shade or .....................

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Marriage………or suffering

Silent covering her after this surprising marriage of her and the malik of dhrampour …………..just silent

Santo so shocked so lost in her shock as tears refused to fall down on her cheek refused to allowed her saying no ……no…..even by her tears …………no to this marriage no to this wrong decision

She walk follow him after he left her on the altar of marriage……..she follow her destiny ……painful destiny

Santo slowly slowly walk in refused steps toward the car of him …..Toward the unwanted life …..She scared bec she know he marry her for himself respect …..For his business only and for her nanji respect also nothing more bec she invisible for him ………

Santo walk to her destiny in quite…….. Yet in silent volcano in same time as inside her just many things want to come to the surface…..but silent is all what is there

In other hand dhramraj mahavanchi the power of the mankind ……….today he feels like he scarified himself in this unwanted married ……..

He anger as well as feel shameless from himself to accepting this marriage is just not for him as he loved one women only …………………..subdrah who now be like far away ghost

Dm be silent look away when santo be inside the car and in moment as car move

Their journey begin …………….even if they deny it ………

Santo silent killing her ……..dm anger make him just in other world

Car reach to where is suppose to reach to his house only

Dm get out walking away ignoring her as she also get out look in teary eyes to her new house

Ha it is big but it like jail for her big jail with a husband she hate …………..or in more specific …..With unknown husband to her

She walk in slow tiny steps ………when he point in away make her standing in her place

His finger toward her as his face toward front this action making her feel so unwanted ……….so unwanted

And he enter his home ……..ha his not them as no one wait for her no one want her

Santo standing waiting for what?...............for more pain

Here one of the house servant comes take her to a room which is in back away a bit from house

And opened door for her

Santo enter alone to the empty room nothing there except mat and some dirty and dust

And she alone in her weeding night

Santo enter along her payal cham cham sounds ……………………dm stand up near window look down to where cham cham song

To see santo hands closing the door ………………

It is night time now ……………..

TBC

Hi Sara nice recapitulation.... Visualizing the old story.... But am sure u will bring a nice twist in the story which will be much better than those CVs.... Post the next part soon.

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Santo slowly standing up and start to clean the room from the dust and from the some unwanted things

She make the mat on the floor and open upper window for air the moon light reflect on the floor along on her …………….and what moon light fall in also is her tears which they keep run on her cheeks like river only

Santo start to remove her jewelry one by one with sad only as it is the job of her husband to discovered her to remove all this bangles…… nose ring…… her payal….. her waist chin but her bad luck is to be alone facing this beginning of the unwanted marriage

She change to her simple cotton old sari and sit on mat ……praying

Khdori amm plzz help be to face my new life help me to gain the happiness if I deserved khadiri amm no one here want me or love plzz give me strength to face it all I alone and I u daughter ………one last wish save my family from any bad evil eyes my family and my new family also

And santo lie down hug herself …..And sleep

In other place there up dhramraj sit on his chair thinking of what had happened ……he look up to his only women only love as he thought in his life his pass away wife subdrah

Talking to her

I will never replace ever ………………he sure …….ha he sure this is just to save his owner in village

And dm slept ………………hours pass and the sun raise in new day ….new hope maybe

Santo who wake up with sun light falling on her face

Open door lightly looks outside as covering her half face ……….wander how life going on here ……………

She saw mandier and tulsi tree slowly santo walk toward the tulsi plant she found the holy water and pour the water while praying

She done when suddenly shout come from nowhere ………..santo look around and hide it is moti shout on champo for not collect the drying pepper …….

Here santo hear him coming in fast saying with his scary and in same time safe voice

Dm: what is happening here????

Motiben: noting nanka……….she smile saying

U had u breakfast?

Dm: not yet look around in some tension look to santo slight open door of her room

Moti not like this unwanted girl she will show her

But why her brother tension………………

TBC

Superb Sara.... I think u r writing the story from another angle..... Very good.... Go ahead.

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Some moments

Moti not like this unwanted girl she will show her

But why her brother tension………………

M: nanka come on to have the breakfast

Dm: I will u go

Moti not comfortable but any how she goes as champo following her

Dm steps start to move toward the light opening door ………his hand push the door and his eyes scan in the empty strange room …………

Wall as old as there many choppy on them as the one can't recognize what are the true colors of them

The floor with his steps he can feel the dust flying surrounding his

The only window opened to allowed the light of the morning sun full down on her bed or he can say the mat where seem she spend her night as he can see one of her red bangles there on the mat

He also can see the weeding sari also as she put it a side

Why he is here????.............dm asking him self

Why u bothers to come she is nothing for u so why u feels guilty ………….

He put his hands on his waist look around to the room ……..and sigh confessed one

Then as he was about to walk out when he saw her half body as she standing hiding her half face with her sari edge

As nothing so clear on her except her eyes which looked straight to him for second only …….

Her soft calm voices reach him

S: malik u here? ………….u need something

His face stone but his inner is eating him by his guilty his unfair his maybe wrong decision …………

Dm: no………..in stone hard voice ………..I need nothing

And he walk away not try at all to touch her

Santo tears start to fall down …..What is destiny playing with her she not know

She start to walk inside to her only place in this big house…..her empty room

After half hour champo knock the door and opened

Chamop: malkin malkin …

Santo look at champo wandering …malkin ?!

Ch: malkin u here

Malik send this for u …………..malkin

Ohhh she is malkin

S: na na I not mallkin call me santo

And she took what champo bring …….some sheets with pillow as some lamp to not stay in dark …………and some food

Ch: I bring the food and u marry malik so u malkin na?

S: u so sweet

Ch: no I am not sweet I champo :D

S: champo ……..u work here

Ch: ha from long time

And both be comfortable talking with each other

Santo for first time have smile since she enter this house

She has her food and she washed her plate by herself as there some place out to wash the plates and cooking staff

She notice there is a lot unwashed plates so she start to wash them

santo working with happy face

As she finished she sit near the door of her room …….time pass slowly as she sit there no one talking to her like she unvisible…..and suddenly there some children pass in front of her who are them ? To her self

The young boy notices her and run to her

Young boy: who is u?

S: santo

The girl who follow the boy: who santo?

S: just santo

Both : u new servant

S: maybe…….

Dm voice reach them as he coming from out

Talking in phone

Dm: ha ha bhi ha

Both children: papa

And they run inside

Santo to herself …papa …..She shocked …….he have kids ….tears start appear

As dm enter he walked in some dirt

Cutting the call he says

Dm: omg what this dirt

Santo in quick take bowel full it of water and run to him she without thinking sit holding his feet and washed………….

TBC

Hi Sara... I wanted the same to watch..... bcaz I wanted dt DM should come once to see the condition of the room of his wife...... After all he got married to Santu and it was his duty to take care of his wife...... U have fulfilled my dream....... Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write the next part soon..... I am re freshening my memories.

Originally posted by: cuckoo_chand

Hi Sara... I wanted the same to watch..... bcaz I wanted dt DM should come once to see the condition of the room of his wife...... After all he got married to Santu and it was his duty to take care of his wife...... U have fulfilled my dream....... Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write the next part soon..... I am re freshening my memories.

awww chucko happy u loved