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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful part dear🤗, wow i can feel Bandini essence again😳 do continue & update soon😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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mauhhhh alll happy u enjoyed

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Confessed and happy

Dm sit near her on the bed for second staring at her and wander why she did that they not even her children …..he himself not give her anything or any value …….he treat her worse than animal

Why she so good why ????

Here he just stare at her more as she sleep and he confessed…………when wind light one come throw the window making the curtains fly in away as like it try to said something to open someone eyes

The wind her make some of her tresses fly on her face and then silent flow …………dm notice her tresses on her lips on her closing eyes make the prefect pic of beauty of angles

To himself ………………..maybe she did all that bec she is not real

And like he scared to go forward in the unknown road of this relation……..like he scared to come closer this unknown women dm who lost in his mess

Slowly slowly bring his hand closer to her warm face try to remove her tress without touching her skin

But in the moment of no one see him as he thought ……….his fingers touch her lips refused his thought of not touching her

As no one see ………..but what he not know that santo wake up hide behind closing her eyes

Feeling his finger was like shocked moment for her……for both of them

They near but in same time they so far far away from each other scared from them self from what destiny made them to be in same relation in married one

Like god try to say something for them something they just not get it yet

And dm hands move to up word moving her hair from her closing eyes in the slowest way ever like he enjoy and the fact he enjoy

But why???? …………..shocking question as someone drops water on him he back away from her in so stronger way

His eyes look in shock not from who lie on bed but from himself and his eyes move to look at her photo subdrah photo

Dm can't understand anything except what he done is unfaithful to his subdrah his love

To again his eyes move to santo with question

Really it is unfaithful realy ?????/

But how is there is his……………his wife ?....santo

His thoughts cute with a calling

Here voice from out come

Baa: dhramraj dhramraj

TBC
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Lovely part dear😍, hope their relationship start with luv😳, update soon dear🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
HI Sara I have read parts 4, 5, 6 together. It was just like a film to me..... Fantastic writing..... Post the next part ASAP.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing......
DM and santu are made 4 each other
plz cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
😛awwwwwwwwwwwww so sweet sara awesome one next post next soon....... 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thoughts……………

Baa keep calling him …….and he give santo last look before he go out from the room smiling for baa who notice something on dm face in dm eyes……………….what she don't know dhramraj look different and she asked

Baa: when u will transfer that girl from u room?

Dm: ohhh………..i will transfer her but doctor said she can't be moved now as she soo tired and u know baa she done so great by saving my children and I will sleep in gust room

Baa be silent and then she take so deep breath looking to dm he start to change he start to …………..oh stopped ……..baa to herself ….nothing like that…..

And dm walk with baa to down to have dinner as all are there also his children who in moment were about to go and the rest ………….dm to himself all here laugh eat as usual as everyday but why I feel like something missing

Why i feel I still there stand in front of her looking at her ………..look at her so tired body lie throw the sheet his sheet of his bed ……his sheet lucky to hug her his sheet lucky to feel her his, …………..dm stop stop from this thought stop u not even know her she just u …………..your what ………..and dm take breath as he keep eating …………..and dinner finished all went to their work and as usual he be alone

Dm smile a sad smile to himself as this is what his life in real went ……….lonely and darkness

His steps took him to his room his hand push the door of his room and he saw her there lie as he left her

But something is different ………..she not there his eyes was playing with him there is the sheet and nothing else

Her payals music reach his ear and dm walk to his window to see her shadow moving in tiredness way ……………

She just not well yet

And dm walk in big steps toward her …………toward where he heard her body hitting the floor ,

Santo in the same time to her self

I nothing I just so nothing to anyone ……….why he keep me there why and she fall

Ohh my body tired ohhh why I can move my body to that room the ……….ehhh ehhh not even could be called room

When she felt his hand around her body warmed her body by just a touch

And there eyes meet but no words been said

And dm carry her back to his room

TBC

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sara awesome am enjoying your take on Bandini... have found my bandhan in your writing😊👏 continue soon and keep us bonded to SanRaj forever😊😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: cuterosy

Sara awesome am enjoying your take on Bandini... have found my bandhan in your writing😊👏 continue soon and keep us bonded to SanRaj forever😊😳

awwwwwwwww happpy u enjoyed
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Posted: 14 years ago
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So beautiful written dear🤗, I can feel back my Bandini in a new avatar😳, keep us touch with them😍

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