrong? What are you thinking?

Mum:Huh? Nothing.

Geet:You know mum,I cant wait to meet pinky and adi.

Mum:Theyre waiting for you aswell.Theyve changed so much.But you just forgot them?

Geet:No but I was busy.I promise after I go back,ill visit every week.

MUM LOOKS AT HER WITH PAIN IN HER EYES

MUM ST:NOW HOW DO I TELL YOU THE TRUTH THAT YOU'LL NEVER HAVE TO COME BACK?

Mum:Come,were here.

THEY WALK IN.2 KIDS RUN UP TO GEET AND HUG HER.

Geet:Adi,Pinky!!! How are u?

Pinky:Were fine.How are you?

Geet:Don't worry about me.Im so happy.

Adi:U just forgot us after ur marriage.What do u and Maan bro do all the time that u never have time for us?

GEET BLUSHES.

Adi:Look Pinky,Shes Blushing.

Geet:Quiet!!!

GEETS MUM WATCHING THEM.

GEET MUM ST:SHE STILL THINKS HER MARRIAGE IS FINE.WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN THE TRUTH COMES OUT?

END

PROMO: CAPS ARE IN URDU/HINDI.

GEET TALKING TO A MAN.

Geet:Look,Stay away from me.U don't know who my husband is and what he'll do.Hes MSK.

GEET:DEYKEY,MUJHSE DOOR RAHYEY.AAP NAHI JAANTEY MEREY PATI KAUN HAI.WOH MSK HAI.

Man:MSK? Hes dead.He died last week in a terrorist attack.

MAN:MSK? WHO MARCHUKA HAI.PICHLEY HAFTEY,USE MAARDIYA TERRORIST NEY.

GEET CRYING.SHE SCREAMS:NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

GEET:NAHIIIII!!!!!!!

Bg:After finding out the truth what will Geet Do?

BG: SACH SAAMNE AANEY PAR KYA KAREYGI GEET?

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Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PROMO: CAPS ARE IN URDU/HINDI.

GEET TALKING TO A MAN.

Geet:Look,Stay away from me.U don't know who my husband is and what he'll do.Hes MSK.

GEET:DEYKEY,MUJHSE DOOR RAHYEY.AAP NAHI JAANTEY MEREY PATI KAUN HAI.WOH MSK HAI.

Man:MSK? Hes dead.He died last week in a terrorist attack.

MAN:MSK? WHO MARCHUKA HAI.PICHLEY HAFTEY,USE MAARDIYA TERRORIST NEY.

GEET CRYING.SHE SCREAMS:NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

GEET:NAHIIIII!!!!!!!

Bg:After finding out the truth what will Geet Do?

BG: SACH SAAMNE AANEY PAR KYA KAREYGI GEET

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part.. gr8 promo.. cant wait for geet's reaction to the truth.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great part
poor geeet. hope she finds out the truth soon
con't soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Luvly part Xx...
Promo sounds very sad---Wonda how Geet will overcome dis truth
Cont soon
Thx 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg...wat will happen wen she will know the truth???????
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zahra15

omg...wat will happen wen she will know the truth???????

Hmmm....Big Twist Coming Up.....
Will she want to keep the kid?😉

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